英语六级作文写作技巧修订稿Word格式.docx

1、1. Recently the rise in problem of/（phenomenon of） . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. 最近上升的问题/（现象）.已造成/引起公众/流行/宽/举世关注2. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. （ has been brouth to public attention） 最近，问题的问题/ .的现象已成为注意的焦点。 （已经被bro

2、uth公众的注意）3.Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.- To be continued ! 通货膨胀/贪污/社会不平等.又是新的和痛苦的真理，我们必须学会面对的/不断另一个。1-3 观点法 -开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.:1. Never history has the change of . been as evident as . Nowhere in

3、the world/China has the issue/id dea of . be more visible/popular than. 历史上从未有改变的.被明显的，因为.在世界任何地方/中国有问题/思想的.更可见/受欢迎的程度.2. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/（be aware） that. 现在越来越多的人/大量开始/来实现/接受/（知道）的.3. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition ot th

4、e necessity to.Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of . 现在，人们日益认识/认识到有必要逾.现在，人们越来越认识到/的重要性的认识.4. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that. 也许现在是有一个重新审视的态度/想法.1-4 引用法 - 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!1. Knowledge is power. such is the remark made

5、 by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people . “知识就是力量。”这就是由培根说了。这句话也有同样的越来越多的人。Education is not complete with graduation. Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion. “教育是不完整的毕业。”这就是一个伟大的美国哲学家的意见。现在，越来越多的人分享他的意见。2. How often we h

6、ear such statements/words like thoses /this . 如何我们经常听到这样的声明/放入系统一样的话/本。In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this .在我们自己的日子，我们都已经习惯听到这样的传统抱怨，因为这.1-5 比较法 - 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.1. For years, .had been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look now. Wi

7、th the growing . , people . . 多年来，.已被视为.但是，人们正在以新面貌了。随着越来越多. ，人. 。2. People used to think that . （In the past, .） But people now share this new. 人们曾经以为. （过去，.）但是，人们现在这个新的共享。1-6 故事法 - 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.1. Once in （a newspaper） , I read of/learnt . The phenomenon of . has aroused public conce

8、rn. 一旦（报纸），我阅读/学习.的现象.引起市民关注2. I have a friend who . Should he . Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life. 我有一个朋友谁.如果他. 这样的困境，我们常常遇到在我们的日常生活的。3. Once upon a time , there lived a man who . This story may be （unbelievable） , but it still has a realistic significance now. 从前，有一位男子谁.这

9、个故事可能是（难以置信），但它仍然有现实意义现在1-7 问题法 - 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.Should/What . Options of . vary greatly , some ., others .But in my opinion , . . 应/什么. 的选项.差别很大，有些.，有的.但我认为，. 。英语六级作文结尾句型介绍结尾篇2-1 结论性- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .1. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw theconclusio

10、n that 2. In summary/In a word ， it is more valuable 2-2 后果性- 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.1. We must call for an immediate method ， because the currentphenomenon of ， if allowed to proceed， will surely lead to the heavycost of 2. Obviously ， if we ignore/are blind to the problem ， there isevery chance th

11、at will be put in danger .2-3 号召性 - 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.1. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirabletendency of 2. It is essential that effective measures should be taken tocorrect the tendency .2-4 建议性 - 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.1. While it cannot be solved immediately， s

12、till there are ways. Themost popular is Another method is Still another one is 2. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward thesituation.2-5 方向性的结尾方式 - 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.1. Many solutions are being offered here ， all of them make somesense， but none is adequate e

13、nough. The problem should be recognized in awide way .2. There is no quick method to the issue of ， but might behelpful/beneficial.3. The great challenge today is There is much difficulty ，but 2-6 意义性的结尾方式 - 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!1. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the s

14、uccess， butthe pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but alsobenefit 2. In any case， whether it is positive or negative， one thing iscertain that it will undoubtedly Nowadays many people prefer （_）because it plays a significant role in our daily speaking,its advantages can be

15、seen as one hand,（_）.One the other hand,（_）.But every sword has two negative aspects are also of the prominent disadvantages is that （_）.To make matters worse,（_）.Through the above analysis,I believe that The Positive aspects far outweighs its negative effects it has,one thing is certain,（_） itself

16、is neither good nor is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our society.Some,others and IThere is no consensus among people as to the view of （_）.The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that （_）.A case in point is that （_）.On the other hand, other may h

17、ave a quite different view. According to them,（_）.The most typical example is that （_）.Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend,but （_） is more convincing.My viewWhen asked abo

18、ut （_）,some people hold the idea that （_）.As far as they are concerned,（_）.But I could not agree with them in several my opinion,（_）.The reason for my choice are listed as follows.First of all,（_）.In addition,（_）.Last but not the least,（_）.For the reasons mentioned above,I firmly believe （_）.Hot iss

19、ueWith the development of the society,with the advent of （_）.we have to face a problem that （_）.What are the reasons for it?To start with,（_）.Moreover,（_）.Furthermore,（_）.In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is hight time that people all ov

20、er China realized the importance of （_）;for another,the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control.Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.英语六级作文写作技巧之主题句的写法主题句（topic sentence）是表达段落主题的句子。它用以概括

21、段落大意，要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请看下例：My mother has passed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Dont argue with parents; they will think you dont love them. Dont argue with children; they will think themselves victimized. Dont argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome mate. Dont

22、argue with strangers; they will think you are not friendly. My mothers rules, in fact, can be summed up in two words: Dont argue.主题句中提出的 certain rules 指的是什么?展开句中通过四个 Dont argue - 逐一加以交代。从结构来看，这是一个比较典型的段落，它包括了主题句，推展句和结论句（即本段中的末句）。 主题句的位置主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把

23、握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。，例1: Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages, on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating,

24、lighting, communications, carrying goods - everything. Factories and industrial plants use a great deal of energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.，这段文字所讲的主要是能源问题。第一句就概括性地提出“我们目前的生活很大程度上依赖于能源”。而随后出现的三句都是具体事例，对第一句进行说明和论述。我们可以断定第一句为该段的主题句（斜体部分）。 ，例2: （主题句）No one can avoid being influenc

25、ed by advertisements. （推展句1）Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste, we are no longer free to choose the things we want, for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us. （推展句2）In their efforts to persuade us to buy this or that product, advertisers have made a close study of human nature an

26、d have classified all our little weakness.以上这段由三句话组成。第一句是主题句，直截了当指出无人不受广告影响这个主题，接着列举两个推展句对其补充和支持，指出我们已无法自由选择所需的商品，理由是广告商已仔细研究了我们的心理，并完全掌握了我们的弱点。句子衔接自然，步步紧扣主题。 如何写好主题句中的关键词段落的主题句对主题的限定主要是通过句中的关键词来表现的。关键词要尽量写得具体些。对“具体”的要求包括两个方面：一是要具体到能控制和限制段落的发展;二是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。准确地把握关键词是清楚地表达段落主题、写好段落主题句的重要前提之一。在上面的例

27、1，例2中，主题句的关键词分别为：depends very much on energy; no one can avoid being influenced. 我们再看下列例句：原句1: He can fix a bicycle himself.斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。但它只是限制了段落发展的部分内容，并没有告诉读者该用哪种方法展开，是用因果关系法还是用分类法?修正：He can fix a bicycle himself in several simple steps. 的There are several reasons why he can fix a bicycle himself.原句2: She tries to improve her looks.她试着改变她面容的理由是什么或者她采取什么方法来改善呢我们无法从关键词中清楚得知。She tries many ways to improve her looks. 的There are some reasons why she tries to improve her loo