专题06 书面表达第11期届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编.docx

1、专题06 书面表达第11期届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编2019届高三百所名校好题速递分项汇编（11）之书面表达【安徽省黄山市2019届高三毕业班第二次质量检测】假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的含义;2. 谈谈个人感想.注意:1. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，行文连贯；2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:凿壁:make a hole in the wall_【答案】There is always a picture in my mind

2、. A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldnt afford even a candle, so he made a

3、 hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but wh

4、at is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写“凿壁偷光”的故事。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个故事：假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的

5、含义;2. 谈谈个人感想。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；make a hole in the wall（凿壁），well-known（众所周知的），idiom（成语），afford（买得起），candle（蜡烛），steal（偷），discouraged（气馁的），moral（寓意）及reflect（反映）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很

6、高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有a ray of （一束），come in（进来），be absorbed in (全神贯注于)，spare no effort to（不遗余力）， get discouraged（气馁），pay off (有回报)，take pains to（尽力），get prepared for（为做好准备），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it

7、.”，“状语从句“spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.”，强调句型“It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.”，非谓语动词“The boy, being poor, couldnt afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “st

8、eal” light from his neighbors house to read at night.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。【湘赣十四校2019届高三下学期第二次联考】假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为寒假时间短，没有休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：1. 表示难过和理解；2. 就如何调整状态提出建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Tony,I am sorry to hear that you fail to adapt yourself

9、to Senior 3 for lack of rest in the past short vacation. Moreover, burdened with pressure from College Entrance Exam, you feel totally at a loss. I can really relate to how you feel and would like to offer some suggestions.To begin with, try to relax and find some positive distractions. It is not a

10、good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest. Instead, keep yourself occupied physically and mentally so that you don. have time to be downcast. What. more, it is of great significance to work out a plan and set small targets. As the saying goes, failing to plan is planning to f

11、ail. When you follow the plan strictly and make it a routine, youll achieve a sense of accomplishment day by day, which can guarantee your final success. Last but not least, a best friend and partner of the same grade really counts. It is advisable to turn to him or her and share your sufferings. I

12、believe your friend will surely offer some helpful advice that can give you inspirations. Hopefully my suggestions could be of some help and I am convinced that youll find the way out.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为寒假时间短，没有休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表

13、示安慰，要点如下：1. 表示难过和理解；2. 就如何调整状态提出建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：adapt yourself to（适应），lack of rest（缺乏休息），burdened with pressure（承担压力），College Entrance Exam （高考）；at a loss（茫然）；physically and mentally（生理和心理）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Instea