九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧很有用及练习题Word下载.docx

1、【详解】这是一篇图表作文。要求以“Smiles”为题，根据图表提示信息，写一篇英语短文。根据所给的提示材料可知文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句

2、、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。2（北京中考模拟）题目假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。你想成为志愿者。请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示问题：1. Why would you like

3、 to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends a

4、ndI am outgoing，so its easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.ll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure t

5、hey will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.Yours，Li lHua【分析】本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工作；第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。

6、如：用不定式would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、Its easy for me to get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、 介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，

7、短语丰富，句型多样。3（北京中考模拟）假如你是李华, 正在美国格林中学做交换生为了让更多的人了解中华文化, 你打算向学校申请建立一个社团（ Chinese Culture Club）请用英语给学校负责老师Mr. Lee 写一份申请, 内容包括建立该社团的原因及社团的主要活动安排提示词语: spread, experience, Beijing Opera, chopsticks, speech提示问题: Why do you want to start the club? What activities will you have in the club?【答案】Dear Mr. Lee,Im

8、 writing to apply for starting a Chinese Culture Club. As we know, more and more people are interested in Chinese culture, so a Chinese Culture Club can be a good chance for our students to learn more. In this club, students will work together to complete different projects. As a result, we can unde

9、rstand each other better and develop friendships.We will have a variety of activities for students to experience Chinese culture, such as performing Beijing Opera, practising Chinese calligraphy, having paper-cutting competitions and so on. Moreover, well hold some salons for students to share their

10、 life experiences in China and America. I believe everyone in the club will benefit a lot. I hope this application will be approved. Thank you for your consideration.Regards,Li Hua这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下中华文化。所提供的材料中列举了你打算向学校申请建立一个社团（ Chinese Culture Club）。主要从建立该社团的原因及社团的主要活动安排这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时，人称为第一

11、人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】In this club, students will work together to complete different projects. 在这个俱乐部，学生们将共同完成不同的项目。to complete different projects是动词不定式，做work together的目的。【高分句型二】I bel

12、ieve everyone in the club will benefit a lot. 我相信俱乐部里的每个人都会受益匪浅。句子everyone in the club will benefit a lot.是宾语从句。4（广东中考模拟）假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。1.简单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语

13、句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua,_Yours,【答案】Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museu

14、m. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. Whats mo

15、re, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.Im looking forward to your reply!这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般

16、将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人

17、称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen durin

18、g the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。5（北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。题目假如你是李华，本周六龙

19、湖公园将举办端午节游园活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter和你一起参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们见面的时间、地点，在那儿可以做些什么以及他需要做什么准备。 meet, take part in, the dragon boat race, make Zongzi, cameraWhen and where are you going to meet?What can you do there?What do you advise Peter to prepare?Dear Peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat

20、Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. Im writing to invite you to go there with me. _Im looking forward to your early reply.题目“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。某英文网站正在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你的梦想是什么？你为什么会有这样的梦想？为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做？want

21、 to be, like, study hard, come true. Whats your dream and why? What will you do to make your dream come true?【答案】例文：Dear peter,This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. Im writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at

22、 the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 oclock. We can watch the dragon boat race. Its very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos.这是一篇给材料作文，给Peter写一封信，邀请他参加端午节游园活

23、动，告诉我们见面的时间、地点以及要做的活动。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：This Saturday is，There will be，We are going to，We can watch等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示我邀请你参加端午节游园活动，接下来介绍我们见面的时间和地点以及可以做的事，最后期望收到你的回复。此处invite sb to do sth, learn to

24、do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。6（富顺第三中学校中考模拟） 朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求：1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密2. 词数80-1003. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名Friends are very i

25、mportant in our life. They always help us when we are in need._【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does