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1、“No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “At about seven last night.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat（打） him up and sent

2、him into prison. the officer wanted to trap（设陷阱） the farmer into the confession（供认）, but the farmer didnt admit he was the murderer（谋杀犯）.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to b

3、eat him up again. The farmer was lucky .A few days later, Possible answer:Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he was innocent. He must tell people the tr

4、uth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw t

5、he police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison

6、 and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.简评：1. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.这一句可以改为形容词作状语的悬垂结构：Afraid / Frightened, the farmer thought he would be sentenced to

7、 death by killing people.2. He hoped that someone could come and save him.可改成感叹句，语气更加强烈：How he hoped that someone could come and save him!3. .a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. 后半部分词作状语，构成悬垂结构。saying可以换成declaring 宣布; saw可换成witnessed,目击。

8、4. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! 强调句，高级。强调部分还可以加上否定内容使语意更加完整。此处可以用到It was not. but. that .或者It was . rather than.that .即：It was not the farmer but the police officer that killed the man on the snow! 或者It was the police officer rather than the farmer that killed the man on

9、 the snow!5. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. 中took the great courage to 鼓起极大勇气做某事。6. After the investigation, the young man was right. 建议改为：After investigation,the police found what the young man had said was the truth. 7. The police officer was sent into prison and the pol

10、iceman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.最后一句可以适当加上副词。Immediately, the police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired. Eventually,the poor farmer was released and the brave young man was regarde

11、d as the hero by the villagers.读后续写练习（二）I was responding to a call from a small brick flat（用砖做的公寓） in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial

12、 part of town.When I arrived at 2：30 .， the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances， many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transp

13、ortation.Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door.This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance，I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answered a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a l

14、ong pause，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ，like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. The

15、re were no clocks on the walls， no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.“Would you carry my bag out to the car” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab，then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm，and we walked slowly toward the cab.She

16、 kept thanking me for my kindness. “Its nothing,” I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.”4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown” Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she

17、had given me , and it Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown” Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besid

18、es, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice.we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building,where the old lady would live

19、the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give

20、 her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.1.Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. 这一句句式灵活，asked分词作状语,why引导一个宾语从句，后面主语部分也有一个宾语从句。2.We drove through the neighborhood where she and her

21、husband had lived. 定语从句，由where引导。3. and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. 现在分词作状语。4.a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up.两个定语从句。5.When she asked how much she owed

22、me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug .时间状语从句。6. It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.强调句。读后续写练习（三） A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his of

23、fice, a street urchin（顽童）, called Tom, was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir” Tom asked. “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” Jack answered. Tom was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it cost you nothing Sir, I wish” He hesitated（犹豫）.Jack thought of c

24、ourse（路线）, he knew what Tom wanted, but what Tom said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” Tom went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at Tom in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride（搭车） in my car” “Oh yes, Idlove to,” Tom answered.After a short ride, Tom t

25、urned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house” Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what Tom wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps（台阶） are” Tom asked.

26、1所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。He got out and ran up to the steps. Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard Tom coming back, but he was not coming fast. To

27、m was carrying his little crippled（残疾的） brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car. “There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didnt cost him a cent. And some day Im going to give you one just like itthen you can see for yourself

28、all the nice things in the Christmas windows that Ive been trying to tell you about”Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride., looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “Its more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”读后续写练习（四）Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for