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1、递进：first,second,third,finally,tobeginwith,firstofall,inaddition,whatsmore,moreover,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,thelastbutnottheleast。转折：but,yet,however,asfarasIamconcerned,inthemeantime。总结：inaword,allinall,inconclusion。4，语法和亮点：单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此根底上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。二， 三段十句话

2、：1，三段布局：高考作文题型多样,有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料,按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。记叙文：A.背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B.故事开展经过结果。C.结局和感受。议论文：A.发表观点。B.论据理由。C.结论照应论点。图片文：A.描述图片内容，提炼观点。 B.论据理由。日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入局部写话题，意图，主题；在具体局部写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾局部写活动时间、地点、联系

3、方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。2，十句成篇：Passage1,1Topic话题2Thesis论点Passage2,3Transition过渡句4Argument1论据11/105Detail1论据1的支持句6Argument2论据27Detail2论据2的支持句8Argument3论据39Detail3论据3的支持句Passage310 Conclusion总结以上为议论文的三段十句结构。根据具体情况可调整加减。其它文体在此根底上略作修改即可。三， 具体各类题型写法：1，描述图片类：P1图片描述,图片主旨。P2过渡句加论据和支持句。视字数调整论据和支持句个数。P3总结。2，夹叙夹议文：写法1，

4、P1话题记叙或描述。P2观点或感想，写 2个论据和2个支持句。写法2，P1话题和观点。P2事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。P3总结说明事件，再次证明话题和论点。写法3，P1回忆记述事件。P2感受、观点。3，两主旨议论文：有时需要写两个主旨，如第一个为什么喜欢读书，另一个喜欢读什么书。或第一个水为什么珍贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大局部写：P1 话题、一个论据和支持句。 P2过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。 P3 总结4，建议型议论文：写法1，倾向建议：提出一个问题，简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建议：P1写信目的，一个问题。P2针对这个问题假设干建议。P3总结希望。写法2，问题建议并重：

5、提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议：P1写信目的。P2提两个问题并说明。P3针对两问题给两建议。写法3，倾向于问题：提出一个问题，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个建议。P2提出一个问题，原因及危害等。P3建议、总结。5，说明文和纯事实新闻报导：同纯记叙文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。四， 写作四步骤：1，审题：主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。2，框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。3，成文：一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。4，检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主谓一致。变换句

6、式：不用过于简单的结构。总之：认真审题,提炼要点;紧扣主题,扩词成句;表述准确,连句成文;通篇检查,确保无误。五，英文文章开头有两种可以选择：1，每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。标题和文章间不用空行。2，每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。两种都可以，但是空格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比拟多。2/10上海中考英写作：真范文2021VI.Writing（作文）（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopicMyprogress（以“步了,写一信不少于60个的短文,点符号不占格）你在生活或中一定取得不少步,比方生活枝能的得、学方法的掌握、良好慣的养成。取其中一个方面

7、,合自身,一你是如何取得一步的。注意:短文中不得出任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否不予分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达供参考）usedtodo/be trymybesttodomakeprogressin（doing）MyProgressIusedtobepoorinEnglish,especiallyinspeakingEnglishasIwastooshytoopenmymouth.ThingshavebeenchangedsinceIhadanewEnglishteacherwhowasverykindandtoldmethecorrectwa

8、ytolearnEnglish.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandbegantospeakalittle.Inthemeantime,IspentmoretimeinEnglishlearningandtrymybesttoimprovemyEnglish.IlistenedtoEnglishbroadcastingandimitatedthepronunciation.IalsowenttoEnglishCornertopracticemyspokenEnglishwithforeignerseverySunday.Stepbystep,Iha

9、vemadesubstantialprogressinlearningEnglish.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Asaproverbsays, “Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartinit. Imyprogress.2021VII.Writing作文共20分Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic “Theresalwayshope以“常希望，写一篇不少于 60个的短文，点符号不占格面困惑的候、化的候、感挫的候、遭遇逆境的候 来自内心的持、

10、他人的帮助、社会的关和科技的展等，能人常希望。取一个方面你的理解可合自身或他人的。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly以下表达供参考getoutofdifficulty give ahandneverlosehopeTheresAlwaysHopeDifficultiesandfailuresareunavoidableinourlives,However,Ibelievetherealwayshopeaslongasyoudon tgiveup.IusedtobepoorinEnglish.Thegrammar,thevocabulary,thepronunciati

11、onandwritingwerecontinuouslytorturingme.Ialmostlostmyheartandthoughtaboutgivingup.Luckily,Imetagoodteacherwhowassokindthathespenthourshelpingmetocorrectmymistakesandteachingmeexcellentmethods.Healwaysgavemegenerouspraiseforanyminorprogressofmine.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandtriedmybestto

12、overcomeallthedifficulties.Daybyday,Ihavemadesubstantialprogress.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Asanoldsayinggoes, “Wherethereisawill,thereisaway. Nomatterhowdifficultthingsseemtobe,let scherishhopeandnevergiveup.3/102021Writing作文Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Imready

13、以“我准好了，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格你明天一定有着美好的憧憬此，你已做好了哪方面的准？合你的或特等，取一个角度具体你是如何做准的independentbegoodatresponsibletakepartin hardworking ithelpsmeto ImReadyWhenIwasyoung,mymotherusuallyreadbooksformeassoonasshehadtime.IwasattractedbythefascinatingworldofstoriessoImadeadeterminationtobecomeawriter.Toachievethedr

14、eam,Ihavebeendoingmybestallthetime.Firstofall,IpaygreatattentiontomyCompositionclasses.Furthermore,Ijoinschoolwritinggroupandtakepartinwritingcontest,whichmakesmepracticealotinwriting.Lastbutnottheleast,Ikeepconnectionwithafamouswriterwhohelpsmetoimprovemywritingabilitysubstantially.Allinall,through

15、hardworkingIamgoodatwritingnow.HowhappyIwillbewhenmybooksthatwillenrichchildren slifearepublishedsomeday! Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.I mready.ImreadyIalwayssaytomyself:mready!beforeacompetitionoraspeech,thoughitseemsthatIwillneverbereadyforthemabsolutely.Iamready!,whichmakesmesoconfidentthatIcanpayall

16、ofmyattentiontowhatIdoefficiently.Ofcourse,asasayingsays:Practicemakesperfect.Essentialpreparationisnecessary.Weshouldmakeeveryefforttoprepareforwhatwedo.Saytoourselves: Im，readynditwillhelpusplayourbestcard！2021 Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic “Iwanttoinvent_（以“我想要明_，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格）注意

17、：1、在答上将目充完整。2、短文中不得出任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否不予分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.以（下表达供参考）Itcanbeusedto Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfulto IWanttoInventaFamilyRobotDoctorIwanttoinventafamilyrobotdoctorbecauseitisveryhelpfultous.Firstofall,afamilyrobotcancureillnessesforpeopleathomeimmediatelyafteryoufeelsic

18、korgethurt,whichisveryconvenientandefficient,especiallyinemergencysituations.What smore,allasknow,wenowadayshospitalsarealwaysoccupiedbypatientswhoareanxioustobetakencareassoonaspossible,sofamilyrobotdoctorscanreducethepressureofhospitalandalleviatethepatients anLastbutnottheleast,withthehelpofarobo

19、tdoctor,peoplecangetdulyadviceforhealthydietandliveabetterlife.Inaword,afamilyrobotdoctorissubstantiallyusefulforoursociety.Inordertoachievemydreamofinventingafamilyrobotdoctor,Iwilldomybestandlearnhard.IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobot4/10Iwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillness

20、withoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbet

21、akengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.IwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelif

22、eofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.ThatswhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschoolof

23、theancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout.2021.Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic “Thi

24、stimenextyear“以（“明年此时为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格 ）你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？Thefollowingsentencepatternsareforreferenceonly.（以下句型仅供参考）Ihopeto/Ihopethat.PerhapsIwill.Itwillbeexciting/necessary/terribleto.ThisTimeNextYearItisexcitingtoimaginewhatIwillbethistimenextyear.Lifeischange

25、ableandIwillbedifferent.First,Illbeaseniorstudentnextyear.IreallyhopeIcanachieveydramandattendmyfavoritehighschool.Furthermore,IwillgetmanynewfriendswithwhomIwillspendmypreciousmoments.PerhapsIcantakepartinasummercampabroadasmyEnglishwillbegoodenoughtocommunicatewithforeigners.Ofcourse,torealizethew

26、ishes,hardworkingisstillnecessaryforme.Finally,itishightimethatIshouldhelpmymotherwithmorehousework.Anyway,Iwillbebetter,kinderandmorediligentthistimenextyear.Letmelookforwardtoit.ThistimenextyearItsexcitingtoimaginewhatthehappylifewillbelike.Atthistimenextyear,Iwillbeaseniorhighstudent,andIwillmake

27、alotofnewfriends.IhopetobemoreindependentsothatperhapsIwillbetakingpartina5/10summercampabroadtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.AlsoIwillhelpmyparentsdohouseworkinordertoknowhowtotakecareofmyselfwhenIamalone.Lifewillbetotallydifferent,butImreallylookingforwardtoit.Lifeischangeable,andthatswhyeveryonelongsfor

28、thefuture,whichisfullofchallengeaswellashope.PerhapsIwillhaveachievedmygoalthistimenextyear,studyinginaseniorhighschool.Despitethat,diligencewillbestillneededtomakemyselfgofurtherinEnglish.Basically,itisimportanttoconcentrateinclassandtakenotescarefully.Then,IwillbenefitfromreadingEnglishbooks.Whati

29、smore,goingabroadisofgreatuseinimprovingmyoralEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIprogressinEnglishendlessly.MakeplansandgoforwhatIwant.AndIbelievewhenthechallengeiscoming,thehopeisalsoaroundthecorner.2021 Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic “Howtoprotectmyself（“如何保自己，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格。）提示：自我保是青少年需要掌

30、握的重要技能。你在生活中怎行自我保（可合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面灾如何自救，如何防受或侵害，如何防止生活中的意外，等等 ）。Phrasesforreference（以下短供参考）：Askforhelp calmdownindangerprevent.FromHowtoProtectMyselfLifeisprecious.ProtectingmyselfisthemostimportantthingtodowhenIamindanger.Thenifanearthquakehitsmycity,whatcanIdotoprotectmyself?Firstofall,Imustcalmdownaspanicisofnohelp.