1、 I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours,Li Hua改错3My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on the TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also gi
2、ve us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the ga
3、me.改错4The Problem with TelevisionNow I cant watch much television but a few years before I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a days work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme
4、while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. 改错5Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on the Sunday. Id li
5、ke very much come but had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it. Ill spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So Im really sorry that I wont be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. Ill take this chance to wish you won
6、derful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!Yours,Li Ming改错6 The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didnt matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage
7、the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people presence! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English .teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize
8、is hanging in the library.Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 改错7I used to love science classall of thembiology, chemistry ,geography, physics. I think I liked those classes because of I felt that it helped me . understand what the world works. For example, when I was a chi
9、ld , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). In one class, I learned it rained. I think science classes clear up mysteries. But then there is always more mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? That was maths. After learn the basics of the subject, nothing other seemed very practically to me . I
10、 never saw how I could use it in my daily life.改错8 Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sistersin any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dear of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me do any work at family; the
11、y want me to devote all my time to my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own da
12、ughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.改错9 My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with others people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn t find it. Then he ate it all by himself. He never
13、 helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four oclock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, hel
14、ps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.改错10Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain
15、. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel atthe top of the mountain. The f
16、ood was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.改错11What should you do when your parents become angry? If your parents got madly, try to have a conversation with them about it . Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will
17、 try to change, but they will take some time because they get angry all their life, and that is all they know . You might have to change for your. method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they dont expectlike cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors.
18、If this doesnt work , bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.改错12Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children m
19、ay not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoying themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 televisio
20、n commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to wantthings that they dont real need. 改错13When I first learned to write with English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher
21、 advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class
22、. They all said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.改错14Dear Ralph,Im a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficulty for me to do things well as them. Im sure they will laugh to me and se
23、e me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesnt seem to work. Can you tel
24、l me about what I should do? Xiao Wei改错15There are advantage for students to work while 1. _studying at school. One of them was that 2. _they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _students working to earn money for their own 4. _use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _to spend on anything as if
25、 they please. 6. _They would have to ask their parents for 7. _money or for permission to do things by 8. _the money. Some students may also to save 9. _up for our college or future use. 10. _改错162005浙江卷At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I
26、just 1. _checked the results because I thought that was dull 2. _to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each 3. _other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the 4. _World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch 5. _his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this 6. _gam
27、e of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down 7. _to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my 8. _dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football 9. _is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!10. _改错172005重庆卷It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our 1. _
28、neighbor had written, or try to see what mark he has received 2. _without being permitted. It is good manners for them to help 3. _each other if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it. 4. _In examinations and in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest 5. _and foolishly to help or to ask help from others. When one student 6. _does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not agree 7. _to examination system, but at prese
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