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1、reputation；position；mutual understanding相互了解合作，协同的cooperate-cooperative a cooperative effort倾向定位orientation work orientation 理解（别人的工作处境）work核心竞争力 core competence选取，榨取extractFirst, only a few people can deny that students are limited in the books, and they would not be encouraged to know, analyse and

2、 discuss the worlds news. First, teachers opinion can give basic information of what had happened. And, the common sense can tell us that when we want to give some information, we can not give it without our opinion. And we always watch things like this, when a teacher want to share the latest news,

3、 they may add some own opinions without knowing it. But it still open students view.To begin with, few of us would deny that students are constrained to their text books and hardly encouraged to acknowlege, analyze and discuss heated global issues. On the first stage, teachers points offer them a ge

4、neral information of the current happening events. Also, common sense informed me that its kind of impossible to deliver the content without any personal stand. Its not uncommon that when teachers try to share the latest social events, they add their comprehensions unconsciously . But it still opens

5、 up students outlooks.学习一些中国语言的美式表达committed to 致力于network圈子staff人员be the first personhigh complement高度评价officially registered 官方注册little dark 光线不好still at worksemester学期overly dependent过度依赖experience gain经历成长blending in 深入了解anchor主播put theories into practise理论应用于实践lowest point 低谷release the pressur

6、e by step一步步走下压力的台阶figure out 明确recommend to 推荐intership实习eagerness 热望connected dots of your life链接生命中的每一点 the resources of education in China are limitedsuperficial表面overall综合评价comply with legal。physical condition身体状况obey code遵守纪律immeasurable不可估量的domestic 国内的widespread of media 媒体的开放richness富有的人doc

7、umentary纪录片braveness坚韧become a bridge of communication 沟通的桥梁There is another side that we could not ignore, Doing the part time job can make young people suit the society and make them talk better. Before walking in the job position, most of the people that we meet are teachers, friends and relative

8、s, but when we start to work, we can communicate with different levels people, work with them. You should have a good relationship with your workmates, listen to your boss, but not do your job by your mood and emotion like a isolated person. If you are a young people, and you always separate yoursel

9、f from the ourside world, and always think some big problems like human meaning, then you would not know how to talk with people, and how important team communicating and cooperation are. Without any doubt, they would not have a good life, the real world is worse than they think.Another crucial pers

10、pective we should not overlook is that to take a part-time job makes the teenagers be more adept in socialization and communication. Before they getting a position, the most of their partners are the teachers, peers and relatives, while after that, they get to know and cooperate with different socia

11、l class. They are required to be kind to coworkers and comply with the manager rather than behave like an isolated person according moods and emotions. Provided that the teens used a way of cutting off their lives from outside world, and contemplating platitude issues of life, they would never reali

12、ze the way people interact and the significance of networking and collaboration. Evidently, they wouldnt start their ideal adult life as the reality is much fiercer than they imagined.part time jobExcept the availability and the efficiency, when we make the young people to take a part time job to im

13、prove them, there is a big advantage, that is that it can build the right concept and meaning for money. To this thing, we can offer a quite common example in China, when the young people ask for money from their parents, they do not do any homework, and they think that they are deserved. When they

14、find a part time job, for example: waiters, or cook, this will make their account balance. Still, this will make them believe the truth that money comes from hard work and sweat, and money does not fall from the sky.Aside from availability and efficiency, another notable benefit of sending the teens

15、 to part-time job to help them grow up is it informs them the true concept and meaning of money. Take an overview of Chinese situation in this case, the majority of the youth ask parents for pocket money without shouldering household chores, and they take it as granted. To look for a part-time job s

16、uch as waiter or cook equips them the ability of managing their own budget to make ends meet. Also, it informs them the truth that money is the exchange of devotion and perspiration instead of a pie from the sky.1.2016年老题重复非常多机经去练习2.1/3的比重在13%,1/2的比重在873.题型思路目的类比较类今昔比较正负比较独立写作话题分类比重合成自己的写作例子，材料，deta

17、ils4.27分以上的写作差距语法是基础中的基础介词搭配，动词搭配，时态问题，标点符号的使用。写作疑问解答可以拿一些范文就可以拿出来做翻译。名人的例子，接地气的题目当然不可以用名人的例子去讲。基本词汇的替换，你可以把例子写的具体，要好好用，用的桥，不用抽象的生硬的词汇。语法逻辑词汇27分以上的要求，是要结合听力里面的细节。24以下肯定都是有语法问题的。听力综合必须听的全。坚持写，准备自己的段子，30篇分以上，才会写出24分以上的作文。2017.5月杨明随笔：开始动脑筋写好自己的文章和素材价值选择（用逻辑的思考就：原因，必要性可行性利弊比较价值辩）利好（内在价值-外在价值-当前价值-长远价值）所

18、以最后你形成的东西一定是有料语言优美内在逻辑过硬的，所以我们先来分析第一个阶段，你信不信它的逻辑。对热点的盲目追求。【下面是对托福所有话题和思路的高度概括总结，已经完成了工作量的30%】内在：孩子-学生-社会（个-链接）【技能、情操/价值】外在：过去-当前-未来【利（高级一点的说法）弊】现象-描述在总立场确定之前，怎么做到能快速想出分论点呢？我分享一个从慎小嶷十天突破新托福ESSAYS这本书上学到的小技巧。首先，大家需要记一串字符，TM STREEC $大家可能觉得云里雾里，记这个有什么用？不急，且往下看。TeamTrustMindSkillSocializationcompetitionTe

19、nacityPressureRightsresponsibilitiesEnvironmentHealthEmploymentEfficiencyCultureTraditionMoneyEnjoyment发现了吗？以上单词首字母相连就是 TM STREEC， 记这串字符的作用在于，当我们拿到题目感觉寻找分论点没有方向时，可以通过这些关键词进行快速的联想。答主自从学会了这一招，解题速度有了质的提升，再也没有出现过分论点纠结5分钟的情况。具体操作的过程，还是通过举例说明：Do you agree or disagree：The main purposeof universities should

20、 be to teach theory rather than to teach skills that help graduates find a job?Competition：大学教技能可以增强学生的动手能力，增强竞争力Efficiency: 大学教实用的技能可以提高日后的工作效率Skill: 大学教的技能可以迁移到生活中E.G. accouting可以用于家庭理财。交流能力the ability to read is essential in society today,it is highly valued and very important for social and econ

21、omic advancement.1）已经被家长和学校支持和重视even business colleges have begun to recognize the importance of communication skills and begun to oft their own communication classes.2）现代企业 effective communication is critical for the success of any organization,through the use of proper communication skills, indivi

22、duals will be more able to function as a group, thus allowing organizations to share information, to analyze situations and to set goals（同样的，我们转写：sharing is critical important for the success of a company ,through the process of sharing, individuals will be able to communicate their ideas with each

23、other, to function as a group ,thus allowing organizations to function as a group）（seting goals is critical important in society today ,the the process of proper ,they can function as a group,allowing organizations to share information ,be more effective ）感受：就是这些技能之间是可以互换的，是链接在一起的，只要逻辑上没有什么差错，彼此就可以打通任督二脉。理解能力社交能力自信心boost confidence 危机意识cultivate mind 陶冶情操to be well-behaved ，intelligent， considerate，creative，imaginative and useful to societypatriotism爱国主义