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1、4）词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time, when

2、 I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me in a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In th

3、e past, I never said I love you to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in your life，take care of, all the time，have problems with，in order to，work h

4、ard，from morning to evening，be ready to，in need，in the past，get better results等。而复杂并列结构In the past, I never said to you. But today is your birthday, I want to say it to you loudly.和You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient

5、enough to help me and encourage me./ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2（上海市澧溪中

6、学初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重现”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。当昨日重现之时，在脑海里的都是回忆。记忆中有没有让你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对你现在的生活造成了影响。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）used to be./make sb do sth/

7、in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldnt say any words in publi

8、c. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you dont have to be perfect but wh

9、en you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Fathers love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意选取一个给你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，对

10、你现在的生活造成了影响。结合自身经历，谈谈你当时的经历以及现在的感受。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式：用第一人称来叙述故事内容：时态采用一般过去式为主，叙述过去的经历，叙述完整清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do ones best；with the support of。句型：suchthat；sothat引导的结果状语从句；whenever引导的从句；used to do。3（广东中考模拟）假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个

11、网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。内容包括：1.简单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grad

12、e 3 in China. Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same p

13、eriod of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. Whats more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.Im looking forward to your reply!这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。

14、文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅

15、。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this w

16、inter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the

17、 Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。4（辽宁初三） 生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. _【答案】There are alway

18、s some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. Whats more, she cares for

19、 the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students. She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter

20、how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness为定语从句。【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她

21、仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。5（山东中考模拟）书面表达下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of

22、 interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people dont pay attention to hygiene. Theres rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, p

23、eople should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现

24、在时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景，而是无数晃动的头。句子What you see at the seaside做主语。【高分句型二】In my opinion, when tr

25、aveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。该句话运用了not onlybut also。6（下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。小林和小刚之间的对话，让你 想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。1. 完整描述图片内容； 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。 写作要求：1. 可以

26、根据图片信息，进行适当的发挥；2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 提示词： 手提电脑 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Childrens Day gift. Xiao Lins mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gangs dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envie

27、d them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school

28、 things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。首先学生们应仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的

29、观点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发挥，使文章更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。最后短文中句式结构文章