珠海市九中书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析文档格式.docx

1、要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today._【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life

2、. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly an

3、d easily. Some teachers are against itThey think that some students cant control themselves and often play games. Whats worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for student

4、s to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【详解】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系

5、，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。【点睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。I think+宾语从句。It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是的。2（河南中考模拟）书面表达。因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积

6、极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy.2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming.3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenager

7、s. _Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we dont take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “E

8、xercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our s

9、chool can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,lets take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. 本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词

10、句，如either.or., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中

11、心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。3（四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Writing. Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had h

12、er bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some common forms of bullying youve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）2. Some effects（影响） on the s

13、tudents who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .

14、Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and cant concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and its the schools responsibility to protec

15、t them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I s

16、aw，Sometimes he was made to，John often feels，because students spend，Schools should等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我经历过的欺凌事件的形式，接下来介绍学校欺凌事件对学生的影响，最后介绍解决欺凌事件的方法。此处as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4（

17、广东中考模拟）学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动。你打算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。1.形成良好的学习习惯：听讲、复习；2.保持健康的生活方式：饮食、起居；3.处理好跟他人的关系：友善、分享；4.其他建议.（至少2条建议）注意：（1） 词数80个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）（2） 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分Dear fellow schoolmates,Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal

18、suggestions to share with you. 【答案】First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and hand in your homework in time .Whenever you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help.More importantly, good health is important for success in the

19、exams. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. Besides, youd better have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food.As we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and hap

20、piness with others.Last but not the least , it is necessary for us to relax. You can do some sports such as walking or playing balls. Listening to music and seeing movies are also good ways to relax.Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.这是一篇书信作文，也是提纲类作文。学校将举行“给学弟学妹的一封信”的英

21、语征文活动。结合所给材料可知本文时态是一般现在时。使用的句型主要有祈使句和建议性句型（You should，we should, you can，youd better 等）。认真阅读提示，审清主题，根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，要包含所给的所有内容并适当发挥。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在80词以上，不要写的太少。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：首先，我建议你养成良好的学习习惯。上课认真听讲，及时交作业，遇到困难请向同学或老师寻求帮助。更重要的是，良好的健康是考试成功的重要因素

22、。你需要早起早睡以获得充足的睡眠。此外，你最好均衡饮食，避免吃垃圾食品。众所周知，良好的人际关系可以使我们快乐和舒适。善待他人，帮助有困难的人。我们应该和别人分享悲伤和快乐。最后但并非最不重要的是，我们有必要放松。你可以做一些运动，如散步或玩球。听音乐和看电影也是放松的好方法。希望你能享受你的学校生活，有一个光明的未来。本书面表达是给学弟学妹的一封信，给他们提出学习建议。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, More importantly, As we all know, Last but not the lea

23、st ,）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。5（浙江中考模拟）书面表达A small thing提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓

24、名，校名，否则以零分计。【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to

25、 stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的

26、事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。6（湖南中考模拟）书面表达假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动， 请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。提示问题：1. Whats your hobby?2. Why do you like it?