1、Why?relax for Grade 9 students?I think its (not)good for us.Because Reasons70%ofstudentsagree30%ofstudentsdisagreeYouropinion?1.get close to nature;enjoy the beautiful nature2.Open our eyes and increase our knowledge3.be good for our health1.waste time;affect our study2.feel tired3.Worry about our s
2、afetyRecentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway.Theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.Goingouting can not only open our eyes but also fill them with moreknowledge.Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.30
3、%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganize
4、dwell.Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway._theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature._,goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwith more knowledge._,going outing is good for theirhealth._
5、,30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheir study.After all,going outing will also make us feel tired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudent_,goingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itsh
6、ouldbeorganizedwell.in a word,besides,first,next,on the other hand,FirstNextBesidesOn the other handIn a wordWritingskill:使用恰当连接词,能使文章上下衔接使用恰当连接词,能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑自然、紧凑,使文章更,使文章更为为地道地道,更具,更具“英语味英语味”。Sometimes to do relaxing things Sometimes to do relaxing things can make you feel better.can make you fee
7、l better.Tony GinaTony GinaTony Ginasothat,and ,than,so,however,but,soThe better learning The better learning way,theway,the better grade you better grade you ll get.ll get.Tony and Gina are two middle school students.They both work hard but they have different learning ways.Tony often tired in clas
8、s.He hardly listens to the teacher,hemiss lots of important points that the teacher makes.As a result,Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly.So he hasto stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.However,Gina listens careful and tries to catch what the teacher says in class.Because o
9、f this,so she learns better than Tony and she goes to bed early.In my opinion,Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself,so I prefer her learning way.改错改错1.Tony is often tired in class./Tony often gets/feels tired in class.2.he misses lots of important points 3.Gina listens
10、carefully4.Because of this,she learns better than Tony.1.good words:2.Suitable conjunctions:3.Wonderful sentences:hardlystay up late butas a resultsoandhowever1 points that the teacher(定语从句定语从句)2 Its too for sb to 3catch what the teacher says.(宾语从句宾语从句)4 better than (比较级比较级 )Writingskill:使用好词好句能使你的文
11、章加分增加文采。Tony and Gina are two middle school students.They both work hard but they have different learning ways.Tony is often tired in class.He hardly listens to the teacher,hemisses lots of important points that the teacher makes.As a result,Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly.S
12、o he hasto stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.However,Gina listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class.Because of this,she learns better than Tony and she goes to bed early.In my opinion,Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself,so I prefer her
13、 learning way.Its too difficult for him to finish the homework quicklytries to catch what the teacher says in classmisses lots of important points that the teacher makesShe learns better thanTonyOur school lives are nearly ending.school lifeWhat do you think of your school life?What are important th
14、ings in your school life?Do you have any dreams now?What are they?Lets share!activities 三年的初中学习生活即将结束,在装载你收获的行囊三年的初中学习生活即将结束,在装载你收获的行囊成长记录袋中应该增成长记录袋中应该增添一份你自己满意的答案添一份你自己满意的答案,请以请以My school life 为题写一篇短文为题写一篇短文,记下你的校园记下你的校园生活,字数。生活,字数。写作指导:Before writing:(细读试题,认真审题细读试题,认真审题)写作指导:While writing:3 After
15、writing:()()拟提纲,分好段落拟提纲,分好段落()连句成篇()连句成篇 检查全文检查全文,注意逻辑和文采注意逻辑和文采 DonDon t give up,yout give up,you ll be successful.ll be successful.Homework:1.根据中考评分标准,四人一组互评作文根据中考评分标准,四人一组互评作文并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句词、好句。(记录在作文本)。(记录在作文本)2.再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾.Thank you附附作文评分标准(供参考):作文评分标准(供参考):第五档(很好):13131515分分 表达清楚,行文连贯,复合句运用自如正确,有文采,用上全部关键词,表达清楚,行文连贯,复合句运用自如正确,有文采,用上全部关键词,语言得体,基本无误或错误很少。语言得体,基本无误或错误很少。第四档(好):10101212分分 表达基本清楚,行文基本连贯,尚能运用复合句,语言有少量
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