1、_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,Im writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldnt have made my English study go smoothly as usual. And its your frequent encouragement and positiv
2、e attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.Thank you for your kindness again and I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip where you can witness in person the perfect combination of culture and nature.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表
3、达属于应用文,根据要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第一步:第二步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):write to(写信给);in hospital(生病住院);as usual (像平常一样);deal with(处理);in person(亲自)。第三步:根据提及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】第一段,开门见山,表达感谢,清晰明确,简单明了。第二段,说明老师怎么帮助自己,结构清晰,语意连贯。第三段,邀请老师来中国游玩,符合应用文
4、结尾格式,结构严谨。文章内容完整,提纲要点全面,格式规范,语篇连贯,使用复合句,显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力,如And its your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.(正是你频繁的鼓励和积极的态度,引导我走出低落的精神,以如此合理的方式处理我的疾病,学习和生活。)(强调句型的运用)2021高三英语湖南全真模拟2 假定你是李
5、华,为全面迎接开学,你市将邀请钟南山院士举办有关“抗疫”知识在线讲座。请写信通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 主讲人简介;3. 时间和方式:下周三上午9点到11点,钉钉(Ding Talk)在线。参考词汇:COVID-19新型冠状病毒;anti-epidemic防疫1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Johnny,_【答案】Dear Johnny,How are you doing these days? In order to welcome the opening of the new seme
6、ster, our city will invite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. So Im writing to tell you something about it.As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19. In view of this, the school will o
7、rganize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic through Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封通知,通知目前在某酒店隔离的你校英国留学生Johnny参加有关“抗疫”知识的在线讲座。审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应一般现在时和一般将来时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作
8、为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.写信目的; 2.讲座的具体信息 1)主讲人简介此次舞会的大体介绍。(introduction to this dance) 2)时间和方式: 3.邀请参加 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)in order to;give an online speech on;lead to, fight against, in view of, fromto连词成句1. How are you doing these days?2.In order to welcome the opening of the new semester, our city will in
9、vite academician Zhong Nanshan to give an online speech on anti-epidemic. 3.As is known to all, academician Zhong Nanshan led the Chinese people to achieve great success in the fight against COVID-19.4. In view of this, the school will organize students to learn the knowledge of anti-epidemic throug
10、h Ding Talk from 9 am to 11 am next Wednesday.5.I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Fur
11、thermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规
12、范清晰,第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如I believe COVID-19 will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.这句话运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句;使用了一些固定词组,如in order to;lead to, fight against, in view of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。2021高三英语湖南全真模拟3你所在的学校英语俱乐部在组织成员交流各自的职业规划,请以“My Dream Job”为题,写一篇英语短文,内容包括:1.你的职业规划以及选择这个职业的理由;2.你现在做什么准备来实现你的梦想?1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My Dream Job_
copyright@ 2008-2022 冰豆网网站版权所有
经营许可证编号:鄂ICP备2022015515号-1