1、大家可以根据不同的演讲内容来安排自己演讲稿的逻辑顺序和结构。二、开篇出彩,结尾有道演讲稿的开篇和结尾往往需要花费大量的功夫去设计,这往往是精彩演讲的亮点所在。因此,在写作时,需要结合受众、场合和演讲内容等,争取一开始就紧紧抓住听众的注意力和兴趣所在,结尾时,尽量做到意味深长、启发思考。下面,我将给大家具体分析基本的开篇和结尾模式,供大家以后写作参考。开篇的目的是要吸引听众,乔布斯在该篇演讲稿中使用的是“relate the topic to the audience”(关联话题与听众)的方式,这是一种比较有效的方法,人们一般对自己的事情都很关注,和自己相关的事情也会格外留意,乔布斯在开篇说到,
2、“i am honored to be with you today at yourcommencement from one of the finest universities in the world. i never graduated from college. truth be told, i never graduated from college. this is the closest ive ever gotten to a collegegraduation.”高度赞美斯坦福大学是最好的大学之一,就是在与听众发生关联,让大家产生好感,当然老乔还用了适当的幽默,更好地融洽了
3、与听众的关系,“简洁、有效”本就是乔布斯的演讲风格。除此之外,还有其他的一些开篇方式,我们也需要了解和掌握。 1. state the importance of your topic(指出演讲话题的重要性)。直接告诉听众,你的演讲重要在哪里。比如:今天要做的是一场“英语演讲的艺术”的演讲,那开始就直接指出,该演讲对于大家今后的学习工作将会有重大的帮助,甚至给出一些数据和实例,让听众明白不听这个演讲将会是我的损失。这样,听众就会很乐意投入到该次演讲中去。2. startle the audience (使听众震惊)。例如:要做一场关于“生活方式与疾病”的演讲,开篇就可以给出一组极具冲击力的数据
4、,让听众看到生活方式的不健康将会是多么可怕的事情,这样的震惊使听众能够快速调整状态,投入到听演讲中去。3. arouse the curiosity of the audience(引起听众的好奇心)4. question the audience(向观众提问)。5. begin with a quotation(以引用开篇)。6. tell a story (以故事开篇)。这些基本开篇的方式被无数的演讲证明是实用而且有效的。结尾往往可以起到“画龙点睛”的作用,开篇正文再好,如果结尾过于平淡,整个演讲的精彩程度都会大打折扣。那么如何做到“结尾有道”呢?首先,我们来看看乔布斯的这篇演讲稿,他的结
5、尾比开篇更加出彩,采用的是“end with a quotation”,达到的效果是特别引人深思。他在结尾说道,“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an ea
6、rly morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitch hiking on if you were soadventurous. beneath it were the words: “stay hungry. stay foolish.” it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduat
7、e to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stayfoolish.”他不仅在结尾引用这句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴,虚怀若谷),而且重复三遍,强化听众的印象,这句话也被广泛传播,被誉为该篇演讲的“精髓”。在结尾时,可以用结束信号词让听众明白你要准备结尾了,不要让演讲结束得太突兀,比如,“in conclusion”, “let me end my speech bysaying.”, “id like to close my speech this way.”等。具体的结尾方式很多,常见的有:1.
8、 summarize your speech(总结演讲)。2. make a dramatic statement(强有力的陈述),这个不同于引用他人之言,往往是演讲者自己的沉淀和呐喊,非常经典的演讲是patrick henrys legendary “liberty or death” oration. 他在结尾时说道,”is life so dear, orpeace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course
9、 others may take; but as for mw, give me liberty, or give me death.” 3. refer to theintroduction(首尾呼应)。这是体现演讲内在统一的很经典的形式,值得借鉴。三、观点阐释,有效支撑毫无疑问,主体段的信息量最大,写作量也是最大,如何更清晰地阐释演讲者的观点,有效支撑分论点,是写作时应该把握的关键。在明晰了写作逻辑之后,就要围绕这些逻辑要点来展开论证。乔布斯在斯坦福大学的毕业演讲中,逻辑要点有三:1. the first story is about connecting the dots.2. my s
10、econd story is about love and loss. 3. my third story is about death. 他在阐释中主要运用了以下手段。首先,举例子。文中用了大量的例子来说明他怎么对待学习、工作和死亡,比如他说起自己决定辍学然后旁听有意思的课程,这些课当时对他没什么实质的帮助,但是十年后在当他设计第一款macintosh 电脑的时候,这些东西全派上了用场,这个例子充分说明了他要讲的第一个要点- 串起生命中的点滴。在随后的文中,乔布斯大量地讲述了他事业生活中的例子,让听众感受到真实的力量和鼓舞。其次,引用。他除了在文章最后用到了引用,文中也不乏引用的痕迹,比如在
11、讲到死亡时,他引用了一句格言,“if you live each day as if it was your last, someday youll most certainly be right.”这句话能表明他对于死亡的态度。恰到好处的引用往往能使听众印象深刻。第三,数据。在讲第二个故事-关于爱和失去时,乔布斯用到了一系列数据来支撑观点。他说自己是幸运的,因为,“woz and i started apple in my parents garage when i was 20. we worked hard, and in 10 years apple had grown from ju
12、st the two of us in a garage into a $2 billion company with over 4000 employees. we had just released our finest creation the macintosh a year earlier, and i had just turned 30.”数据很直观,能让听众有直接的认识和理解。除了以上提到的主体段展开方式,还有一些常用的手段,比如:testimony(引证),可以用专家的观点增强演讲的信度,也可以用普通人的一手经验证明自己的观点。另外,大家还需要了解的是,举例分为简短的例子,具
13、体深入的例子和假想的例子;数据包括单一数据,组合数据等等。如何才能更加有效掌握这些演讲写作的要点呢?我有三点建议:1.多看。多看一些演讲素材,比如名人演讲,演讲比赛优秀选手的演讲等,积累大量的一手素材,当然也有必要阅读关于英语公共演讲的书籍,本人非常推荐stephen e. lucas的演讲的艺术。2.多想。学会分析这些演讲之所以精彩的原因,可以从我上面讲的几点入手。3.多练。在有一定积淀和感觉之后,就要大量练习写作演讲稿,话题可以从日常学习和工作中选取,实用性要强,这样练起来更有兴趣和成就感。最后,大家要明白一点,好的公共演讲除了演讲稿要好,还有别的很多因素绝不可忽视,比如:语言质量,肢体语
14、言,视觉辅助,语音语调,临场反应,现场把控能力等,这些结合在一起才能最终让你成为一个优秀的公共演讲者。第二篇:精彩英语演讲稿:我的座右铭i have a super motto. it works like magic. its “just do your best.” i say it all the time. it guides me every day. its helpful in many ways. it helps me face challenges. it takes away my worries. it makes me feel stronger, too. one
15、day i was sick. i had an important test. i was very nervous and afraid. i told myself, “just do your best. give your best effort. give one hundred percent.” then i had courage. i became confident. as a result, i did a wonderful job. please follow this motto. say it every day. you can benefit, too. d
16、ont worry about the outcome. dont compare yourself with others. just do your best. i believe anything is possible. where theres a will, theres a way. so please do your best every day.第三篇:divens 绝对精彩英语演讲稿hi, everybody! my name is diven. first , i want to thank new oriental school for giving me this c
17、hance to make friends with the english learning enthusiasts from all over the country .and as you see, i am an alive and kicking old boy whos ready to get more new friends here. personally, i do love making friends with strangers, through which i get to know stories of them. (time limited) to make m
18、y whole story short, i would like just to share a few of my views on making friends. to us, life is more like a winding river crossing time than a straight road heading toward the future. making new friends is like finding new flowing rivers crossing our own, some of them stirring, some silent and s
19、ome even mysterious. they came as they did, all of a sudden. a total indifference to who and what we used to be! but, for better or worse, we believe each of them is telling a beautiful life story of its own. every life is for what it is worth. sometimes, you will find a few of them could ever be so
20、 incredibly marvellous and attracting that you cannot help yourself drinking some luscious water of them, to absorb instructive and useful elements for your whole life. that is exactly how we are influenced by our dearest friends. every life is beautiful. i hope that when my hair grows white and i l
21、ook back, i can see my life has been full of beautiful interlacing rivers. look, how beautiful they are! i love life. i love beautiful things. i love happiness,however,life is not all about blissful moments. kind of making it up , “past pain is joy “ goes the saying. it is true that only when most o
22、f our young time is gone far away and we take the rest to look way back can we find even those hard times of our lives look amazing; even those time when we were hurt by our loved ones,now we see happy tears . time cures heart and makes it to forgive, believe it or not, but time also can make every
23、life look beautiful ,and time makes love between friends grow fonder. and thats all about it. thanks.译文:嗨,大家好!我的名字叫diven。首先,我想感谢新东方学校给我这个机会来结识各位来自全国各地的英语学习爱好者。 正如你们所见,我是一个准备好要在这里交更多新朋友的“活蹦乱跳”的老男孩。就本人而言,我十分喜欢和陌生人交友,并借此来了解别人的故事。(由于时间所限),我就把我的故事长话短说吧,我想分享一点点关于交朋友的心得。对我们而言,与其说生命像一条朝着未来笔直挺进的道路,不如说它像一条在时间
24、里蜿蜒穿越的河流。结交新的朋友就好像发现了新的流淌的河流在从我们自己的河流中穿过。他们有的激越澎湃、有的静谧无语、有的甚至神秘莫测。他们就这样来了,完全不关心我们曾经叫什么名字,是什么样的人,一切是那么突如其来!但是,无论是好是坏,我们相信他们中的每一个人都有一个属于自己的美丽的生命故事。每个生命都有它自己的价值所在。有时,你会发现他们中间有一小部分竟会是如此惊艳、如此迷人,以至于你禁不住想要喝他们的美德之泉,畅饮不辍,受用终身。我们亲爱的朋友们就是通过这种方式来影响我们。每个生命都很美。我希望,当我的头发开始变白的时候,回头看看,我的生命中已经充满了纵横交错的美丽的河流!瞧,他们多美啊!我爱
25、生命。我爱美丽的事物,我爱快乐。但是,生命并不全是快乐时光。然而似乎是为了弥补这一缺憾,有句名言说道,“过去的痛苦是今天的快乐。”只有当我们大部分的青春时光远远的走开了,我们才会用我们剩下的时间来看一眼远远的身后。现在,就连我们那些艰难的时光也看起来如此令人兴奋;在那些曾经被我们心爱的人伤害的时光里,此刻我们看到了幸福的眼泪。时间治愈我们的心灵,教会它原谅。信不信由你,时间也让生命看上去很美,时间让朋友间的情谊更加深厚。这就是我要讲的,谢谢。第四篇:精彩英语励志演讲稿winston churchills iron curtain speechwinston churchill presente
26、d his sinews of peace, , at westminster college in fulton, missouri on march 5, 1946 .president mccluer, ladies and gentlemen, and last, but certainly not least, the president of the united states of america:i am very glad indeed to come to westminster college this afternoon, and i am complimented t
27、hat you should give me a degree from an institution whose reputation has been so solidly established. the name “westminster” somehow or other seems familiar to me. i feel as if i have heard of it before. indeed now that i come to think of it, it was at westminster that i received a very large part o
28、f my education in politics, dialectic, rhetoric, and one or two other things. in fact we have both been educated at the same, or similar, or, at any rate, kindred establishments.it is also an honor, ladies and gentlemen, perhaps almost unique, for a private visitor to be introduced to an academic au
29、dience by the president of the united states. amid his heavy burdens, duties, and responsibilities-unsought but not recoiled from-the president has traveled a thousand miles to dignify and magnify our meeting here to-day and to give me an opportunity of addressing this kindred nation, as well as my own countrymen across the ocean, and perhaps some other countries too. the president has told you that it is his wish, as i am sure it is yours, that i should have full liberty to give my true and faithf
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