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1、1）当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 2）大学生缓解压力的方式有 3）你一般都是如何排解压力的?How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?_ 关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文 Todays college students fa

2、ce many pressures, mainly from parents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some stude

3、nts lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a c

4、lear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Finally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, youd better turn to professional psychological guidance. 2As to me, my p

5、ressure is mainly from future employment. 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal

6、 job after my graduation. 【亮点点评】 1although引导让步状语从句。2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。3“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。4表示目的。5“扬长避短”。6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。7动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。8“超出范围或能力”。9强调动词believe。佳句临摹 1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很

7、多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we

8、should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you a

9、re allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2）分析产生该现象的原因 3）针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 Credit Cards on Campus _ 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2

10、点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have 1gained more popularity among college students. 2With banks more focus on college market, 3an increasi

11、ng number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it. 4The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. 5Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, 6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money

12、 for their domination. 5Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 5Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. 7Drawn by t

13、hese policies, many college students apply for credit cards. 5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. 5However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and

14、even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. 5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. 9Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards. 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。 2“随着”，介词。 3“越来越多的”。 4用于引

15、出原因。 5过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 6which引导非限制性定语从句。 7表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。 8“由此，因此”。 9“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card. 临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 2.佳句： A credit card can help

16、 those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。 3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.在就业压力的迫使下，一些大学生开始自主创业。 【KEY】1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a m

17、ore and more important role in the society. 2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment. 3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.（关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions: F

18、or this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?1）随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了 2）但是很多人反对这种说法 3）你的看法是，为什么?Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?_ 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路 提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时

19、了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文 With the improvement of the living standards, many people are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is alread

20、y out of style. 3However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold

21、 that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. 6As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe 7 “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 5In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. 5Besides, there are still millions of Chinese 9living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. 5Therefore, 10it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】 1“不再”。2表示递进。3引出