高考英语书面表达专题第5讲 人际关系类Word格式文档下载.docx

1、 2.词数100左右，开头和格式已经写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：人际关系interpersonal relationshipDear Editor, Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends._Yours ever,Li Hua【思路构建】【教师寄语】（本部分供教师备课使用，可酌情删去或保留） 本文是一篇要点总结式表格类作文。写作形式则是书信，时态以一般现在时为主，人称应以第一人称为主。要点： 1.交友的意义：以一定的高度概括交友的意义以

2、及交友对自我人生和社会的重要程度，即建立良好的人际关系，构建和谐社会。 2.交友对象：从自我的角度选择出交友的对象，如学习上的朋友应该做到互帮互学，共同提高；生活上的朋友应该做到互助互利，摆脱苦难；情感上的朋友应该做到彼此倾诉烦恼，分享喜悦等。 3.如何交友：可根据自身的特点提出两至三点交友的方式。 除了给出的首句之外，以三段的写作模式展开叙述。第一段阐述为何交友；第二段表述清楚交友的对象，即从三个方面进行甄别确定对象；第三段告诉人们如何交友。根据提供的信息进行整合加工。【自我挑战】（本部分结合学生程度，可跳关。）第一关：考眼力。（审题主要从三方面入手，分析基本信息，找出写作要点和明确段落组织

3、。由教师带领学生边分析边勾划，段落组织部分可用汉语口述并记录关键点）1、基本信息。（勾一勾）题型囗书信囗电子邮件囗演讲稿人称囗第一人称囗第二人称囗第三人称时态囗一般过去时囗一般现在时囗一般将来时话题囗日常活动类囗人际关系类囗兴趣爱好类2、写作要点。（划一划）良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。3、段落组织。（填一填）（汉语口述，记录关键词）开头：_正文：结尾：教学提示：教师检查学生任务完成情况，对学生的错误及时纠正。第二关：考文采。1、遣词。基础词汇翻译。（中英互译）交友harmonious观点/看法取得进步摆脱emotionally高级词汇连线。（词汇匹配）we know figure ou

4、tbuild as we all knowsadness sorrowbeneficial establishwork out of great benefit答案：make friends；和谐的；view/opinion；make progress；get rid of；情感上教师检查学生任务完成情况，基础词汇翻译完成不好的同学应增加考纲内基础词汇量的积累；高级词汇连线完成不好的同学应增加高级词汇的拓展。2、造句。最近我们班有一个关于中学生如何交友的激烈讨论。_ our class _ _ _ _ _ on how middle school students should make fr

5、iends.交朋友可以帮助我们建立良好的人际关系,并构建一个和谐社会。Making friends can help us _ _ _ _, and _ _ _ _.在生活中，他们的朋友会在他们遇到了麻烦的时候帮助他们摆脱所有的困难。In life their friends will help them _ _ _ all the difficulties when they are _ _. 如何交朋友是我们应该找出的一个激烈的问题。 _ _ _ _ is exactly a heated problem that we should _ _.Recently, have had a he

6、ated discussion; establish good interpersonal relationships, build a harmonious society; get rid of, in trouble; How to make friends; figure out.根据学生任务完成情况，进行单词或短语方面的查漏补缺。3、谋篇布局。（连词填空）In life their friends will help them get rid of all the difficulties when they are in trouble. _ emotionally their f

7、riends can listen to them attentively and share their joys and sorrows. _, how to make friends is exactly a heated problem that we should figure out（根据文章逻辑排序。In life their friends will help them get rid of all the difficulties when they are in trouble. People always have their own views about this.

8、And emotionally their friends can listen to them attentively and share their joys and sorrows. Some people think that their friends can help them make great progress with their studies. _And，However；根据学生任务完成情况，进行连词或语篇逻辑方面的查漏补缺。第三关：考语法。 Recently our class had a heated discussion on how middle school

9、students must make friends. Making friends can help him establish good interpersonal relationship and build a harmonious society. We should make three kind of friends. First kind should be those who are in great benefit to our studies, so we will help each other and make great progress. The second k

10、ind should be those related to our life. No matter when we have difficulty deal with problems in terms of life, they can help rid ourselves of the problems. The last kind should be those who can listen us attentively and share our sorrow and happiness. I think so long as you can put your friends int

11、erests in front of you and care about them, you will have a lot of good friends. Recently our class had（have had） a heated discussion on how middle school students must（should） make friends. Making friends can help him（us） establish good interpersonal relationship（relationships） and build a harmonio

12、us society. We should make three kind（kinds） of friends. First（The first） kind should be those who are in（of） great benefit to our studies, so we will help each other and make great progress. The second kind should be those related to our life. No matter when we have difficulty deal（dealing） with pr

13、oblems in terms of life, they can help rid ourselves of the problems. The last kind should be those who can listen（to）us attentively and share our sorrow and happiness. I think so long as you can put your friends interests in front of you（yours）and care about them, you will have a lot of good friend

14、s.根据学生任务完成情况，进行语法方面的查漏补缺。第四关：我的作品。答案不唯一。根据学生习作的完成情况，针对词、句、篇、语法等方面的弱点进行查漏补缺。【范文赏析1】 As we all know, making friends can help us establish good interpersonal relationships, and build a harmonious society. People always have their own views about this. Some people think that their friends can help them

15、make great progress with their studies. In life their friends will help them get rid of all the difficulties when they are in trouble. And emotionally their friends can listen to them attentively and share their joys and sorrows. However, how to make friends is exactly a heated problem that we shoul

16、d figure out. In my opinion, we should learn not to judge people by their appearances but to contact them by heart. Besides, we need to be friendly and care about our friends sincerely.【亮点点评】用词准确，语言地道、流畅。大胆地使用了一些高级词汇和短语。如：establish good interpersonal relationships,build a harmonious society, make gr

17、eat progress, get rid of, emotionally, share, judge和contact等。句型多样，富于变化。最后一段中的how to make friends is exactly a heated problem that we should figure out是较为复杂的句子，how to make friends是“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”构成的句式，其后又含有that引导的定语从句，修饰先行词a heated problem，使整篇文章上升了一个档次。【范文赏析2】 Making friends can help us establish good

18、interpersonal relationships and build a harmonious society. We should make three kinds of friends. The first kind should be those who are of great benefit to our studies, so we will help each other and make great progress. The second kind should be those related to our life. No matter when we have d

19、ifficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid ourselves of the problems. The last kind should be those who can listen to us attentively and share our sorrow and happiness. I think so long as you can put your friends interests in front of yours and care about them, you will have

20、 a lot of good friends.一句简单句阐述了如何交友。此处使用了so连接的两个并列分句，其中第一个分句中使用了who引导的定语从句，从句中又使用了of great benefit, 提升了文章的表达档次。该句使用了No matter when引导的让步状语从句，从句中还使用了“have difficulty doing.”结构，以及高级词汇deal with，in terms of等。此处使用了so long as引导的条件状语从句。【我的笔记】本部分为学生把自己的作文和范文对比后，摘抄的好词好句或者对自己作品的升级。_【话题素材】人际关系类常用词语友谊类：get to kn

21、ow sb.认识某人know sb. well对某人熟悉make friends with sb.和某人交朋友a strong personality个性很强personal matters私事a close friend一个亲密的朋友trust each other相互信任understanding理解，谅解sharewith sb.与某人分享be loyal to对忠诚keep in touch with sb.与某人保持联系develop the friendship建立友谊strength the friendship加深友谊帮助类：get help with从获得帮助helpwith

22、帮助help each other互助give a hand帮忙take great pleasure获得极大的快乐a good international relationship良好的人际关系be friendly to对友好care about关心社会类harmonious society和谐社会pay attention to social morals注重社会公德play an important role in发挥重要作用be of great benefit to对大有好处live in harmony生活和睦sustainable development可持续发展人际关系类常用

23、句型1. The complexities of interpersonal relationships bothered her.人际关系的复杂情况使她困惑不已。2. She is my close friend.她是我的密友。3. He has difficulty with human relations.他的人际关系不好。4. We became great buddies.我们成了非常好的朋友。5. I hope to know more friends and I also hope to find a close friend.我希望认识更多的朋友，也希望能找到一位知己。6. He is my sworn brother, and his business is min