英语专业四级作文范文参考Word文档格式.docx

1、本题是一道分析利弊/差异型的题目，说明大学生毕业后去当村官有什么好处 ，可以按以下思路展开 ：先对这种现象表示肯定，是一个必然的趋势，然后列举大学生为乡村带去的好处（新概念 、新技术等 ）以及大学生从这种工作中得到的收获（更广阔的发展空间、人生价值的实现等 ）。范文赏析Today the issue how college graduates should choose their careers has aroused public concern. Some time ago, it was reported that some college graduates chose to wor

2、k as village ofcials. To this peoples attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.引言部分：作者提出这样一个现象：有些大学生毕业后选择当村官，对此人们看法不一，并直接说明自己的观点：这是明智的选择。On the one hand, college graduates can contribute a lot to t

3、he development of the countryside. Firstly they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged.On the other hand, thes

4、e graduates can benet a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are ghting fora handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can nd themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.主体部分：这部分分两段从两个方面分析。先说明大学生对乡村的发展有贡献（采用总分总的结构），然后说明大学生当村官也能为自己找到更广阔

5、的发展平台（采用对比的手法 ）。不同的手法使文章富有变化，不单一。Therefore, collegegraduates working as village ofcials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.总结部分：作者用 therefore自然地带出结论：这是个双赢的选 ，应受到鼓励。这与首段观点呼应。亮点回放1. arouse public concern: “引起公众 的关注” ；此句也可以写成People are concerned about

6、 how college graduates should choose their careers. 不过本文的写法更为正式些 ，另外public也可以用popular替换 。2. differ sharply : “有很大/ 明显 的区别 ” ；此句 同学们通常写成 ：different people may have/hold different attitudes/opinion about this相 比之下 ，本文的写法更简洁正式些 。3. wise: “智慧的、明智 的” ，常见搭配为a wise choice。4. contribute a lot to: “非常有助于/对 有

7、很大帮助”；近义词可以用help a lot或者be a great help to。5. apply: 此处表示 “应用、使用” ，比简单地使用use更能体现出作者对词汇的灵活把握 。6. introduce: 常用作介绍 ，此处表示引进新 的概念 。7. gap: “裂缝 、缺 口、差距”；常用于 “代沟、城乡差距 、贫富差距 （generation gap ，the gap between the city and the countryside ，the gap between the poor and the rich ）”等词组中。8. bridge: 常用作名词 ，此处作动词用

8、，表示 “缩短之间的差距” ，非常形象生动。9. fight for: “为奋斗、争斗” ，此处近义词为compete for 。10. a handful of: “少量的” ；比简单地使用a few要来得形象生动。11. win-win: “双赢的” ，常用的搭配为a win-win situation/choice。英语专四作文范文参考在校打工Work While StudyIn some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Supp

9、ort your opinion by using speci c reasons and details.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.本题是一道观点选择型A/B 的题 目，论述在校青少年打工是否适合 ，本题可以从 以下两方面入手 ：思路1：青少年应该打工虽然打工会 占用他们 的时间 ，但也可以为他们带来好处 ：123思路2 ：青少年不应该打

10、工虽然打工会有一定 的益处 ，但是弊端更多 ：In many countries it is common for teenagers to take part-time jobs while they are still in high school, while in other societies this is virtually unheard of. n my opinion, students benet more from a more balanced lifestyle, which may include working at a part-time job. There

11、fore, I believe that it is a good idea for students to work while studying.作者先提出这个争议的话题 ，并开门见山地亮出自己的观点：青少年打工是有益的。While it is true that a students most important goal must be to learn and to do well at his studies, it does not need to be the only goal. In fact, a life which consists of only study is

12、not balanced and may cause the student to miss out on other valuable learning experiences. In addition to bringing more balance to a students life, part-time work can broaden his range of experience. He will have the opportunity to meet people from all walks of life and will be faced with8 a wider v

13、ariety of problems to solve. Furthermore, work helps a student to develop greater independence, and earning his own pocket money can teach him how to handle his finances. Finally, a part-time job can help a student to develop a greater sense of responsibility, both for his own work and for that of t

14、he team he works with.主体部分 ：作者采取了欲扬先抑的做法 ：先肯定学生的主要任务是学习，然后驳斥那种把学习当作学生惟一目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以列举法的配合使用使作者的观点非常有说服力。For all of these reasons, I rmly believe that most students would bene t from taking a part-time job while they are in high school. Of course, they must be careful not to let i

15、t take up too much of their time because study is still their primary responsibility.总结部分 ：作者用for all of these reasons 做承上启下的连接，并再次重申自己的观点 ：只要不占用太多时间，打工是个益处多多的事情。1. virtually: “几乎 、实际上” ；近义词有nearly ，almost ，practically ，nearly和almost是常用词 ，virtually和practically更为书面些 ，同学们在写作时可以尽量使用后两者 。2. unheard of:

16、“没听说过的” ；这里要注意hear of （听说 ）和hear about （听到 ）之间的区别 。3. balanced: “平衡 的、均衡 的、和谐 的” ；常用搭配有balanced diet/life/development 。4. consist of: “包括” ；近义词有be composed of ，be made up of。5. miss out on: “错失 、错过” ；此处很多同学会误用成miss ，该词的使用能体现出作者对词组的良好把握 。6. broaden : “扩大、变宽” ；常用搭配为broaden the road/experience/vision （

17、拓宽道路、增广见识 、开阔视野 ）。7. all walks of life: “各行各业”；people from all walks of life表示 “来 自各行各业的人”。8. be faced with: “面对” ；相当于have to face或者be confronted wih 。9. finance: 财源、资产” ；该词 的使用能体现出作者较大的词汇量 。10. take up : “占去” ；近义词为occupy ，注意这里很多同学会误用成take。11. primary: “首要的、初级的” ；这里表示首要的，这里的primary responsibility与上段

18、中提到的only goal其实是同一个意思，不过使用不同的表述方式能使文章富有变化。此处的primary也可以用chief，major，sole等替换。英语专四作文范文参考大学生创业College Students Starting Their Own UndertakingsNowadays many college students choose to start their own undertakings after graduation and this practice is encouraged by the government. What are the possible r

19、easons behind this phenomenon? Whats your view of it?In the second part, provide reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.本题是现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目，探讨为什么那么多大学生要创业，并给出自己的观点。可以从以下几方面着手：1. 关于原因方面 ，可以正面说明，或者给出创业会带来哪些好处 ；2. 关于自己的观点方面 ，先表明态度 ，是赞成还是反对 ，然后简单给出理由。Nowadays there are many college students w

20、ho choose to start their own undertakings instead of nding a job after graduation. The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students. As far as Im concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to this.引言部分 ：作者先提出大学

21、生毕业后不去找工作而是选择创业这个现象，然后用as far as Im concerned 引出自己的看法 。The rst factor that should be mentioned is that college students are facing severe employment situations. Many college graduates couldnt find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses. Another equally important factor is that

22、some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own companies.Besides, the governments encouragement and the medias reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students enthusias

23、m to take this way.在主体部分，作者陈述了三个原因，分别使用了the first fact or，an oth er equ ally important factor和besides 来连接这三个原因。As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings. However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, the ability to endure

24、 hardship and a feasible project. Therefore, they should think it over and make full preparation before deciding to start their own businesses.作者用as for me来引出自己的观点，与首段不同；作者认为创业是个不错的选择，但是应仔细考虑并做周全的准备。1. undertaking : “事业 ，企业 ，保证”；此处作 “企业”解 ，文中表示“创业 ”的表达 方式很多 ：start their own undertakings ，set up thei

25、r own businesses ，running their own companies ，start their own businesses等 。近义词的使用使文章不单调，充满变化性。2. practice : “练习，习惯，业务”；此处表示 “做法 ” ，常用的搭配还有international practice（国际惯例 ），best practice（最优方法 ）等 。3. preferential: “优先的，特惠的”；此处也可以使用favorable terms来表示“优惠条件”。4. facilitation measure: “便利性措施”。5. an array of:

26、“一系列的”；近义词还有a series of ，a number of ，a set of等 。6. integrated: “综合的，整合的”；这里指“综合性 的因素”。7. ambitious: “野/雄心勃勃的” ；此处也可以用enterprising （有事业心的，有进取心的 ） 来代替 。8. run : 通常同学们只用该词的常用意思 “跑 ” ，此处表示 “经营 ，运 营” ，近义词为operate ，manage等 。9. stimulate: “刺激 ，激励” ；此处可以用motivate ，inspire ，rouse来替代 。10. cause: 常用作动词，此处作名词，表示“事业 ，事情”，也可以简单地使thing来表示。11. determination: “决心” ；通常考生会使用make up ones mind来表示 “下定决心做某事”，