作文12 吉林卷五年中考英语满分作文解读+素材积累Word格式文档下载.docx

1、As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especiall

2、y on line. Second, dont cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“Self Protection”为题写一篇关于自我保护的文章。题目已给出三个方面要点提示，学生应对几个

3、要点进行叙述。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时或在叙述过去发生的事情时用过去时。文章包含三个要点提示，第一个是结合生活实际来讲述自我保护的重要性，第二个是关于自我保护的一些建议，第三个是号召大家进行自我保护。文章应要点齐全，层次分明，条理清楚，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。2020年吉林中考英语书面表达 假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响；2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议；3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。1. 词数80100词，开

4、头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；3. 可以适当发挥。Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_ I believe well be better students as long as we behave ourselves. Thats all. Thanks for listening.例文一： My name

5、 is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back a

6、ngrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult. How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or

7、 in public.Lets pull together and take action from now on.I believe weThats all. Thanks for listening!例文二： My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. Whats worse, so

8、me students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to peoples health to be better students.We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest stu

9、dents and we shouldnt lie to others.该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep

10、promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；whats worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。句型：I think 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。2019年吉林中考英语书面表达 假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr.Sm

11、ith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划写作要求；1.词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。Dear Mr. Smith, Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you. I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours Sincerely,Li HuaDear MrSmith， Its my pleasure to introduce myself t

12、o you My name is Li HuaI like reading and writingI spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after schoolAnd I have a habit of keeping a dairyI want to be a writer when I grow upSo After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because its about dream job experienceIf I have

13、this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chanceAfter work，I will spend more time making a summary I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文

14、，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，

15、抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。2018年吉林中考英语书面表达文娱、体

16、育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful” 为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。内容包括:1.你所参加的1-2项课外活动；2.课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。写作要求:1.词数90词左右；2.文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。_After-school Activities Make My Life ColorfulNowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many d

17、ifferent kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.In the volleyball club, I ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy w

18、hile playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.这篇作文要求我们以After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful为题，给学校的专栏写一篇文章，内容包括两个方面：首先介绍1到

19、2个你参加的课外活动；然后总结课外活动给你带来的收获和感受。题目中只给出了写作的提纲，这里具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况来补充，并使用正确的英语表达出来。首先要仔细审题，确定写作的提纲和内容；然后确定短文中应使用的人称和时态，通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要以现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。接下来列出文章中可能用到的词汇、短语和句型，把他们串联成句，为提升文章档次，在文章中要有几处亮点，使用高级词汇、复杂句式，如各类从句、非谓语动词等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章具有连贯性，表达更加流畅。这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己喜欢的

20、课外活动打排球，并总结了自己从这项活动中的收获和感受。按照内容划分，短文分成了两段，中心突出，要点明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，第一人称I来叙述，合情合理，语言得体，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子以简单句为主，简洁、明了，也穿插使用了一些复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。语句之间使用了恰当的连接成分，使过渡自然，表达流畅。文章中较好的短语和句型有：There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.、Whether it is hot or co

21、ld, we never stop playing it.、I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.、All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.等。2017年吉林中考英语书面表达假如你是李华，是一名初三学生，2017年被评为“校园运动之星”。你的笔友Jim想请你介绍一下在初中三年里，运动在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些益处和你未来的运动计划。请你给Jim发一封电子邮件。（15分

22、）1运动的益处（至少2点）2未来的运动计划（至少2点）1词数90字左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。Dear Jim ,How is it going? I am proud of being chosen as the School Sports Star of 2017._Yours ,Dear Jim，How is it going？I am proud of being chosen asthe School Sports Starof 2017Now，Id like to share my experience with youI used to be weak and shy，but now I become healthier than before by doing sportsExercise also help