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1、t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.In my opini

2、on, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容

3、提示讲述自己团队合作的一次经历并发表对团队合作的看法。2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，讲述经历主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述自己团队合作的一次经历叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：plays an important part in；had a really hard time with；feel stressed out；at last；by myself; because of; am worried about; in my opinion; communicate with; broaden our horizon; to sum up。句型：it做形式主义主语的句子

4、；it is said that句型；how引导的感叹句；and表示并列的句子；when引导的时间状语从句。2 . 你校正在开展主题为“What should a good student be like?”的讨论，校园小记者采访了一些老师和家长。请根据采访内容，结合自己的观点，用英语写一篇短文与大家分享。1、用上表格中所有要点，可适当发挥，100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2、不得引用或抄袭试卷前面阅读材料中的语句，否则不予赋分；3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分；4、请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。What should a good student be

5、 like?Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think_【答案】Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for teachers, they think that on the one hand, we should love our country and follow

6、the school rules. On the other hand, we should get on well with others and treat others politely.As for parents, we are supposed to be not only healthy and happy but also kind and confident.As far as I am concerned, to be a good students, we should protect the environment because we only have one ea

7、rth.Even if there are many different ideas about what should a good student be like, we need to do what we should do.本文属于话题作文，主要讲述不同的人认为一个好学生应该是什么样子的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如on the one hand.on the other hand、follow the sc

8、hool rules、get on well with、as for、be supposed to、not only.but also.、as far as Im concerned等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如follow the rules，get on well with, be supposed to等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，如：on t

9、he one hand.on the other hand, as for,not only.but also, as far as I am concerned等，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。3 . 书面表达对于中学生在学校是否可以使用手机，不同的学生有不同的看法。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文。观点赞成反对理由1. 易于和父母及朋友保持联系2. 空余时间可以听音乐1. 浪费时间2. 对眼睛有害你的观点及建议（至少用2至3句话进行阐述）1. 文章应包括所有要点

10、并围绕要点适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等；3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. _【答案】Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school studen

11、ts use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, using mobile phones makes it easy to keep in touch with their parents or friends. Second, they can also take photos or listen to music to relax themsel

12、ves in their free time. Besides, they can get information on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and expressions.However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Its bad for their eyes

13、and it also has a bad effect on study.In my opinion, wed better not use mobile phones at school because its bad for our health and study. We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要摆事实，讲道理。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段把支持用手机一方的观点和论据摆出来，进行论证；第三段是反对使用者的观点和论据；最后发表自己的看法。例文采用总

14、分总的行文格式；时态采用一般现在时，论证时采用摆事实，讲道理结合；摆事实时，先主后次，按顺序讲道理，用first, second, besides。转折连词however联系双方不同观点。最后We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.运用情态动词should使文章语气委婉。more and more；look up；keep in touch with； In my opinion；be bad for； instead of。using mobile phones makes it easy t

15、o keep in touch with；句型they can also take photos or listen to music to relax themselves in their free time.。首先要认真阅读题意要求，对于提示内容要仔细分析，从赞成和反对两方面进行论述。如赞成者的观点的论据要充分，反对者的论据要摆事实，讲道理，列举害处。最后一定要表明自己对这一现象的看法，并说明理由。最后提出希望。4 . 根据提示，以“How to keep safe”为题写一篇80词左右的英语作文，要求层次清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。1.文中不能出现真实校名和人名，否则不得分。2.题目和开

16、头已给出，不计入总词数。Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe. _【答案】Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must cal

17、l the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule. We may get hurt or lose our lives if we dont. In short, safety must come first!这篇

18、作文要求我们根据提示写一篇题为How to keep safe的作文，介绍一下在我们的日常生活中，我们应该注意些什么，来保证安全。题目中利用图示告诉我们写作的大概内容，从以下的几个方面来介绍：交通安全、饮食安全、遇险报警及其他方面。这些只是对我们写作的一个提示，而具体的内容，需要注意什么，这些都需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，串联成文，还要注意层次清晰，这对于学生们来说是一个难点。其次要注意英语句子表达和汉语的习惯是不同的，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句子结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构，同时穿插并列句和复合句，调整文章的节奏，长句、短句结合使用。同时应注意语句之间

19、使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章有连贯性。这是一篇优秀的作文。首先作文的内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。文章中作者从网上交友、遇险报警、饮食、交通等方面，介绍了我们应如何保证安全，保护好自己。这些内容的安排也比较合理，叙述清楚，有层次、有条理。文中用First, Second, Also, Last but not least等词和短语，将这些内容呈现出来，既使分清了文章的层次，又使整篇文章的内容很连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，动词形式准确，还使用了一些情态动词，如must, should, ought to等。语言得体，语句通顺，句式符合英语的习惯。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的短语和

20、句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.、 Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.、Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule.、In short, safety must come first!等等。5 . 下面是 Li Hong同学在校园QQ群中的留言请

21、你根据 Li Hong的留言和所给的提示，以 Kangkan的名义用英语回复她的问题提示：1学好英语并不难，但学习方法很重要；2根据你自己的体会给她提几条建议（不少于三条）3鼓励她坚持做下去 1必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥2文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息3词数80左右（开头己给出，不计入总词数）【答案】Hi， Li Hong， I want to tell you that many students have the same problem like yoursIn fact English is not so difficult as you think The learni

22、ng methods are very importantHere are some suggestionsFirst， if you cant pronounce well， you can listen to the tape as often as possible and take an active part in the English corner Second， reading is very important， and dont forget to take notes when necessary Third， keeping a diary in English is

23、a good way to improve your writing本文属于话题作文，为李红提几条将英语学好的建议。这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如in fact, not so adj as, as often as possible, take an active part in, a good way to, first, second以及third。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求

24、，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6 . 假如你是来自希望中学的李华，即将开始高中的学习生活，面对新老师、新同学，请用英文做一下自我介绍，可以涵盖以下内容。1.在家和学校的表现； 2.兴趣与爱好； 3.对高中生活的展望。1.除以上内容外，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名，否则不予赋