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1、写作备考的三点关键建议首先要学会审题，不要跑题。很多考生认为只要是把字数写够，用了一些比较高级的词汇和复合句就算完成了任务。其实，这种想法指导下的写作在实际考试中很容易使考生忽视把握论证的方向，造成写作扣题不严密，论点表述不完整，更严重还会导致跑题。最近雅思作文题目中争论的焦点难以把握。很多考生看到题目中认识的单词，然后就发挥自己想象，天马行空下笔就写。但是这样的作文无论语言质量多高，也拿不到好的分数。只有把握题目争论重心，才能保证论证有的放矢，获得高分。其次是扩大词汇量的同时，多积累一些好的表达。雅思写作中，要注意措词，大词的使用不是越多越好。许多中国考生总是先用中文写作或是先想中文句子然后

2、翻译成英文文章，想到什么词就用什么词，往往导致选用错了词，使文章晦涩难懂不知所云，或是一个单词重复数次，这些都会使文章大打折扣。如：“越来越”的表达方式。很多考生只要想到这个词就会用more and more，而且对此情有独钟，一再重复。其实，可以用来表达此意的词组还有a growing number of ; an increasing number of等。再者，通篇都是简单句。这是雅思考试的大忌，一定要模仿写一些好的长句复杂句。首尾句要写漂亮些，这样可以吸引考官的注意。但句子的跨度不要太大，中间的句子不要写得太差，这样会让考官大跌眼镜。在写作中要注意：1.变换词性使表达多样化，如，将I

3、dont smoke.写成I am a non-smoker. 2. 使用无灵主语格，即将句子的主语用物来表达。3.使用被动语态，能是表达更加客观，文章更加正式。4. 活用否定句。5. 使用独立主格结构。6. 运用有效的连接手段，如连接词besides, moreover, therefore, otherwise等等使文章更加有条理，结构更清晰。雅思考试作文部分一定要高分开头In our profit-centered society, unemployment has attracted wide attention even from the education field.（背景）Sh

4、ould we only offer elementary（初步） education to those kids or shall we continue to educate them till they graduate from secondary school? What will happen if we deprive them of the rights to continue to be educated when they are still in elementary school（小学）?（提问）In this essay, I will analyze why tho

5、se kids should carry on with secondary education.（间接法）In a recent flight by an A350 from London to the manufacturing base of this type of plane, the four engines just consumed 40 gallons of fuel, which is less than the amount of fuel used by four cars traveling the same distance .（举例）The example wel

6、l illustrates the efficiency of air plane engines over common car engines.（过渡）To be based on hard evidences and sound argument, the essay will discuss why traveling via air planes should not be discouraged.（间接法） Many environmentalists are against the over use of planes for non-essential internationa

7、l traveling; on the other hand, rational realists are arguing that cars are using more fuel and producing more pollution compared with the iron birds.（双方观点，双方要使用具体的人或者学者）Which way of transportation should be discouraged?（提问）The writer will analyzeand prove that.（间接法） 雅思大作文9分范文分析中国人写的雅思作文有结构但语言不够地道；n

8、ative speaker写的文章够地道，但不够雅思！因此，市面上总找不到“完美”的雅思例文。 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some feel that the children of low incom

9、e families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require cl

10、oser examination. （ 58words ）点评： 1+ 1 模式，最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination ，感觉是在抛砖引玉。The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching

11、 money when times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families, those born with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same si

12、tuation in adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education. （100words）点评： 1 +3 模式，第 1 句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段（即分析自己并不赞成的观点）。虽然 4 段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，

13、把让步段放在前面，最后 1 句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确！The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not . Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money; someone skilled in ea

14、rning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this educ

15、ation. （101words）这段的内容感觉写得不够直接，还是在分析对方观点的漏洞！请注意，前面让步段已经这么写过了，那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点，这样从内容上来说更 convincing 一点！此外，需要说明的是，大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度，但是这是要有一定的英语功底才行的！如果英语功底不行的话，建议内容不要写太深，因为那样容易造成考官看不懂你在说什么！A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth. A wealthy child may be well t

16、rained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management; the key to developing this skill is education.最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法，即 education. 它没有像传统的结尾段那样简单的重申自己的观点。总结之总结：全文的观点有待揣摩，作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法，即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the probl

17、ems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. 但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢，还是富人家的孩子呢？！根据文章来看，作者是中立，他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words，整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中，这种写法经常使用，还是非常实用的，大家可以学习一下。此外，文章中有很多好词好句，特别是长句，值得模仿一下。此文9分。 写作常用名言Everycoinhasitstwosides. 有利有弊。manhistaste. 人各有所好。rosethorn. 每朵玫瑰都有刺。Dif

18、ferentstrokesfordifferentfolks. 各有所好。Youlivewithalame,youwilllearnlimp. 近朱者赤，近墨者黑。Hethatlivescrippleslearnsto Awiseandfooltogetherknowmorethanman. 三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮。Lookbeforeleap. 三思而后行。Itistwo-edgedsword. 它是双刃剑。Justasthesayinggoers:“Nogardenwithoutweeds”,computergameshavealsosomedisadvantages. 正像常言所说:“没有

19、无杂草的花园”，计算机也有一些不足之处。Asproverbgoes:“Everysides”,televisionbothadvantages正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”，电视既有优点也有缺点。常用的动词abideby/obey/observe遵守 abolish废除 abuse虐待；滥用 accommodate供给；调节 acquire获取 adore崇拜；爱慕 allocate分配 alter改变 appealto/attract吸引 approach对待；处理 approveof赞成 arise出现 arouse激发 assume承担（责任） attach赋予；粘上 attain/

20、obtain/acquire获取；得到 attend参加；就读 ban禁止 blossom兴旺发达 boom繁荣 bringsb./sth.intofullplay充分调动的积极性 censor审查 characterize以为特色 charge收费 cherish珍视 claim宣称 coexist共存 coincide与相符 collect收集commute来回往返于 condemn谴责 consult咨询 contaminate污染 contribute贡献crackdownon打击 cultivate培养 defy不服从；藐视 degenerate退化 degrade使降级 depre

21、ciate贬值 deprive（of）剥夺 desert抛弃 detect侦查 deter阻止 deteriorate恶化 determine决定 disclose揭露 disvgfcourage使气馁 diversify使多样化 divert使分心 dominate占优势 dropout退学；放弃 eliminate消除 endanger危害 enlighten启发 enrich丰富 entertain招待；娱乐 evaluate评价 evolve演变 exaggerate夸张 exert施加（压力） expel排除；开除 explore探究 exposegive充分发挥 guarantee

22、保证；担保 hamper妨碍；牵制 hinder/impede/block/hamper阻碍 idealize理想化 identify辨认 ignore无视；不理睬 imitate模仿 impair危害；伤害 impose/confine/placerestrictionson/restrict/limit限制 常用的连接词 1）表层次:first, firstly to begin with further in the first placesecond, secondly to start with still furthermorethird, thirdly what is more

23、 last last but not leastalso and then next besidesand equally important too moreoverbesides in addition finally2）表转折：by contrast although though yetat the same time but despite the fact that even soin contrast nevertheless even though for all thatnotwithstanding on the contrary however in spite ofon

24、 the other hand otherwise instead stillregardless3）表因果：therefore consequently because of for the reasonthus hence due to owing toso accordingly thanks to on this accountsince as on that account in this wayfor as a result as a consequence4）表让步：still nevertheless concession granted naturallyin spite o

25、f all the same of course despiteeven so after all5）表递进：furthermore moreover likewise what is morebesides also not only.but also.too in addition6）表举例：for example for instance for one thing that isto illustrate as an illustration a case in point7）表解释：as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namelyin other words8）表总结：in summary in a word thus as has been saidin brief in conclusion altogether in other wordsto conclude in fact finally in simpler termsindeed in short in particular that isin other words of course on the whole to put it differentlynamely i