高考英语书面表达专题二.docx

1、寒假专题书面表达二名言谚语1你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同学的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100120个词的短文：针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法举例说明理由注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: Your future depe

2、nds on many things, hut mostly on you. 【答案】One possible version:In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this; Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future is determined by many t

3、hings, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhoo

4、d. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.【解析】【考点】观点类议论文开放式【写作指导】试题材料新颖，贴近考生实际生活，属于

5、半开放性话题。 对既定的话题进行讨论，考生有一定的自由发挥空间，畅所欲言，各抒己见。论点明确，论据充分是得分的关键。如能灵活运用学过而且熟练的亮点词汇、短语和句型，尽量变换句式，长短句交错使用，并且恰当地穿插一些过渡性词语，使文章自然、流畅，有较强的逻辑性，文章一定会脱颖而出。在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(80-120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。2请品读以下三条关于perseverance (坚持不懈) 的名言 (quote)，选择一条谈谈你对此的理解；并结合

6、一个具体事例，说明perseverance的重要性。A. When the world says, Give up, Hope whispers, Try it one more time.B. You cant go through life quitting everything. If you are going to achieve anything, youve got to stick with something.C. Dont be discouraged. Its often the last key in the bunch that opens the lock.注意事项

7、：1. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。 2. 词数为100120左右。【答案】见解析【解析】A句意：当世界说，“放弃”，希望低语，“尝试再一次。B句意：你不能在生活中去放弃一切。如果你想实现什么，你必须坚持做某事。C句意：不要气馁。它通常在打开锁最后一把钥匙。参考范文：Perseverance is what it takes to achieve ones success. Without perseverance, one may find it hard to realize his dream. Personally, I prefer quote A, which asks us

8、not to give up but stick with what were pursuing. Only by trying again and again can we make it at last. Take Madam Curie for example. To fulfill her academic ambition, she overcame many hardships to go abroad for further education. After her husbands death, she carried on her research work despite

9、a lot of difficulties. Finally, her continuous efforts paid off. She was awarded two Nobel prizes. So, never give up easily when faced with failure. Hold on to your dream and youll surely enjoy a sense of achievement.3美国已故大演说家、”成功学家鼻祖”罗曼文森特皮尔有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈拥有正确的人生态度的重要性

10、,词数120左右。【答案】As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end. I cant agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English,

11、which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. With my teachers help, I improved my English gradually. My story shows that if we have a good attitude an

12、d keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一

13、个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语：cant agree more with不能再同意了，take a positive attitude采取积极的态度， With my teachers help 在老师的帮助下，句式上也是富有变化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the fu

14、ture. 这句话用了宾语从句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me., 这两句话用了定语从句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.这句话用了强调句。考点：考查开放式作文4请阅读下面的名言，并谈谈自己对友情的看法。“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”谈感想 结合自己一次经历 以此为题要求：1.内容必须包括：2.词数：120词。【答案】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is al