高三英语专题读写任务写作学案第5讲 梁枫感受感想Word格式.docx

1、I felt very _/_/_/_/_ after I readbecauseAs a matter of fact/In fact, I really3. 看完的故事后，我因而感动。After reading the story of I _ _ _4. 阅读这篇演讲稿后，我为那个学生感到非常惋惜。After reading this speech, I _ really _ _ the student5. 知道了关于的故事后，我深深感动了/震惊了。Having _ _ the story of,I was deeply _/_.6. 读完这篇文章后，我对.有了更深刻的了解。_ _ th

2、e passage, I have _ _ _ _7. 看完这个故事后，我对这个男孩感到失望，他Having read the story, I _ _ _ the boy, who8. 读完那篇文章/那个故事的那一刻，我陷入了沉思。我确实相信_ _ I finished reading the passage/story, I was _ _ _.I do believe that9. 让我最受启发/让我印象最深刻的是._ _/_ _ _ was that10. 在我看来，.给我留下了良好的印象/对我的生活有很大的影响。因此，我认为/相信_/_/_,have _ so strong _ _

3、_ me/have had _ _ _ _ my life. Therefore, I think/believe it篇模板读信后的感受（2007广东高考） I _ _ _ when I _ _ your letter, in which I _ a better _ of your excitement over my coming to the world and your sincere hope on my growing. To be _, _ _ the first time _ I had realized your deepest love for me, _ account

4、s for my great appreciation.对中学生活得感受（2008广东高考） As far as I _ _, the details of my life in high school have _ so strong an _ _ me. _ _ _ _ _, I really had a good time in this school, _ I gained a great deal of knowledge and made a large number of good friends. _, I cherished the life of my high schoo

5、l.（2）提高篇：Sentence l: 读完信后，我很感激你说的话，非常抱歉已造成你如此多的担忧。 Sentence 2: 听完这个故事后，我被深深地打动和鼓励，因为与小英雄相比，我有一个幸福的童年。Sentence 3: 从这个故事，我学到了人生的考验对我们的成长非常重要，只有通过面对和克服生活中的困难，我们才能开心健康地成长。Sentence 4: 在读完这篇文章后，我感到很惭愧，在这个故事里，我意识到在成功的路上自律比智商和勤奋更有关系。Sentence 5: 看见孩子们不再被剥夺通过做家务来锻炼实际运用技巧的权利是非常鼓舞人心的和有意义的。Sentence 6: 在我看来，Mike一

6、定会被感动因为他所经历和克服的困难最终得到回报。【导学】（一）技巧点拨就是要求考生在阅读故事后, 表达心情感受, 然后就故事中的人和事发表看法.基本模板是: “感受句 + 就事论事”. 这类要点通常含有 “你读（） 后的感受. 表示心情感受的词有disappointed （失望的）, ashamed （羞愧的）, sorry （惋惜, 难过的）, touched / moved （感动的）, impressed （印象深刻的）, inspired （受启发的, 受鼓舞的）, surprised （惊讶的）, astonished （惊讶的）, shocked （震惊的）”等（二）初级篇例题导写

7、No.11. 说说你读信后的感受. （John 来信说他考上了理想的大学, 你给他回信）首先, 写出主题句, 说出心中的感受: 读完你的信后, 我非常兴奋, 在信里我知道你考上了自己理想的大学.然后, 拓展主题句, 列举成功的原因: your hard work / make your dream come true / different extracurricular activities（课外活动）/contribute to（有助于）your success_ _2. 对暑假做兼职工作的感受。首先，写出主题句，说出心中的感受：在我看来，暑假做兼职工作的经历对我的人生有极大的影响。 然后

8、，拓展主题句，细说具体的影响：learn a lot/deal with some difficulties/become more independent/think it useful3谈谈你知道张丽莉老师的事迹后的感受。（张丽莉老师在车祸瞬间推开学生，自己被轧双脚截肢，人们称她为“最美教师”）知道了张丽莉力币为救学生牺牲自己的故事后，我被深深感动了。然后，拓展主题句，细说感动的原因：deserve to be honored/her bravery and kindness/show the inner beauty_例题导写No.2读写任务：阅读下面的短支，然后按照要求写一篇150词左

9、右的英语短文。 Here is the story going. A boy named Jack suffered from blood cancer and the doctor said he would die soon. But he said he didnt want to die before his dream came true. Jack: had stayed with his father since his mother divorced his father. But her mother would come to visit him each weekend.

10、 And when his mother heard of Jacks serious sickness, she carne to Jack as quickly as she could. Jack was very excited after seeing his mother in the hospital. How nice it would be if father and mother got together again! Then Jack came up with a good idea. Every time mother came to the hospital, he

11、 wrote some messages on a piece of paper with fathers signature, such as “I miss you”, “I wish I could have been nicer to you and so on. And he did the same to father when mother was not beside. One day when they went to Jack together, Jack said sincerely, “I am sorry because all the. messages were

12、written by me, but I heartedly hope you will remarry and wont leave me alone again.”Surprisingly, Jack fulfilled his dream-his parents held a wedding happily. And Jacks health improved.【写作内容】： 1以约30个词概括短文的内容要点； 2以约120个词就“父母和孩子”发表你的看法，内容包括： （1）读完故事后你的感受； （2）和谐的父母关系对孩子的影响； （3）我们应如何帮助父母和睦相处。Part 1：30个词

13、概括 _ Part 2: 根据提示词填空I _（被深深地打动）after reading the story _（因为） I thought highly of the boys bravery. I _（确信） _ was the true love in his heart _ made him face his cancer bravely and have enough courage to reunite his parents. _（的确）, his action reflected a childs desire for a harmonious relationship in

14、his family.（三）中级篇阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, Im amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to br

15、ing you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means lion. Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months ima

16、gining what youd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mothers labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord

17、（脐带） and put you in your mothers arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart. We

18、lcome to the world, Ari. Love, Daddy 写作内容 假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：1以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：（1）读信后的感受；（2）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；（3）表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。 写作要求1作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；2信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容

19、合适，篇章连贯。 _ _ 【展示】初级篇根据括号给出的中文提示填空。_（读完这篇文章后）, I was _（被深深地感动） Pauls life attitude. Paul was quite a good father _ a strong will. His two daughters were both disabled. _（更甚者）, his wife has passed away, all of _, to be honest, was a great pressure to anyone. _（然而）, Paul wasnt overwhelmed by such diffi

20、culty. _（相反）, he enjoyed his life very much. He sang and smiled at his daughters. They had a good time everyday, which was really a beautiful picture.中级篇运用所学句型改写下文1.为儿子学习担忧的妈妈After I read the passage, I quite understand her feelings, but I still think she worried about her son too much. The extra free time may actually help his studies. He can use the free time to relax and have fun, and it can free his mind and his body. Remember the time is not equal to the quality of study. Also, he can spend the free time play his friends so that he can develop the ski