1、I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this
2、is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be reall
3、y thankful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确,要点全面,语言通顺流畅,很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的,然后具体讲述自己的困难,再提出请求,最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外,作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first tim
4、e that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。2.【2018全国新课标II】书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 1主题:环境保护; 2展览时间; 3投稿邮箱:intlphotoshowgmschool. 1词数100左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold
5、 an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmenta
6、l protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshowgm.school.Hope to hear from you soon.Yours Lihua【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务,要点扩充合情合理
7、,符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑:对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化,并没有一直使用陈述句,穿插使用祈使句,符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句,如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句. themethe last time you visitedour school.条件状语从句If you want to join.;等。全文没有中国式英语句式,体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点:考查半开放作文3.【2018全国新课标III】书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,与留
8、学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too mu
9、ch trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.书信类作文题目是常规的
10、书信作文,要求写一封道歉信,是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出,表达歉意的同时,还要与对方另约时间。因此,不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点,还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。4.【2018北京】书面表达(共两节,35 分)第一节(15分)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1. 该人物是谁;2. 该人物的主要贡献;3. 该人物对你的影响。1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim, _ _Dear Jim, Its great to hear
11、from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened o
12、ur eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers! 考点:应用文写作题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作,对于应用文格式的要求并不高,但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物,但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时,
13、考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍,故难度较去年明显提升。第二节( 20 分)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60。提示词:地球日Earth DayActions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the action
14、s for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids an
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