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1、概要写作概要写作Summary writingSummary writing高考新题型高考新题型概要写作评分标准第五档（概要写作评分标准第五档（2125points）：#）：#1.理解理解准确准确，涵盖，涵盖所有要点所有要点 2.准确准确使用相应的使用相应的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇 3.完全完全使用使用自己的语言自己的语言。#（60-80W）4.有效有效地使用了语句间的地使用了语句间的连接成分连接成分，使概要，使概要结构紧凑结构紧凑contents（内容内容）language skills（语言语言）structure（结构结构）Once upon a time,industrial go

2、ods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly

3、to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!#Our

4、industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?#Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention

5、of waste is a virtue?#（182W）Step 1.Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuade

6、d us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packa

7、ging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!#Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take ca

8、re of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?#Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?#概要写作难点概要写作难点 1How to get the key points quickly and correctly?#（如何快速、准确地捕捉要点如何快速、准确地捕捉要点）抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息Para 1：#Once upon a time,industrial

9、goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.detailed exampleu忽略具体事例忽略具体事例topic sentence概要写作难点概要写作难点 2 How to express the key points by using your own words properly?#（如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑如何灵活诠释，规避抄

10、袭的嫌疑）characteristics1.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever._,industrial goods were made _.Some time ago;#In the past;#Decades agoto be used for a long timeto function well for a long time;#durable近义词替换近义词替换You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Decades ago,industri

11、al goods were made durable.spent much money ontreasuretreat it kindlyYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Decades ago,industrial goods were made durableYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Para1.use it carefully Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It

12、 is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a

13、 new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!#topic sentencedetailed examplescharacteristicsresultu忽略具体事例忽略具体事例 Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-awa

14、y society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!#1.Nowadays industry

15、has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.3.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Modern Industrymade us believeconvincednot permanentModern industry has convinced us that pr

16、oducts are not permanent.short-lived近义词替换近义词替换2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them.It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.改变主语（形式主语）改变主语（形式主语）正话反说、反话正说正话反说、反话正说This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.改变句式改变句式result in Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.To throw them away is cheaper