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1、The picture symbolically depicts that six lovely children from different countries with different ethnicities get together and play games happily in a world of harmony. It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to the most favorable social phenomenon that cultural exchanges ar

2、e gaining worldwide popularity.There are, to my mind, several reasons accounting for this phenomenon of the picture. For one thing, cultural exchanges can enhance international friendship, and people can acquire better understanding of each other. Through cultural exchanges, they can learn of differ

3、ent peoples around the world, what they believe in, how they lead their daily life，and their traditions and customs. For another，cultural exchanges can also greatly benefit the countries involved. That is because countries can share their achievements with each other to stimulating their own social

4、progress and cultural prosperity.Based on the above reasons, I hold that worldwide cultural exchange is beneficial to all countries involved. As for China, the opening up policy has greatly promoted the Chinese civilization to the entire world and vice versa. Therefore, I can firmly conclude that in

5、 the long run, cultural exchanges will contribute to a flourishing Chinese and global economy, as well as diversified cultures.二、人与自然（实物）关系类Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should2） possible reasons for the issue of Saving Land for Endangered Animals

6、3） conclusion.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）There is no doubt that human activity has an effect on the planet. We see the evidence of mankinds endeavors all around us. Overall, it seems that human activity harms the Earth more than benefits it makes. As is viv

7、idly betrayed in the photo above, due to over development, there is limited land being set aside for endangered animals.Absolutely, we should reserve some land for the worlds animals for the following reasons. First, mankinds need for land is constantly growing. If the demand is not checked controll

8、ed in some way, humans will eventually develop all of the earths available land. At that time, mankind will have no more room to grow, and all the wild animals will have disappeared, as well as other valuable resources. Second, humans are able to innovate and can use the land that they already posse

9、ss in more efficient ways. Animals are unable to do this. Once their land is taken away from them, they will die. Third and last, endangered animals are an important part of the biodiversity of our planet. If they disappear, we cannot predict what the effect will be. Therefore, we should treat such

10、animals as a valuable resource to be protected.To sum up, the worlds endangered animals are an important resource and we should protect them by setting aside some land for them. Although mankinds need for land continues to grow, people are intelligent and inventive enough to put the land into use pr

11、operly. In this way, we can have enough land for farming, housing and industry, and preserve the biodiversity of the planet at the same time.三、个人（个体）体验类Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should1）describe the cartoons,2）stating its main idea, and3）giving you

12、r comment.In the cartoon we can see a tall and thin man, along with a short and stout man are using suitable hotpot for dinner. Apparently, the picture aims to emphasize that anything to be done must be measured in advance so that we are able to find a proper way to do it.This same principle applies

13、 to solving any other problem. Firstly, when we want to know the reality of something, we must describe it like it is, getting rid of our prejudices and exaggerations, so that we can have an unbiased view. Secondly, the object should be analyzed in a concrete way so that we can grasp the reasons and

14、 rules of it. Thirdly, we must adapt our approach to solving a problem, for each situation is different from the others. So we must view a problem from different perspectives.The cartoon implies different meanings to different people. A teacher should adopt different teaching methods according to th

15、e students in the class; a doctor should prescribe different treatments according to the patients symptoms; a farmer should seed different plants according to the various conditions of the earth. From a philosophical point of view, dissimilar problems should be approached differently. Good results c

16、ome from attentive analysis of a problem. 四、城市交通思路点拨：此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。图片中，车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上，各种抱怨声不断。毫无疑问，这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。同时，汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多，所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。第一段：描述图画；第二段：分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响;第三段：建议措施。思维拓展建议措施部分，还可以从如下角度提出：呼吁政府：投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。倡导低碳出行：步行、骑自行车。倡导理智选择城市：人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。高分范文How horrible the

17、 traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars

18、。Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the on

19、e hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars has increased the burden of environment and caused

20、 carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportat

21、ion such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。佳作妙译交通状况真是一团糟!这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上，交通堵塞严重到了一定程度，与其说这是一条拥挤的街道，还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车，而私家车却到处都是。虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉

22、重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便，也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面，一旦发生堵车，原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长，除了等没有别的办法，大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面，汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放，这和低碳生活的理念相违背。因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率（保有量）。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。名师点评 it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而

23、不是B。翻译的时候，往往翻译成：与其说是B，不如说是A。反过来，当我们想用英语表达“与其不如”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。实际上，这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。 With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。 exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。相当于定语从句

24、：gas which is emitted by cars（被汽车排放的尾气）。写法：请参考商业行贿点评第条。 taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars（针对私家车被征的税），为过去分词做定语。五、礼到心不到A. Topic: Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay on the topic of loving our parents.B. Word limit: about 200 wordsC. Y

25、our essay should meet the requirements below:1） Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed2） Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon. Your essay must be written clearly.As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, old parents are sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, becau

26、se no one comes back to celebrate with them. Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable and have no appetite, since what they want most is not such material stuffs but the care and love from their children and grandchildren.Nowadays, young men look so busy

27、 and independent in modern society that they will never feel free to live with their parents. They move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a l

28、ittle time to drop in their parents or even just send some presents but dont show up personally like what the cartoon above illustrates. They think that presents can represent their love, however, to the parents, who overcame a lot of difficulties to bring them up, those stuff are far away from what

29、 they really hope for.With the rapid pace of economic development, our old parents feel more and more lonely and unhappy. However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them, because they once gave us so much selfless love that we should return them the same fro

30、m the bottom of our heart. （238 words）漫画中生动地展示了一对老人带着失望与悲伤坐在椅子上，因为没人回来和他们一起庆祝节日。虽然他们收到了子女的许多礼物，但他们感到非常孤独，也没什么胃口，因为他们最需要的并非这些物质的东西，而是子女们的关爱。在现代社会中，年轻人看起来如此忙碌，以至于无法抽空来陪伴父母。他们大多搬出去独自居住，每天忙于自己的事务。在平常的日子里，他们以忙为借口，不愿意花时间去探望父母。在一些节日，他们可能只留一点时间去看望父母或是如漫画中所示的仅仅送些礼物表示心意而无法与父母团聚。他们认为礼物可以代表他们的爱意，但是，对于含辛茹苦把他们养育大

31、的父母来说，这些礼物远远不是他们所期望的。随着经济的快速发展，年迈的父母们感到越来越孤独与不快。因此，作为子女，无论多忙，我们都应该花时间与父母聊天，陪伴他们，因为他们曾经给了我们无私的爱，我们应当以同样的爱回报父母。考研英语作文：句子的润色和修饰下面来谈一谈描述段和阐述段的句子写法，这两个段落在以往的考试中出现的最多，供大家参考。描述段句型的润色修饰 1）There be句型不好说未来考试还会出现什么图画，但是有一点是肯定的，那就是只要还有图画描述这个段落考法，there be句型就是不可回避的。这种句型专门表达某地方有某物，在描述段中出现的可能性很大。一般there be句型的结构是：There be 名词+