原创届高三上学期英语开学测试题分类之六 书面表达.docx

1、原创届高三上学期英语开学测试题分类之六 书面表达高三开学测汇编六 书面表达（一）随着科技的发展，iPad已经成为学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐、阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给你校长写一封信，谈谈你对你校学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容包括以下几点：1使用iPad对学生学习产生的好处。2使用iPad对学生产生的负面影响。3提出自己的建议并简要说明理由。注意：词数120词左右。Dear Sir，My name is Li HuaI am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us studen

2、ts_Yours，Li Hua【答案】 Dear Sir，My_name_is_Li_HuaI_am_writing_to_show_my_concern_about_the_effects_of_modern_media_on_us_studentsNowadays，iPads are very popular in our schoolMany students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashionThere is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download le

3、arning materials，and so onIn other words，its helpful to our studies，especially our English learningHowever，each coin has two sidesSome students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphereWhats worse，some even waste their precious time playing gamesIn my

4、 opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroomI hope you will take my suggestions into considerationI am looking forward to your early replyYours，Li_Hua【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明本校学生使用iPad的情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个

5、要点：使用iPad对学生学习产生的好处和产生的负面影响以及自己对此事的看法。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion 和There is no doubt that.运用了同位语从句，以及which 和where引导的定

6、语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如each coin has two sides, in other words, focus our attention on, take .into consideration等。插入语whats worse，以及副词However的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【难度】一般（二）请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Life isnt about waiting for the storm to passIt is about learning to dance in the rain注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限

7、；不能透露个人信息和学校名称；字数120左右。【答案】In our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troublesSome people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer themPersonally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome themMy mem

8、ory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school studentAt that time, I had great trouble studying EnglishFirst of all, I felt it hard to memorize English wordsBesides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answersWhat annoyed m

9、e most was that I failed exams constantlyI was about to give up when my English teacher found problemHe encouraged me and gave me some good adviceInspired by him, I was determined to defeat itFollowing his advice, I made progress graduallyFrom my experience, I can draw aconclusion that difficulties

10、are weak if you are brave enoughSo keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have anyNever wait for the storm to pass; instead, learn to dance in the rain【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这

11、样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：take action采取行动，encourage to do 鼓励某人做什么How I wished I could swim like them! 这句话用了虚拟语气， It frightened me just to think of being alone in the water. 这句话用了it做形式主

12、语， Nobody is born knowing how to swim.” 这句话用了伴随状语， there was nothing to be afraid of. 这句话用了there be句型。This experience has also taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.这句话用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。【难度】一般【答案】Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in

13、several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.Firstly, I feel really delighted that I have won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”. Besides ,I have established the friendship with students from all over our country, fr

14、om whom I have learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldnt have done such an excellent job.To sum up, I

15、will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.【解析】试题分析：分析要求可知，假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1付出才有回报；2收获自信和友谊；3感激之情。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。要求写约100个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如： which引导的定语从句、taking 非谓语结构、Additionally, To sum up等都很不错。【难度】一般（四）请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。Dozens of old people gather in public parks and squa