1、3.听音乐(8人) 4.进行体育锻炼(5人) 5.没有时间放松(5人) 你的观点 哪一种(些)放松方式是适当的?为什么?注意:1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点;2.词数:80-100。题目和开头已为你写好,不记入总词数。The Proper Way(s) for Students to RelaxI am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
2、_满分文(一)The Proper Way(s) for students to RelaxI am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. H
3、alf of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways
4、to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang. 点评:第一段和第二段是叙述表格中的信息,第三段是表达自己的观点。在叙述信息时,作者使用
5、了简洁地语言把意思准确地传达出来;在抒发自己的观点时候,作者详细地阐明了自己的观点。详略得当,衔接自然,结构紧凑,不愧为一篇佳作。积累卡片 英汉互译 好词 1. recently最近 2. suffer 受痛苦 3. pressure 压力 4. proper 正确 5. improve 提高 好句 1. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax.因为我们要学习很长时间,承受着很大的压力,所以每个学生都应
6、选择正确的方法来放松。2. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. 我认为做运动是合适的方法因为它能使我们的大脑和眼睛得到2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全乐山市最近,教育部启动了阳光体育运动,建议全国中小学生每天锻炼一小时,让他们健康、快乐。此项活动受到广大学生的欢迎。李华对所在学校学生参加活动的情况和反映做了一 个调查。请你根据下面调查表的内容,帮他给校报写一篇报道。报道的开头和结尾已给出。词数, 80词左右. Interviewees(调查对象)ActivitiesF
7、eelingsReasonsmost students play sports interestedhave lots of fun many studentsskip rope(跳绳)happykeep healthy some studentstake a walk relaxedenjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom a few studentsworriedhave no enough room(空间)on the playgound;have no enough time to finish homework The “
8、Sunshine Sports program is warmly welcomed in our school ,Nearly all the students have taken part in it.No matter what students think about the program, all the students like the idea which is to make students happy and keep them fit at the same time.The Sunshine Sports program is warmly welcomed in
9、 our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it. Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to en
10、joy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However, a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.No matter what students think about the program,all the students like the idea which is to make them
11、 happy and keep them fit at the same time.本文最大的优点在于,作者在传达不同的学生为什么选择不同的运动的时,所使用的表达方式,比如They think,They believe,They find it good等,避免了重复,展现了语言的多样化。 这并不是每个同学都能做到的,很多同学在表达观点时很容易犯重复的毛病,通通使用I think,这样使文章看起来很乏味,因此,本文作者丰富的表达方式有很大的借鉴意义。1. warmly 热烈地 2. believe 相信 3. fresh 新鲜的 4. fit 健康的 1. They find it good
12、to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom.他们发现比起呆在教室里,呼吸新鲜更有乐趣。2. However, a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.然而,一些学生仍然很担心操场上没有足够的任他们施展的空间,因为他们担心他们可能完不成作业。2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全沈阳市假如你是Chi
13、na Daily 中学生版的记者,请根据下面材料写篇报道。背景:这所学校建于三年前,当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学,后来人们为“希望工程 (Hope Project)”捐款200余万元,当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。现状:教师60人,学生900人,教学楼内有18个教室,另有1,200平方米的操场,微机室,语音室,图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名,学生们都很努力,因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldnt go to school because
14、they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a s
15、ound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.同
16、样,这是另外一篇根据提示信息完成的文章,作者使用了非常准确地语言把提示信息简洁明了地表达出来。本文表达通顺流畅,基本无语法错误,作者能够准确地翻译提示信息中的一些专有词汇,如computer room, sound lab, 可见作者平时还是有一定的积累量。1. government 政府 2. offer 提供 3. pupil 小学生 4. bright 明亮的 5. meter 米 1. Thus the school came into being. 因此学校就成立了。2. The students there study very hard because they all know
17、 that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.那里的学生学习都很刻苦,因为他们知道是希望工程给了他们上学的机会。2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全苏州市假设某英语杂志“奥运来了”栏目正在举办征文比赛。请你根据下面的“奥运会徽”和内容要点,用英语以“中国印-舞动的北京”为题写一篇短文,参加比赛。内容:会徽设计成中国印,名为“中国印-舞动的北京”;印中的“京”字代表北京,像个舞者,向世界展开双臂;印是红色的,下面写有“北京2008”,红色代表好运;“舞动的北京”使你想到.(考生自拟,至少一点)。词
18、数90字左右。短文的标题和开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;短文须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Chinese Seal-Dancing BeijingThe Olympic emblem(奥运会徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The Olympic emblem(奥运会徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing,
19、 August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an important colour for the Chin
20、ese people, and red also represents good luck.I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.作者准确地传达了提示内容所要表达的意思,虽然看起来有点像翻译,但是即便是翻译,也是很到位的,这不是每个初中生都能完成的。在语言方面,作者显得非常地娴熟老练,比如be designed to, a
21、ppear, represent等难词的运用体现作者厚实的积累,此外,作者还非常自然地使用了状语,同谓语,后置修饰语等手法使一句话传达了很丰富的意思。1. design设计2. lively 活泼的 3. important 重要的 4. represent 代表 5. attract 吸引1. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. 它看起来象一个活泼的舞者,向世界张开它的双臂。2 .The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, an
22、d red also represents good luck. 中国印是红色的,对中国人来说,这是非常重要的颜色,红色也代表着好运。2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全湖南怀化市初中阶段的学习生活即将结束。假设你是张华,身在中考考场,回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程,心中充满感戴之情。请根据表中所列信息,用英语给父母或老师写一封70词左右的短信,表示谢意。感谢 对象 FatherMotherMiss Gao参考 用语 take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer upthankful, work hard, try to do better1
23、. 感谢对象可在父母或老师中任选其一,但请避用真实姓名和校名。2. 除表格所列关键词语外,还可适当发挥、举例并抒发感受。3.信的开头和结尾已经给出。Dear _,Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. Best wishes!YoursZhang HuaDear Miss Gao,Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. Youve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When
24、 Im in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, Ive made great progress in English. Im so thankful for your love that Ill work ha
25、rder and try to do better in the future.Best wishes.作者巧妙地把所有的提示词融入到文章中,完整得叙述了对老师的感激之情以及感激老师的理由。本文衔接自然流畅,前后连贯,层层推进。本文最大的特点是作者使用了很多复合句, 状语从句,可见作者对初中阶段的句型掌握地还是很扎实的。1express表达2encourage鼓励3upset伤心的4improve提高5thankful感激的 1When Im in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. 当我有困难时,你常常鼓励我,并
26、给予我很好的建议。2Im so thankful for your love that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.我非常感谢你对我的爱,所以我会更加努力,希望在将来做得更好。2007年中考英语满分作文精品大全天津市日前,由教育部、国家体育总局、共青团中央联合举办了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远。你在本校参与了此项活动,请你根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文。内容 感想 学校师生收看了启动仪式; 开展了一小时的集体体育活动,如:跑步,做操,打篮球等 锻炼有利于强身健体; 运动使大脑休息,学
27、习效果更好; 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子 1. 词数80100个左右。2. 短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。3. 短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节和适当发挥,使短文通顺、连贯。4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。参考词汇:the launching ceremony 启动仪式;build up ones body strength 强身健体more effective 效果更好“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teac
28、hers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises. I think it is a good way to
29、 build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚,表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时,常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀,没有连续性,而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题,运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。1nationwide全国2launch启动3strength力量4effective有效的 1I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. 我认为这是增强体力的一个
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