1、 enrich ones experience Working for a period before going to university can greatly enrich students experience and make them capable in university. 在闲暇时间做兼职可以丰富一个人的经历。Taking part time jobs in spare time can enrich ones experience. 5,省时间又省钱 is less time-consuming and more economical 在快餐店吃饭既省时间又省钱。Eat
2、ing meals in the fast food restaurant is less time-consuming and more economical. 6,开阔人的眼界 broaden ones horizons 旅行既能开阔人的视野,又能放松人的身心。Not only can traveling broaden ones horizons, it can relax ones body and soul as well. 7,发挥人的潜力 fulfill ones potential在跨国企业工作能够发挥人的潜力。Working for a multinational corpo
3、ration can fulfill ones potential. 在压力下工作能够激发员工的潜力。Working under pressure can help employees fulfill their potential. 倒退类:用来论证“坏”的方面1,导致犯罪 lead to crimes对法律的忽视会导致犯罪。The ignorance of law always leads to crimes. 媒体上广泛传播的暴力和色情常常导致年轻人犯罪。The widespread violence and pornography on media often lead to yout
4、hs crimes. 2,对 沉迷/上瘾 be addicted to be preoccupied with在当今社会,很多人都沉迷于不同形式的赌博。In present-day society, a great many people are addicted to various forms of gambling. 3,以 为代价 at the expense of我们不应当以环境为代价发展经济。We should not develop economy at the expense of the environment. 很多人往往愿意以健康为代价获得成功。A great numbe
5、r of people are willing to achieve success at the expense of their health. 4,遭受 suffer from be afflicted with当今社会,很多国家都饱受贫穷的困扰。In present-day society, plenty of countries are afflicted with poverty. iBT TOEFL Writing (2)词汇的变化ETS 评分标准(5分) Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstra
6、ting syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity. 不同词性词汇之间替换名词换形容词给每个人的自由设置一个限度是很有必要的。It is very necessary to establish a limit for each persons freedom.To establish a limit for each persons freedom is of great necessity. 购物对你的健康有利。Shopping will be very beneficial to your health.Sho
7、pping will be of utmost benefit to your health. 韩国政府认为保护和发展文化产业很重要。The Korean government thinks it is very important to protect and develop the culture industry. The Korean government thinks that protecting and developing the culture industry is of great importance. 政府应当保护自然环境。The government should
8、protect the environment. Government participation is needed to ensure environmental protection. 修建一个大型购物中心是社区发展的一种表现。constructing a new shopping center is a kind of development for our community.Construction of a new shopping center a kind of development for our community. 我们可以为能预见到的困难做好充分的准备。We can
9、 prepare for all the expectable problems.Preparations for all the expectable problems can be completed beforehand.Treating sleepwalking requires doctors to know a lot about psychology.Treating sleepwalking requires a good knowledge of psychology.Exploring outer space requires a good knowledge of ast
10、ronomy. One day everyone will talk about the news that I am accepted by Harvard University.one day my acceptance by Harvard University will be on everyones lips.Vegetarianism is becoming accepted and welcome by more and more western people.Vegetarianism has found its growing popularity and acceptanc
11、e among western people.词汇具体化人-person/people-(表明身份的词) professor, babysitter, architect, fashion designer.城市-city-(表明方位的词) Seattle,Los Angeles, Paris, Hong Kong , 学校-school-(表明规模的词)university, college, University of Washington.钱-money-(表明用途的词)cash, fund, tip, salary, tuition, allowance.地方-place-(表明属性的
12、词) shopping mall, china Town, art district, national park. 说话- say-(表明状态的词) comment, complain, claim, 词汇具体化综合演练你来改改看?A person I asked in a school said that if you live in a big city, life can be very interesting, because there are many places to go. -(28字)A professor I interviewed in University of W
13、ashington commented that if you live in a metropolis like Seattle ,life can be very interesting, because there are shopping malls, China Towns, art districts and national parks where you can have fun. -(40字) make - “使得 / 让”-使得-使开心:The opening ceremony for the Olympics will make me feel happy. The op
14、ening ceremony for the Olympics will fill me with happiness.使兴奋:fill with excitement 使惊奇:fill with surprise/astonishment fill with excitement fill with surprise/astonishment “使出名”Pablo Picassos 20,000 works made him famous as a master of modern art. Pablo Picassos 20,000 works established him famous
15、 as a master of modern art. “The old man and the sea” established Ernest Hemingway as a master of modern American literature. -让-钢琴曲能够让听众自由的想象。 Piano music can make listeners imagine freely.Piano music allow more freedom for listeners imagination. 历史遗迹能够让我们铭记先辈们留下的丰富文化。Historic places can remind us
16、of the abundant culture that was handed to us by our forefathers.句子用法 1. 基础经典句型 、 如此.以致于. So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子水资源是如此珍贵,我们应当保护它。So valuable is water resource that we should protect it.国际旅行的费用太高,以至于很多人无法支付。So expensive is the fee of international tour that many people can not afford it. 、不可否认的是.
17、There is no denying that. It is an undeniable fact that .不可否认的是南美洲国家曾经为人类文明的发展做出过很大贡献。There is no denying that South American countries the development of human beings civilization. 不可否认的是信息技术产业已经为很多国家带来可观的收入。It is an undeniable fact that the information technology industry has provided a substantia
18、l source of income for many countries. 、 的主要原因是 the main (major/primary) cause/reason of lies in. 物种灭绝的主要原因在于城市化的发展。The main cause of ( )actually lies in the( ).种族歧视的主要原因其实是人类的天性。The primary reason of actually lies in the human nature. 、 A 对B 产生某种影响A has (have) an impact (effect/influence) on B A 对B
19、 产生 好的影响A has (have) beneficial/positive/favorable effect (impact/influence) on B体育锻炼对抑郁症有好的影响。Exercise has great beneficial impact on depression. A 对B 产生坏的影响A has (have) harmful/negative/detrimental impact (effect/influence) on B赌博对于我们的社会有很坏的影响。 Gambling has a negative impact on our society. 、 全世界都
20、知道. It is universally acknowledged that全世界都知道有志者事竟成。“Where there is a will, there is a way.”It is universally acknowledged that where there is a will, there is a way. 、 一定会主语 + will never fail to (双重否定句)人类一定会在科技领域取得更大成就!Human beings will never fail to achieve greater success in science and technolog
21、y!、 .的优点是.An advantage of is that + 句子一天吃一个苹果的一个好处是它能让你保持健康。An advantage of eating an apple a day is that it can help you to keep fit.使用太阳能的一个优点是它不会制造任何污染。An advantage of using the solar energy is that it will not create (produce) any pollution.、 对.造成很大威胁 pose a great threat to 恐怖主义对世界和平造成一大威胁。Terro
22、rism poses a great threat to the peace of the world. 沙尘暴对我们的生存造成一大威胁。The sand storm poses a great threat to our existence. 问题正变的越来越严重 The problem of is becoming increasingly severe (grave/serious)森林面积的锐减The problem of forest disappearance is becoming increasingly severe. A is an indispensable part o
23、f B A 是 B 不可缺少的一部分手机已经成为我们生活中不可缺少的一部分,它对我们工作和娱乐的方式都产生了深远的影响。Mobile phone has been an indispensable part of our life, and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we work and play. 2. 句子的变化1, 我永远不会忘记这堂课.一个真正的作文高手- 可以熟练地运用各种类型的词汇和语法结构打造句子的开头。 用名词开头 我们差不多已经忘记9.11 那场灾难了。 We almost forget the 9
24、.11 tragedy. The 9.11 tragedy had almost been faded in our memory. 很多人都在抱怨中国的大规模能源短缺。Many people are complaining Chinas extensive shortage of energy.Chinas extensive shortage of energy is the source of great complaint.我们在这个快节奏的世界的工作压力越来越大。We are getting more and more workloads in this rapid- paced w
25、orld.The rapid-paced world has always been imposing increasing workloads on us.人们经常讨论可再生能源代替化石燃料的可能性。People often discuss the possibility that renewable resources will replace the fossil fuels. Discussions spring up as to the possibility that renewable resources will replace the fossil fuels. 介词开头用f
26、or, despite, from, under, besides, with, without, 等介词开头,是使句子生动变化的一种手段。 For people who “对于人来说” 对于大多数退休的人来讲,阅读已经成为快乐的来源。For the majority of people who have already retired, reading has become the source of happiness in their life.对于那些想过健康而有意义的生活的人来说,找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的。For people who want to adopt a healt
27、hy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. “With +动词的名词形式” 当句中一个动作是另外一个动作发生的前提,可以用“with + 动词的名词形式”表示这个前提。随着城市化的发展,许多小镇变得越来越拥挤。With the development of urbanization, many villages are becoming increasingly crowded. 随着人口的快速增长,人们使用资源的数量在以惊人的速度增长。With the r
28、apid growth of population, the amount of materials used has increased at an alarming rate. “Without + 名词” (2)句子结构变化 比较结构句比较结构句,是英语学术论文写作中使用频率极高而且用法比较微妙的一种句式。 句式1 just as , so (比较相似性)Just as water is indispensable to fish, so is you to my life.正如水是鱼儿不可缺少的依赖一样,我的生命里也不能没有你。正如水是鱼儿不可缺少的依赖一样,钢铁也是汽车产业发展不可缺少的。Just as water is indispensable to fish,
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