1、批改网评语批改网评语篇一:批改网高分表达itgoeswithoutsayingthatwhereasonlywhenourconditionisrougherwillthestudyingabroadbecomemoresignificant.acaseinpoint,wecanhaveit.onaccountofanaccident,hehardlycanachievethisspectacularprojectandnottomentiontherewardhecantakepridein.what'smore,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatstud
2、yingabroadisofconsequence.Foronething,onnoaccountcanwebeindifferenttoother'spainsincetheymightgothroughsomesurge.Thatisthereasonwhyweshouldhugandcounselthemtorestoretheirconfidence.Fortheotherthing,wemayaswellgoallouttolendthemahandandtakeadvantageofourlovetoilluminatethedarknessoftheirheartsasw
3、ell.Foryourinformation,itislovethatcontributestotheharmonyandwealthinessofanation,thatresultsinourpowerandabilitytotacklethechallengeandfinallycopewithitonceforall,thatleadstoaconsiderablenumberofpeoplestruggletoachievetheirgoals.what,more提高文章连接性studying4.1whenthereislove,therecomeshope.修改学习提示易混词汇:a
4、ffection,love,attachment均含“爱,热爱”之意。4.2Thepicturedepictsacommonsenseofalampbrighteningthedarkness,tellingaphilosophytousastolove.修改学习提示易混词汇:lamp,light均有“灯”之意。4.3aswecansee,evidently,lovecomparedtobealampandwhenthedarkersurroundingis,thebrighteritwillbe.修改学习提示易混词汇:enclose,encircle,envelop,fence,surrou
5、nd均有“包围”之意。4.4Thedrawingisundoubtedlymeaningfulandpaystothinkthathasweeverattachimportancetolovesurroundingus.修改学习提示易混词汇:consider,think,believe,count,deem,reckon,regard均含有“认为”之意。第4段5.1itgoeswithoutsayingthatwhereasonlywhenourconditionisrougherwillthelovebecomemoresignificant.修改优秀词汇whereas意思是然而,是经典转换
6、话题类词汇。学习提示易混词汇:significant,important,momentous均含“重要的,重大的”之意。精彩句型itgoeswithoutsayingthat意为:不用说.,很明显.。类似的表达有:属于经典高分句型,(itis)needlesstosay(that),itisobviousthat,obviously,.。用得很棒!5.2acaseinpoint,wecanhaveit.修改闪光短语acaseinpoint意为:一个恰当的例子,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!拓展辨析动名搭配have.it在语料库中出现过34次5.3onaccountofanaccident,hed
7、iedoftetanusandhissonwascompletelyparalyzed.修改学习提示accident表示“意外事故”。注意与incident的区别。详情点击闪光短语onaccountof意为:由于,属于经典高分短语。5.4withoutherhelpandaffection,hehardlycanachievethisspectacularprojectandnottomentiontherewardhecantakepridein.修改闪光短语高分词组,nottomention意为“更不用说/别提”,同意表达有tosaynothingof、nottospeakof。学习提示易
8、混词汇:plan,design,plot,scheme,project,blueprint,programme均含“计划”之意。闪光短语takepridein意为:以自豪,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!5.5what'smore,theBrooklynindeedlightuptheworld,sodotheirlove.修改闪光短语what'smore有助于提高文章衔接闪光短语what'smore意思是另外,而且,是经典补充类词组。学习提示易混词汇:earth,world,globe均可表示“地球”之意。第5段6.1asfarasiamconcerned,itisuni
9、versallyacknowledgedthatloveisofconsequence,whilelovingeachotherisourobligationandbeinglovedisourprivilege.修改学习提示易混词汇:acknowledge,admit,confess,recognize,concede均含“承认”之意。精彩句型itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat意思是大家都认为,是经典句型。闪光短语高分词组,beof接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。6.2Foronething,onnoaccountcanwebeindifferentt
10、oother'spainsincetheymightgothroughsomesurge.修改精彩句型onnoaccountcan意思是.绝对不能.,是经典句型。学习提示易混词汇:energy,force,power,might,strength,vigour均有“力”之意。闪光短语onnoaccount意为:决不,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!精彩句型onnoaccountcanwe意为:我们绝对不能.,属于经典高分句型,用得很棒!6.3Thatisthereasonwhyweshouldhugandcounselthemtorestoretheirconfidence.修改精彩句型t
11、hatisthereasonwhy的意思是原因是,是经典句型。学习提示reason表示“原因,理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击精彩句型thereasonwhy意为:.的原因是.,属于经典高分句型。6.4Fortheotherthing,wemayaswellgoallouttolendthemahandandtakeadvantageofourlovetoilluminatethedarknessoftheirheartsaswell.修改闪光短语mayaswell意为:最好,不妨,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!闪光短语takeadvantageof的意思是利用,是经典短语。闪光短语go
12、allout意为:全力以赶;鼓足干劲,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!拓展辨析动名搭配lend.hand在语料库中出现过559次6.5Toconclude,onlywhenwefallintothedarkestplace,willwetrulyunderstandhowpreciousloveis.修改拓展辨析注意conclude和deduce区别。6.6Foryourinformation,itislovethatcontributestotheharmonyandwealthinessofanation,thatresultsinourpowerandabilitytotacklethech
13、allengeandfinallycopewithitonceforall,thatleadstoaconsiderablenumberofpeoplestruggletoachievetheirgoals.修改学习提示易混词汇:battle,war,campaign,struggle,warfare,fight,combat,engagement均有“战斗,战争”之意。闪光短语onceforall意为:一劳永逸地,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!闪光短语copewith意为:对付,妥善处理,属于经典高分短语,用得很棒!篇二:批改网心得解美文美句的能力。比如你写一篇中文作文,有那么几句如泣如诉,恍
14、若天成,那么这篇作文可能因为这句话而上几个等级,但是在电脑看来,这种感性的“感觉”不会存在,最多是,判断一句,然后做出“很好”然后在判断一句“一般”,再判断“好”,你的那句有着修辞用法的句子即使没有被误判为有错误,那么最多给你的作文增加0.5-1分。写到这里,笔者觉察到似乎写得不是很有头绪,也许是因为经验,即使是条例化的经验也是包含在感觉中的,更何况我好似一直在批判?那么,以上的总结可以姑且概括为如果你需要提高分数或者只要分数,那么往下看,如果你认为你只希望提高能力,那么下面你就参考参考,一直用,你的分数高了,能力却不会有什么上升。为了更清楚,我决定分条写,但这样的弊端是相互间联系很小了:先说
15、总体提分,再说具体:1.改的次数。要是没有吃苦的精神,又不是高帅富白富美,那么要拿高分,不吃苦怎么行。一篇作文不改到90上你良心要是安宁,那么,祝贺你,你将有好的心态到老并很有可能是一事无成到老。有同学说了,我基础差,好,那么也要上85,这是底线!那么,怎么改,首先你英语基础不能太差,有同学说我就是很差怎么办,我就是高考英语没及格怎么办?能怎么办,什么都别说了,开始学呗!怎么学?首先语法上,不要求你现在拿回高考的选择题做,100道能对75道以上,你至少要对错误有基础意思。红色错误,一定要改!这是原则一。因为类似于编程,erroring一定是违背基础语法的,这类问题你不能总是说“批改网有问题!“,也许有问题,不过笔者也只是遇到过某个单词它太笨或者太低级,不认识过于专业的单词或者英美式对于某个东西各有各的说法,但是它只认识一种,举个例子enterogastricdisease,肠胃病,但是它不认识,换成intestinaltractdisease吧,它又说要the?当然,我觉得批改网要求加上介词的情况比现实中美国英语要多。也许它是习惯了莎士比亚时代的那个the的富含量?哈,开个玩笑。总之,红色错
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