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1、二、内容紧紧围绕社会热点话题。现在最为热门的话题就是科技给人们生活带来的便利及影响，其中科技就涉及到手机，电脑，网络。此类话题通常会有正反两面性。便利需要侧重好的方面进行描述，而影响则需侧重不好的有害的方面展开。如果图画的倾向性不明显的话，可以采用正反对比的形式。而这次四级考试有两个题目一个是人与手机，另一个是人与电脑，从图画的侧重点来看，都是负面性的。此类话题，对于广大考生来讲，比较容易驾驭。因为不会涉及到太难的生词。三、考查重点是语言用词。英语作文一贯的考查目标是是否能够用正确丰富的语言来表达思想。各位考生需要注意的是，在写句子时，首先得保证句子是对的，其次再考虑用不同的字眼表达同一概念，

2、也就是同意替换的能力。因此建议各位考生朋友以后在备考英语时，要有意识地培养用英文表达的相关能力。关于人与电脑这个话题，我们在谋篇构局的时候，可以按三段去写，开头部分一定要对图片进行描述，然后在中间段落展开（注意：本次图画侧重的是负面影响），也可以从正反两个方面进行对比分析。在行文时，要注意文章的层次和逻辑梳理。【参考范文】作文题目一：（电脑对人所产生的影响）破题思路： 第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。第二段：分析该现象的原因。第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。This picture vividly describes that the p

3、erson uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night. What the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people. 这幅图生动地描述了一个人在一天中使用电脑，甚至在晚上睡觉的时候。卡通传达的是电脑对人们的影响。New products are being invented every minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over people in some respects

4、. However, in all these technologies and products, computers have exerted the most important influence on people. Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Now many of my classmates

5、 like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble studying，I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. However, Internet can make some problems at the same time.新产品每天都被发明出来，这一切都将在某些方面对人们有着

6、支配性的影响。然而，在所有这些技术和产品中，计算机已经对人们产生了最重要的影响。有人断言，电脑使生活变得更加复杂和紧张，而有些人则认为电脑使生活更为复杂和有压力人们相信计算机使生活更容易，更便利。现在我的许多同学都喜欢在他们的空闲时间上网。我认为互联网能给我们带来好处和缺点。例如，如果我有一些麻烦的学习，我可以上网找到更多有用的信息。然而，互联网可以在同一时造成一些问题。 In a word, in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful, I feel that t

7、he advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part of everyday life。总的来说，尽管电脑似乎使生活变得更加复杂和充满压力，但我觉得这一优势更加明显，这已成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping.

8、The impact of the computer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it. 显然是从一系列的漫画，描绘一个男人过分地依赖计算机是否在工作和玩耍或在家里睡觉。电脑对日常生活的影响是如此的严重性，这是我们高度关注的问题。展开段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority ov

9、er our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. Whats more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their ha

10、nds if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us. 首先，由于计算机的广泛应用，有些人叫网友总是优先于在现实生活中我们的家人和朋友。每一天的大部分时间，包括我们的时间和精力都花在了互联网上。更重要的是，互联网剥夺了我们与他人沟通

11、的喜悦。当我们的人，我们可以听到他们的声音，看到他们的表达，如果我们愿意的话，甚至可以握住他们的手。最后但并非最不重要的是，电脑会导致我们面对面的沟通技巧的下降。因此，我们可能会感到尴尬，发现很难与周围的人交流。结论段：To sum up, we shouldnt be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication. 综上所述，我们不应该过分依赖电脑。无

12、论多方便和快速，我们都应该记住面对面的交流的优点。This modern life（这种现代生活）As is shown in the above picture, people sit in front of the computer all day and night, even in their dreams theyre still playing computer games. Such thought-provoking phenomenon is, especially among young people, prevail in our modern life. 正如上图所示，

13、人们整天坐在电脑前，甚至在梦里，他们还在玩电脑游戏。这种耐人寻味的现象，特别是在年轻人，在我们的现代生活中占上风。Its true that the computer has brought great convenience to our modern life. However, as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. To begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electro

14、magnetic radiation emitted from computers may cause many health problems, like insomnia, headaches, and even cancer. In addition, when people immerse himself in the world of computer, they tend to pay less attention to the surroundings, and excessive use of the computer means much less chance of fac

15、e-to-face interactions with people who populate their real lives. 电脑给我们的现代生活带来了极大的方便。然而，正如图片中所示，过度使用它可能导致几个坏的后果。首先，有长期暴露于计算机的电磁辐射可能会导致许多健康问题，如失眠，头痛，甚至癌症。此外，当人们沉浸在自己在电脑世界中，他们倾向于较少关注周围的环境，计算机的过度使用意味着与填充其重新的人进行面对面的互动的机会更少了生活。In conclusion, while computers have contribute a lot to making our life more c

16、onvenient, we should use them appropriately. 总之，虽然电脑给我们的生活带来了许多的便利，但我们应该适当地使用它们。作文题目二：（人对手机的过分依赖性）As is illustrated in the picture, a pupil is asking his father why he is going to school if his phone already knows everything. It can be known that the pupil lacks a thorough understanding of going to

17、school. 如图所示，一个学生问他的父亲为什么他要上学，如果他的手机已经知道了一切。这可以知道，学生缺乏一个彻底的理解学校。Compared with the phone, there are certain things that can be only achieved by going to school. In the first place, going to school endows us with the experiences of getting along with others. Only by contacting people can our interpers

18、onal skills be developed. The phone only provides information in an environment where there is just the phone and you. Secondly, you can consult your teacher face to face about any detail of your question, which cannot be done on your phone. Last but not least, school is a place where you can learn

19、to be independent. If you stay with your parents all the time, you will never truly grow up. 与手机相比,有些事情只能通过上学。首先,上学赋予我们与他人相处的经验。只有联系人，我们才能发展人际交往能力。电话只提供信息，在一个环境中，只有电话和你。其次，你可以向你的老师请教关于你的问题的任何细节，不能在你的电话上做。最后但并非最不重要的，学校是一个你可以学会独立的地方。如果你和你的父母一直呆在一起，你永远不会真正长大。To conclude, its a necessity for kids to go

20、to school. It is a truth which should be well acknowledged that school can never be replaced by the phone. 最后，这是一种必要性的孩子去上学。这是一个事实，应该得到公认的是学校是不可能被电话取代的。（人对手机的过分依赖性） In the picture, there is a student talking to his father with the words that“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everyth

21、ing?”How vivid is the picture to show the young generations dependence on high technologies such as the phone. But in my opinion, high technologies cannot replace going to school at all. 在这幅图中，有一个学生和他的父亲说：“为什么我要去学校，如果我的手机已经知道一切？”这幅图生动的展现了年轻一代对高技术的依赖，比如电话。但在我看来，高科技不能取代去学校。Three points can account for

22、 my view. Firstly, without going to school, we cannot learn basic knowledge and ethics that phones are unable to teach us. Secondly, without going to school, we cannot learn skills to make good use of high technologies. Thirdly, without going to school, we cannot learn disciplines and unity with peo

23、ple around us. In school, not only do we acquire knowledge but we learn how to communicate with people. 三点可以解释我的观点。首先，如果不去学校，我们就不能学习基本的知识和道德，而手机不能教我们。第二，如果不去学校，我们就不能学习技能，以充分利用高科技。第三，没有去学校，我们不能学习学科和团结在我们身边的人。在学校，我们不仅学到了知识，而且学会了如何与人交流。In a word, no matter how high technologies are powerful, they total

24、ly cannot replace going to school. 总之，不管有多高的技术是强大的，他们完全不能取代去上学。作文题目三：（父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用 ）Parentsrole in their childrengrowth 漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。可以分析此现象产生的原因。采取措施解决此现象。How impressive thecartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independenc

25、e of the children. Lets take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mothers choice with pride. The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture。这漫画是如何描述的是最广泛的社会现象，关于儿童的独立性。让我们看一看这画，那个女

26、孩告诉她妈妈，她被妈妈选择的大学录取了是骄傲的。作者的真正目的不是绘画本身，而是带领我们去取得在图画背后隐藏的东西。What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, Ill venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace

27、 their children to do everything. In addition, parents dont believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. 它的原因是什么？在下面的句子中，我会去探索的原因。从一开始，中国的独生子女政策已经让越来越多的家长对这一政策越来越重视了孩子们，他们想让他们的孩子做任何事情。此外，父母不相信他们的孩子有足够的能力来处理他们的个人问题，并作出任何决定。There are some

28、suggestions given to our parents。For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I

29、 contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent。有一些建议给我们的父母。一方面，我们的父母是非常重要的，以了解他们的孩子会长大，随着时间的推移有自己的想法。另一方面，应该鼓励孩子单独做一些决定，使他们能够追求自己真正想要的东西。我主张我们的父母应该给他们的孩子一个自由的手在一些问题，以帮助他们独立。（父母在孩子成长过程中所发挥的作用 ）第一段三句话，描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。As is

30、 graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl is talking with her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mother smiles and seems content with this result. Apparently, the cartoon aims to reveal the fact that a majority of modern par

31、ents play an increasingly negative role in their childrens growth. 如图中所描绘的那样，一个年轻的女孩正和她妈妈说话。她讽刺地说：“好消息，妈妈！我被你所选择的大学录取！”然后，她的母亲微笑，似乎满足这个结果。显然，这幅漫画旨在揭示一个事实，即大多数现代家长在孩子的成长过程中扮演着越来越消极的角色。There are several possible reasons accountable for this phenomenon（中心句）. To begin with, family in growing numbers has only one child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their