英语高考真题和模拟题分项汇编九短文改错类解析卷文档格式.docx

1、 on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历，自己喜欢上了踢足球。从此成了一名优秀球员。第一处：【解析】考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。第二处：【解析】考查定语从句。先行

2、词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。第三处：【解析】考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football前加a。第四处：【解析】考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。第五处：【解析】考查副词。“hard（努力地；费力地）”与“hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）”都为副词，但是词义不同。本句意思为：我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。第六处：【

3、解析】考查固定搭配。“to ones + 名词”在句中表示结果，“to ones surprise”意思为“使某人惊讶的是”。故将surprising改为surprise。第七处：【解析】考查名词的数。“player（运动员）”为可数名词，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。第八处：【解析】考查现在分词。本句句意：操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼，说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。第九处：从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from now o

4、n（从现在开始）”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生动作或存在的情况，不能用一般过去时。此处后面是一般过去时，表示“从那时起”是from then on，故将now改为then。第十处：“踢足球”的英语表达为“play football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。2. 【2019全国卷II】Since I was a kid, Ive considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I wa

5、s in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more be

6、tter after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.Since I was a kid, Ive considered different I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so . Then, when I was in the grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much

7、. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal decided to be a doctor. were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was at the fact that a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor. And the other that I wanted to help people in need. 作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。

8、“job（工作；职业）”为可数名词，用different（不同的）修饰时意思为不同种类的工作，应该用名词的复数形式。故将job改为jobs。【解析】考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked（看起来样）”为系动词，系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。【解析】考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的，所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five改为fifth。在五年级的时候，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师，所以我想变成一名老师。“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思，可与that连用表示“如此以至于”。而“too much”表太多，一般与to搭配，表达否定意思“太以至于不能”

9、。本句话表达肯定意思，非常so much 或very much，故将too改为very/so。【解析】考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at，故在high school前加in/at。在高中学化学的时候，我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。 “重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系，不是选择关系。故将or改为and。【解析】考查there be句型。有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系，且后边句子中的one与the other是对这两个原因的解释。故将they改为there。“amaze（使惊奇；使惊愕）”形容词形式有amazed（大为惊奇）与a

10、mazing（令人大为惊奇的）。本句话中主语为I，句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多，对此我感到惊奇，而不是我令别人惊奇。故将amazing改为amazed。【解析】考查形容词比较级。句中better为well（健康；身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more 加形容词或副词，即more不能与berrer连用。故将more去掉。【解析】考查一般过去时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时，且与最后一句并列的“one was that”用的也是一般过去时，所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。3. 【2019全国卷III】Ive had many

11、 dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like Tang Dynasty. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yours

12、elves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.【答案】 IvehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistocafe.Thoughitmayappe

13、arsimple,lotofideasandefforts.Whatwantnotjustancafebutveryspecialone.cafehavethemesuchasTangDynasty.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyinhistoricalenvironmentcreatedforthem.Ifsucceedone,openmore.wishchaincafesdifferentEachuniquestyle.【详解】【解析】考查不定式的用法。不定式做表语，to后用动词原形。故把 opens改为 open。【解析】考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现代时

14、。故把 required改为 requires。修饰名词cafe，应用形容词。ordinarily 是副词。故把 ordinarily改为 ordinary。【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。want sb to do sth“ 想要某人做某事”。故在have前加to。【解析】考查介词的用法。such as和like都是用来举例子，重复了。故把like删除。【解析】考查代词的用法。customers是句子的主语，故把 yourselves改为 themselves。先行词environment 在从句中做主语，指物，关系代词用that/which。故 把what改为that/which。succee

15、d in doing something“成功的做了某事”。故把manage 改为managing。【解析】考查名词的用法。many different后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。【解析】考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前，a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅音音素开头的单词，前用a。故把an改为a。二、2019届模拟题1.山东省淄博市2019届高三部分学校5月阶段性诊断（二模）考试 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。It can be seen from the picture Mr. L

16、iu，who wears a mask. was walking his dog. Interestingly，his dog which also wears a mask. In recent year，air pollution has become more and more serious in some areas，which have led to severe consequences. To solve this problem，firstly of all，we should raise the public awareness of protecting the envi

17、ronment. Secondly，the government ought to punish the illegal acts as polluting the environment severe. Thirdly，we must do our best to protecting the environment in our daily life. Only in this way can human beings and animals share a pleasant planet or live a happy life. 【答案】It can be seen from the

18、picture Mr. Liu，who wears a mask. walking his dog. Interestingly，his dog also wears a mask. In recent ，air pollution has become more and more serious in some areas，which led to severe consequences. To solve this problem， of all，we should raise the public awareness of protecting the environment. Seco

19、ndly，the government ought to punish the illegal acts polluting the environment . Thirdly，we must do our best to the environment in our daily life. Only in this way can human beings and animals share a pleasant planet live a happy life. 【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了目前空气污染的严重以及所要采取的措施。考查主语从句。从图中可以看到,刘先生,戴着面具,正

20、在溜他的狗。此处it是形式主语，that从句是真正的主语。故在picture 后加that。考查时态。结合句意可知句子用现在进行时态，故把wasis。考查谓语动词。有趣的是,他的狗也戴着一个面具。该句中就一个谓语动词wear，所以就更不存在从句，故把which去掉。考查名词复数。在最近这些年里。此处名词用复数形式，故把yearyears。考查主谓一致。在最近一年,在一些地区空气污染越来越严重,这导致严重后果。此处是前面整个句子作先行词，所以后面非限制性定语从句中的谓语动词是单数第三人称形式，故把have has。考查固定搭配。first of all“首先，最重要的是”。故把firstlyfi

21、rst。考查介词。政府应该惩罚污染环境严重的违法行为。此处表示“所有”，故把asof。考查词形转换。此处polluting是动词，由副词来修饰，故把severeseverely。在我们的日常生活中我们必须尽力保护环境。固定搭配：do ones best to do sth.“尽某人最大努力做某事”。故把protectingprotect。考查并列连词。只有这样,人类和动物共享一个愉快的星球并过着幸福的生活。此处表示并列的递进关系，故把orand。2.安徽师范大学附属中学2019届高三5月考前适应性检测 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；My mom and dad are great cooks

22、, but I always enjoy staying at home and having delicious food. I remembered when I was about six, all the kids in my neighborhood wanted hamburgers and chips, but some didnt have money to buy it. So my father tried to make some on the weekend and asked them eat at my home for the free. The kids wer

23、e very happier. It helped me make lots of friend. Now I often cooking for my parents, and they like my dishes, either. Its really relaxing to sit around a table for my parents, eating and talking together.My mom and dad are great cooks, I always enjoy staying at home and having delicious food. I whe

24、n I was about six, all the kids in my neighborhood wanted hamburgers and chips, but some didnt have money to buy . So my father tried to make some on the weekend and asked them eat at my home for free. The kids were very . It helped me make lots of . Now I often for my parents, and they like my dishes, . Its rea