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1、Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that_【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are

2、 two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They

3、think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. Thats not good for their health. As for me, I dont think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ou

4、rselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。第四段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词

5、、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some others，As for me ，Some people think that 。They also believe thatIf they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章

6、的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。2（安徽中考模拟）书面表达某英文报社组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1. 该谚语的含义；2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where theres a will, theres a way.参考词汇：谚语 proverb_【答案】A

7、 Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After

8、 knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear

9、. True friends always come to you when you need help.这是命题作文。二选一，第一个是“患难见真情”，第二个是“有志者事竞成”。标题都是以谚语的形式出现，所以考生第一步做的是理解这两个言语的意思，选择自己较有把握的。在选择标题之后，根据所给内容提示，进行写作。写作时，先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体3（江苏中考模拟）书面表达假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦

10、恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,Im sorry to know that you arent allowed to read eBooks._All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bri

11、ng many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our

12、 eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as

13、 a product of，live in，more and more，sothat，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. /

14、 And there are more radiation which is harmful to people/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力

15、。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4（湖北中考模拟）书面表达近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。要点：AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games;Your opinion要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2.短

16、文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into classWe can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer._【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into classWe can get our homework on the mobile phone and

17、 hand it in by computer.It save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the computer.Therefore they are active in class.Some people think students shouldnt use computers in class.Computers are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students

18、 should use iPad in class.The teachers dont allow students to play games in class.It is good for students to use iPad in class.根据题意近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。这篇短文不使用了大量的的

19、短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some people think students shouldnt use computers in class.Computers are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers dont allow students to play games in class.这些重点短语和句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。5（河南中考模拟）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，请你谈一谈，

20、这三年以来，你学习英语的心得体会。1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。2.词数80左右。3.行文连贯通顺。条理清晰，表达准确。4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。否则，试卷按零分处理。【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficul

21、ties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldnt master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as

22、much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的记忆。接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难：听不懂老师的英语，记忆词汇短语有困难等等。分别列出，行文流畅。用短语give up放弃，表示困难太大，难倒了自己。后

23、来在老师的帮助下，克服了困难。逐步地Step by step，不断取得进步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结，结束全文。6（海林市朝鲜族中学中考模拟）（B） 如今，许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天，请根据下列提示写一篇短文，针对这种现象谈谈你的看法与建议。短文要包括所给要点，并补充第二点建议，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。80100词。提示：原因：想放松一下，打发时间。结果：对运动不感兴趣，不愿面对面交流。建议：1. 禁止学生把手机

24、带到学校； 2. 参考词汇： chat v. 聊天；kill the time打发时间；face to face面对面【答案】Nowadays, many students love chatting on their mobile phones after class. They think it is a good way to relax themselves and kill the boring time. However, many of them show no interest in sports and some even dislike talking with their

25、 friends face to face. I think they shouldnt be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Or they have to turn off their mobile phones when they are in the school. And they should spend more time on some sports, because playing sports is good for their body and mind.本文属于话题作文，针对许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天这一现象谈谈你

26、的看法和建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如love doing, it作形式主语，however, face to face, be allowed to do, spend时间+on sth以及be good for。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我

27、们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。7（丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重如何保护我们的环境呢？请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution