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1、6. She backed closer and closer to the end of the diving board. At last falling into the water. （fragment） She backed closer and closer to the end of the diving board, at last falling into the water.7. People waving flags and cheering. Lined the streets for the parade. （fragment） People waving flags

2、 and cheering lined the streets for the parade.8.Many pine trees bear large cones. Which appear in August. （fragment） Many pine trees bear large cones which appear in August.9. Petric is not a nurse, she is a doctor. （comma splice） Petric is not a nurse. She is a doctor.10. She did well in college h

3、er average was 3.9. （comma splice） She did well in college. Her average was 3.911. The ship was huge, its mast stood thirty feet high. （comma splice） The ship was huge. Its mast stood thirty feet high.12.Chemistry has contributed much to our understanding of foods, many foods such as wheat and beans

4、 can be produced in the laboratory. （comma splice） Chemistry has contributed much to our understanding of foods. Many foods such as wheat and beans can be produced in the laboratory.13.Some laboratory-grown foods taste good, they are nutritious. （comma splice） Some laboratory-grown foods taste good,

5、 and they are nutritious.14. The vitamins are adequate, the flavor is deficient. （comma splice） The vitamins are adequate. The flavor is deficient.15.Rain had fallen steadily for sixteen hours, many basements were flooded. （comma splice） Rain had fallen steadily for sixteen hours, and many basements

6、 were flooded. 16.Cattle, fermented beverages, and rare shells have served as money, each one had actual value for the society. （comma splice） Cattle, fermented beverages, and rare shells have served as money. Each one had actual value for the society.17. Sports fans still admire Pete Rose, Babe Rut

7、h, and Joe Namath even though they could not be perfect. （unclear reference） Sports fans still admire Pete Rose, Babe Ruth, and Joe Namath even though these stars could not be perfect.18. When Catherine I became empress of Russia at age forty, they feared more than loved her. （unclear reference） Whe

8、n Catherine I became empress of Russia at age forty, her people feared more than loved her.19. To keep birds from eating seeds, soak them in blue food coloring.（unclear reference） To keep birds from eating seeds, soak the seeds in blue food coloring.20. Employees should consult with their supervisor

9、 who require personal time.（unclear reference） Employees who require personal time should consult with their supervisor.21. Jody found a dress in the attic that her aunt had worn.（unclear reference） Jody found a dress that her aunt had worn in the attic.22. She told my sister that she was wrong.（unc

10、lear reference） Youre wrong, she said to my sister.23. The workers removed all the furniture from the room and cleaned it. （unclear reference） The workers removed all the furniture from the room and cleaned the room.24.Juliet Noble told Susan Torre that she was mistaken. （unclear reference） Susan To

11、rre was told by Juliet Novle that she was mistaken.25. Questions are asked by the students when they do not understand the professor. （shift） Students ask questions when they do not understand the professor.II. Rearrange the following numbered sentences so that they read logically. 1） 1.Stuffed unde

12、r the desk is a woven wastepaper basket overflowing with paper and debris.2.On the right hand side of the room is a narrow closet with clothes, shoes, hats, tennis racquets, and boxes bulging out of its sliding doors.3.As you walk into the room, you are stopped short by my bed which fills half of th

13、e room.4.Against the wall on your left, pushed into a corner behind the head of the bed, is a large bookcase which is crammed with papers, books, and knick-knacks.5.The wall above the bookcase and desk is completely taken up with two small posters. 6.It has a brown wooden chair which seems to fill t

14、he left end of the room.7.My dormitory room, on the second floor of Bienville Hall, is small and crowded.8.The two large windows over the bed are hidden by heavy dark gold drapes.9.Every time I walk out of the door, I think, “Now I know what it is like to live in a closet.”10.Wedged in between the b

15、ookcase and the wall opposite the bed is a small gray metal desk.Correct order: （ 7,3,8,4,6,10,1,5,2,9）2）1.Use three or four of the small logs around the bottom edge to hold the cardboard in place.2.Next, fold some of the cardboard over the paper.3.Then pile the remaining small logs and all the larg

16、e ones onto the pyramid.4.To build a wood fire that requires minimum tending, you need paper, cardboard, kindling, a few small logs, and two or three large logs.5.Finally, light the paper.6.First, you should wad up the paper into a tight ball or roll it into a cylinder and tie it into a loose knot.7

17、.Once the fire is started, it will need only the occasional addition of another log to keep burning for hours.8.Then lay the kindling over it, forming a pyramid. （4,6,2,1,8,3,5,7）3）1.It was at this point that Paul noticed his own car, rolling slowly down the hill - and going too fast for him to stop

18、 it.2.He was so busy chasing his car that he didnt get the name of the driver of the Rover, who just came out of the supermarket and drove away without realizing what had happened.3.As if this was not bad enough, Paul now finds he has no-one to blame.4.Paul, a salesman from London, was driving past

19、a Rover parked outside a supermarket, when he saw it start to roll slowly down the hill.5.It crashed into a bus at the bottom of the hill, and was so badly damaged that it had to be towed away to a garage.6.Paul Scofield was a smash hit in Guildford yesterday, saving two young girls in a runaway car

20、 - but wrecking his own car in the process.7.Another passer-by got into the car and put on the handbrake, saving the girls from certain injury.8.Inside the car were two young girls on the passenger seat - but no driver.9.Paul stopped quickly, jumped in front of the Rover and tried to stop it, pushin

21、g against the front of the car. （ 6,4,8,9,7,1,5,2,3）4）1.And her mouth! It is a small mouth that looks delicate and feminine.2.Her thick, wavy, long black hair gracefully falls down to her shoulders and surrounds her exquisite, diamond-shaped face.3.A small black mole on the left side of her nose add

22、s to her beauty.4.Marie is as beautiful as any Hollywood starlet.5.When she smiles, which is often, her well-formed and even, white teeth brighten up her whole face.6.There is nothing but extraordinary beauty in the face of Marie.7.Her lips are rather thin, but not too thin; her light pink lipstick

23、adds another touch of feminine beauty.8.Her eyes are large, but not too large, with thick eyelashes.9.Her slightly arched chestnut brown eyebrows draw attention to her deep blue eyes, which remind me of a lake on a stormy day.10. Her nose is straight and neither too long nor too short. （4,2,6,9,8,10

24、,3,1,7,5）5）Here you have a jumbled paragraph. Re-organize the sentences so that they follow definite space order.1） As usual Madeline was overdressed. 2） Her hair stuck out from her head in a graying frizz, and black horn-rimmed glasses encircled her eyes. 3） Her white blouse was ruffled at the elbo

25、ws, and her red dirndl skirt was embroidered with black and white flowers. 4） Every inch of her seemed to scream for attention.5） Look, from her ears hung red pendant earrings which bobbled as she talked, and about her thick neck was a matching strand of red baubles. 6） On her feet were black patent

26、 high heeled sandals. Correct Order: （ 1,4,2,5,3,6）III. Rewrite the following story in the form of a dialogue. The dialogue should include at least 10 lines, which means each character should speak at least 5 times.1）1.Peter was almost 30 years old and he still remained single. One day, his friend A

27、ndy asked him why he couldnt find anyone that suited him.2.Peter told Andy that he had dated many nice girls, but his mother didnt like any of them, so he had to keep on looking.3.Andy then suggested Peter to find a girl who was just like his mother.4.Three weeks later Andy met Peter again and asked

28、 him if he had already found a perfect girlfriend that was just like his mother.5.Peter told Andy that he did find one just like his mother and his mother loved the girl very much.6.Andy asked Peter if he and the girl were going to be engaged.7.Peter told Andy that his father couldnt stand that girl at all!（One day, Andy met his old friend Peter in the street）Andy: Hello, Peter! Peter: Hello, Andy. Peter, you know I am always wondering about one question. Wha