1、修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1. It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, o
2、thers were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well. Immedi
3、ate, I raised my hand.2.When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to
4、us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.3. During my last winter holi
5、day,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also ha
6、d a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.4.The summer holiday is coming. My classmates
7、and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowl
8、edges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.5. Organic foods are usually more expensive, makes people unwilling to spend the extra money. Besides, they do have ce
9、rtain advantages. To begin with, farmers doesnt use harmful chemicals on organically grown foods. As matter of fact, this is one of the reasons that organic foods are more expensive. Without such chemicals, they need more care to stay health.Organically grown foods also had more nutrition than regul
10、ar ones because the soil is careful done in a higher standard. According to study, organically grown foods provide with 21.1 percent more irons and 27 percent more vitamin C than regular ones on the average.6. Yesterday I went to see a film with my best friend Kate. We set off at 1:30 in the afterno
11、on and plan to arrive at the cinema before 2:30 so that we could watch the 3:15 show. The traffic was terrible bad. That made it even worse was that our bus broke up on the way. They stopped a taxi but rushed to the show. “Two ticket for 3:15,” Kate said, put the money on the counter. The film start
12、ed at the moment we sat down in the cinema. It was an exciting film and we had great time yesterday afternoon.7.Dear John, Im so pleased to receive your email.I feel exciting to know you dream becoming a professional football player.I am looking forward to see an international football star,John.Im
13、surely you will succeed. As for me,teaching was my dream job.The reason for this is why I would like to share my knowledges with my students and help them solve problems.Besides,staying with students helps to keep me young.To realize my dream,I have to devote me to my study and enter an normal unive
14、rsity. What will you do for your dream and who is your most favorite football player? Yours,7. While reading the newspaper two months ago, I was learned there was an organization naming Sole4Souls. One of the aims of this organization is to collect shoe to help those in need. My interest for shoes s
15、tarted when I learned there were children all over the world which couldnt attend school because they didnt have shoes. I learned that the pair of shoes could actual change someones life forever. However, I began to collect shoes with some of my friends. Believe it or not, we had collected more than
16、 500 pairs of shoes so far. Im excited to be making difference in the world. At the same time, Im amazed at the support that we have received.9.Recently, Chinas Ministry of Education said that college students should took a year to start a company and do other valuable things. That has reminded peop
17、le with the idea of a gap year. If you had gap year, what would you do? The following is what Xiao Xin said that. I would take advantage for the year by learn independent life skills that I dont have at the moment, because I am going to leave home and live hv myself. Next I would take part in some v
18、oluntary activity from which I would learn the happy that can come from contributing to society. Whats much, I would spend more time with my parents.10.Dear Jenny, Welcome to my school! When you arrive, there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to f
19、eel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting anything that interests us. The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see people selling kites everywher
20、e because our city was home to kites. There are many kinds of kites to choose from. So isnt it the good idea to buy some for your friends? Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule. Best wishes.Yours,Zhang11.As is known to we all, Americas national pastime is baseball. It has play
21、ed in the country since the first settlers arrive. It was a national ball what was liked by many Americans at that time. Although baseball possibly developed from an English game, it is now thought of like an American sport. From the Little League to the Major League, player of all skill levels enjo
22、y testing their power on the “ Field of Dreams”. Famous players, exciting music but the standard stadium food of hot dogs, popcorns and peanuts are popularly among Americans. In a fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing for many Americans nowadays.12. All students from
23、our class go to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition.While listen,we made some notes carefully.We felt excitedly and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were both inspired by the various exhibits
24、,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country. The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations.13. In my school life, a most unforgettable
25、person is my math teacher. Not only did she helped us in class but also after class. I still remember the time that I got a “B” in the final exam. I liked math best but the teacher took pride in me all the time. However, I failed. I felt so disappointing that I lost my energy and confident. Then one
26、 day, I happened meet her in the street, and my face turned red right away. She told me not to give up and encourage me to work much more harder. Later, she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math. In addition, she cared for my feelings. With her help, I made greatly progress.14I got on
27、 my hike to take photographs of the nature. It was my school project what had to be finished today. I woke up much earlier than usual and left my house. It was still darker outside. When I arrived the lake, it was just at daybreak, The sky was pink but the sun was rising over the water. I sat on a r
28、ock next to the lake and watched the fish swimming in the water, listened to the birds singing in the nearby wood. Sudden, I realized I have left my camera on the bike. I returned to get them. Now, I could take pictures.15.Jiaozi (Chinese dumplings), mainly with meats and vegetable fillings, is a tr
29、aditional Chinese food, dated back to about 1,500 years ago. China had been perfecting the art of dumpling making since the Ming Dynasty. The Spring Festival marks the start of a new year, but people choose to eat jiaozi to express theirs wishes for good fortune. By the tradition, family members get
30、 together to make dumplings. Approaches of cooking Chinese dumplings varies from place to place. There is no set rule as to which makes dumpling fillings. Whatever the fillings, the wrapping skill is essential to make jiaozi look attractively.参考答案 1.答案: It was Monday morning, and the writing class h
31、ad just. Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eagertake part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, The classroom is a place for learning and that leaning from textbooks, and as well., I raised my hand.解析:本文为记叙文。文章主要介绍了写作
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