届高考英语作文复习 英语满分作文解析Word文档格式.docx

1、试题的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情，题目要求明确、清晰，开放性很强，给考生留下了很大的自主发挥的空间。【满分范文】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign ca

2、pital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I wi

3、ll be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua2. 2016年新课标全国卷II假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：. 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的

4、国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱： 。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。Dear Peter,Hope to hear from you soon.3.2016年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容

5、包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting t

6、hat afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I shoul

7、d be available any time after school next week.4.2016年浙江卷“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100120词的短文。要求如下： 1. 简述你对这句名言的理解； 2. 用一个具体事例加以说明； 3. 给出恰当的结尾。1. 文章的标题已给出（不计词数）： 2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可

8、判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【满分范文】 Planning is good as it decides in detail how

9、 we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out t

10、o read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.5.2016年天津卷假设

11、你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2） 谈谈收获或感想；（3） 表达祝愿与期望。（1） 词数不少于100；（2） 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意

12、谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。Dear friends,Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all have benefited from.Now, on behalf

13、 of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.6.2016年北京卷第一节 （15分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁；2. 该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响。1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, _题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人

14、物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。Dear Jim, Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!第二节假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“

15、地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。Actions f

16、or a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.7.2016年四川卷某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 你最喜欢的季节；2.

17、 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受）。1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好；3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。The Season I Like BestEach of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons; my favourite season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and hear

18、 the singing of small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outd

19、oor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why Im so excited about the spring. Thank you, spring!8.2016年江苏卷请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not on

20、ly cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the Most Beautiful Teacher and the Cutest Baby.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the Best Police Officer competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understand

21、ing of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the Future Singer competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not