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1、（4） 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.【答案】At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble. It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into

2、 trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves.As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life.

3、Now we have become close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】这是一篇关于学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动，谈谈自己的看法；英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。Its+形容

4、词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是怎样的；make great progress 取得巨大进步2（江苏中考模拟）写作:81. 目前，很多高中都开设了特色课程，涵盖烘焙、舞蹈、钢琴、跆拳道、足球等内容，很大程度上增加了校园生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。 作为即将升入高中的你，对于特色文化课程有何看法？请根据下表的提示完成一篇短文并阐述你的观点。Views on Special Courses赞同1. 有助于增加我们的技能；2. 有利于培养我们不轻易放弃的精神；3. 不赞同1. 过多占用学生时间，耽误学习；2. 需要投入更多的钱，增加家庭压力；你的观点1. 2. 要求：1

5、. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包括表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥；3. 词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入）4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas._【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their

6、 normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. Whats more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldnt give up easily. Also, with the help of these cour

7、ses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we cant reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they cant pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last,

8、we dont have so many teachers on these courses. We cant get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think its good to have special courses. Its not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如carry on，first of all，l

9、ike to do，play a game，this kind of，Whats more，give up，with the help of，so much time，pay attention to，on the paper，put up等。而复杂并列结构Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ Its not only improve our abilities but also give us much fun.和Some students th

10、ink it takes so much time to have these lessons that they cant pay attention to their grades. / I think its good to have special courses.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，

11、要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3（山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中

12、出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was

13、 very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.这是一篇材

14、料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。4（北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：

15、应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important What kind of books should we read? Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. So Im here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming

16、. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important t

17、o job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. 题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型：

18、reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。5（山东初三）你知道 年最受欢迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么吗？“Plogging”，一边捡垃圾，一边慢跑， 正逐渐走进我们的生活。拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑 （jog），不仅促进环境卫生，而且有益身体健康，可谓一举两得。请结合自己的日常生活经历，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的

19、短文。1、身体力行，保护环境的事例；坚持锻炼，增强体质的事例。2、结合事例，谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式 （plogging） 的认识，以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者。注意：1、可以围绕主题，根据要求，进行适当的发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is

20、spreading all over the world. Whats plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after re

21、turning from a run when I can do something thats good for myself and my community. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.

22、【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求结合自己的日常生活经历，谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式 （plogging） 的认识以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者。1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以第一人称，谈谈自己对目前最环保的运动方式 （plogging） 的认识以及结合自己的日常生活经历，谈谈怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者；陈述现阶段的事情用一般现在时。书写时要注意题干所给的提示材料，成文时要文句通顺，内容完整。2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，介绍自己最喜欢的运动是跑步；正文部分顺理成章的介绍plogging这种运动方式以及自己如何身体力行地做到锻炼

23、、环保两不误；结尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.点题，总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。3.高分亮点：高分短语： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep clean .高分句型：1.I enjoy running so much because it mak

24、es me keep fit and have an excellent figure. 2.Plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running .3.Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river；4.To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；关注题材的格式（记叙文），注意文章的篇章结构；书写时

25、要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。6（河南中考模拟）书面表达。同学们，从小到大，会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长，他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学甚至是路人。他们或许对你产生了重要影响，进而给你留下深刻印象。请以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。1. 结构清晰，内容完整，语言流利。2. 文中不得出现真实的学校，姓名等个人信息。3. 80词左右。A person who impressed me a lot【答案】Ther

26、e were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of my fathers work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was

27、not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The tim

28、e I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.本文属于话题作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a r

29、ed dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是