myschool英语作文十年前和现在的变化修改版文档格式.docx

1、we often keep it clean and it looks neautiful 。we love our school 。my favourite personis my father.my father is a manager of apany.he always tells me to work hard in the school. after dinner,he sits at the table and reads some books.i ask him why he is so hardworking when he leave the school.then ev

2、erytime he tells me if we want to get more and more clever, we must learn more knowledge.i love my father and will also work hard.a tripi went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. it was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way. one of my friends su

3、ddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldnt move any further. nobody knew what to do. one girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area. luckily we brought a tent with us. we put it up and let him rest in it. he took some medicine. then h

4、e drank some water, and ate some food. after a while, he felt much better and we walked on. we all enjoyed ourselves on the topof the mountain.、my teatherour art teather is not too young and not too old .he has black hair two big and black eyes ,a small nose and a big mouth .look, he is wearing a bl

5、ue and white jacket ,a blue hat ,brown pants and a pair of old shoes.he is very funny.he is a good art teather .we all like him .my best friendsbook.i have many friend.do you know who they are?arethey my pet?no.are they my classmates?no. let me tell you:they are my favouriti like books very much.i l

6、ike reading science book,cartoonbook so on.not only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good person in the society,they give me great pleasure. i love books!myschool英语作文十年前和现在的变化_六年级作文之myschool六年级英语作文myschool 六年级英语作文【篇一：小学六年级英语作文汇总】小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 my english teach

7、er miss tang is my english teacher. shes very pretty. she is tall and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in english classes. she is very kind to us. we all lov

8、e her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作 者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介 绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组，以免写出一 些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清 晰、规范等。my days of the week im a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six oclock every day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go t

9、o school at seven oclock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i dont have to go to school on weekend, and i like going swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自 己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调 了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友

10、们写作文时要注意人称 及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟 悉的事情。i can help do housework i am a girl. my name is li ling. im in class three, grade five. im very helpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clot

11、hes. what about you? are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮 助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详 细，到位。小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在 作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。my village my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the village. near the village, there is a fore

12、st. a small river is in front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see some fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain. some flowers and grass are on the mountain. i like my village. wele to my village! 【要领点评】 本文以 “ 我的村庄 ” 为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、 森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉

13、到“我的村庄”的 美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的 特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评 my weekend there are two days on the weekend, saturday and sunday. on saturday, i often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and i often help my mother do some cleaning. on sunday,

14、 i always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. after dinner, i often watch tv with my parents. at that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. we often have a good time. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周 日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午： 舞蹈课

15、下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁周日上午：看望祖父母 下午：阅读晚上：看电视，与父母交流感受：高兴和愉快。我 们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什 么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动 顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感 想。时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述 你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度 过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来 表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床 get up，

16、 和新知识，eg. climb mountains 去爬山中的 un 很容易错写成 nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “i often watch tv with my parents.” 不要写成 “i often with my parents watch tv .” 词量上控制在 50 80 之间。my seasons we have four seasons in a year. i can do many interesting things in each season. in spring, the weather is cool and windy, i can fly ki

17、tes when its windy. and i can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. i like hiking. summer is hot in the north of china, but its not long time. i often go swimming. it can make me healthy and strong. i can also wear my beautiful dresses. fall is a season with harvest. and i can eat delici

18、ous fruits in this season. i can watch the leaves fall. winter es, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. when it snows, everything is white. we can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. and winter is my favourite season, because of the spring festival. i love seasons. i love the natu

19、re. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇短文是描述 “我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、 冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季 节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感 受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以 先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季 节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如： 秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴 近实际。这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以 我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。在什么 季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么

20、。在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个 季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用， 如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控 制在 80 个词以内。my family there are five people in my family. they are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and i. look! grandma is watching tv. grandpa is reading a book. dad is writing an e-

21、mail. mom is cooking dinner. i am doing my homework. i love my family! 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什 么，表达了自己对家人的感情。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进 行时态。句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态 的完整性，即系动词和动词的 ing 缺一不可。a field trip it is a nice day. our class will have a field trip today. the class

22、mates are very excited. look! here we are. therere a lot of activities to do. amy is watching insects. peter is collecting leaves. they want to write a report. mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. tim and bob are playing chess. some of the classmates are having a picnic. there is a lot of del

23、icious food to eat. oh, whos that over there? its miss white. what is she doing? she is taking photos. we had a very good time. ill never forget this field trip. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别 在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元 主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转

24、换、描写感受时用一般现在时。pep 小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 li ying s hobby li ying likes english very much. she works hard at it. she reads english every morning. she likes speaking english. she often listens to the radio. she watches tv only on saturday evening.does she like dancing? no, she doesnt. but she likes drawi

25、ng and singing. her parents love her. and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she says her hobbies make her happy. 【要领点评】 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体 写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的 各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我 们会觉得这个形象很饱满。小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具 体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有

26、所长， 另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有 灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“does she like dancing? no, she doesnt.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就 是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。dont be against the traffic rules i go to school from monday to friday .i go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .i must cross two busy roads

27、.if the traffic light is red or yellow,i know i cant cross the road ,so i wait. if the light turns green, i know it means “go”, and then i w alk across the road .i always ride on the right side of the road .i am never against the traffic rules. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话， 而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什

28、么方式去上学，在上学的路 上是怎么做的，很形象。小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而 要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标 点符号等。i love my family here is a photo lf my family. these are four people in my family. they are my father, my mother, my brother and i. my father is a doctor. he works in a hospital far away. he goes to work by subw

29、ay. my mother is a teacher. she works in a school near my home. she goes to work by bike. after work, they like reading books. who is the tall boy? he is my brother. he is five years older than me. he is a singer. hes now in beijing. he goes there by plane. i love my family.【要领点评】 一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样

30、的命题，我们可能面对几 次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让 一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？ 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先 总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班 方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？ how to get to the science museum we are going to the science museum tomorrow. there is an old thing show in the museum. do you know how we can get to the science museum? the science museum is next to the peoples park. its isnt far from our school. so we can go there on foot .walk straight to the west from