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1、s body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，sothat，for example

2、，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to peop

3、le/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构

4、以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达 初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。在校老师工作认真负责，充满爱心学生 （至少发挥两点）周末作业作业多舍弃爱好其它活动锻炼，电视愿望 （发挥一到两点）要求：1所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more

5、 than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them ar

6、e patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try

7、 to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the mor

8、e carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，no

9、t any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：3书面表达“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请

10、根据以下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。1.种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior st

11、udents, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, whe

12、n on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we ca

13、n to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，whats more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowe

14、rs and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。4书面表达（原创）今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊英语天地对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果

15、进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%）1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun 2.bring people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on

16、line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity

17、of “Grabbing red packets” among students._【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.Abo

18、ut 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of peoples lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They dont have enough communicati

19、on with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, its obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exc

20、eption, it also has some bad effects. If people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. Whats worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这

21、些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；

22、第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of peoples lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、

23、Personally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。5 中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化

24、活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示问题： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chi

25、nese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and

26、how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. Whats more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，W