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1、词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to k

2、eep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. T

3、o express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classma

4、tes. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Dont be late! Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the ha

5、ppy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

6、在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非

7、富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. Im glad to tell you something about my school life

8、. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my sch

9、ool, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对

10、学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师的帮助；3.获得交换生机会； 4.参加志愿者活动

11、。不开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。未来展望1. 升上理想的学校；2. 能结识更多朋友；3. 请你补充（至少两点）My Life At SchoolHow time flies! Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At School Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the ju

12、nior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as vol

13、unteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wi

14、sh I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话

15、，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对

16、未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luck

17、ily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。4书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经

18、意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze. _ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear

19、 Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the d

20、octor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me,

21、 I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? Im looking forward to your reply.这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一

22、下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分

23、成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures t

24、o reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。5书面表达某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句

25、翻译。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。.（适当发挥一至两点）现在环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。将来希望（两点）1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the

26、years.In the past, _【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution an

27、d the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year

28、.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句