初中英语书面表达考点+例题全面解析Word下载.docx

1、3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I

2、invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls

3、ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.Im sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introdu

4、ce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable lif

5、e with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2（湖北中考模拟）书面表达幸福是什么呢?是父母细心的呵护，是成功时朋友的祝福，是帮助他人后会心的一笑，还是？其实幸福很简单，幸福就在你身边。请你以“Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，让我们分享你的感受

6、。词数：不少于80。温馨提示：l、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：treasure（v. 珍惜），comfort （v安慰），share （v分享）Happiness_【答案】HappinessDad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom comes back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They ca

7、re for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would come soon so that the whole family can get together!话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整

8、，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。3（江苏中考模拟）书面表达中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 - July 14August 15 -August 24A

9、ctivitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace （白金汉宫） visit the British Museum （大英博物馆）watch football matchesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast （黄金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionchangeable weatherwinterCost20,000 yuan16,000 yuan1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由； 2. 结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可

10、以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项；3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。The summer holiday is coming. I think its a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think its a good idea to travel abroad. I have read informati

11、on about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the bri

12、tish museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And its expensive to travel to

13、the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，

14、可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。4（靖江市靖城中学中考模拟）九年寒窗苦，六月备考忙。对于即将到来的中考，同学们既有期盼也有压力。为了让同学们学得开心，学有信心，我校英文报刊将开展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比赛，请你根据提示内容，用英语简要描述并适当表达自己的观点。内容要点如下表：现状概述由于课业繁重，学生压力较大。更注重学生的语言能力，学生难得高分，因此有些学生可能灰心。同学建议我们不仅要勤奋努力，更要改进学习方法。应该认真计划好时间，以便在学业和爱好间取得平衡。你的建议（1-2点，做适

15、当发挥）注意事项：1. 征文须包含表格中所有要点。要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time._【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance

16、ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students language ability, so it is diffi

17、cult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a b

18、alance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, wed better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”为题，用英语简要描述如何面对中考，并适当表达自己的观点。结合所给

19、材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：many students are.，so it is difficult for students to，we should，wed better等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们面对中考会感到担心，接下来介绍学生的现状以及同学们给出的建议，最后表达我的观点。此处from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart

20、, so that, in ones opinion, share.with等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5（天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。5.请就此事谈谈你的看法.要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分

21、已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads 在犹豫不决 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home._【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didnt work at that time, all the traffic crossed

22、the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should

23、learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesitated，but she was afraid，he offered to，Wang Qiang is.等句式的应用。开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过