高一【英语(师大版)】必修一 Unit 2 Sports and Fitness (7)课件.pptx

1、必修一 Unit 2 Sports and Fitness(7),高一年级 英语,A True StoryWriting Workshop,Teens Newspaper invites you to write a true story.The story would be something that either happened to you or someone who inspired you in the past.,Get Ready for Writing,An imaginary story,A true story,Get Ready for Writing,You ar

2、e going to write a true story to share with readers.Think about the questions before writing.Who is your story about?Why do you want to write this story?,Get Ready for Writing,Read for Writing,The Final Sprint,cyclo-cross race公路越野赛,a short period of fast running to the finishing line,Read for Writin

3、g,Read the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.Where and when did it happen?Who were the main characters?How did the story develop?What was the result?,Read for Writing,Read the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.1.Where and when did it happen?Para.1It happened in the Santa Barbar

4、a XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain with 300 metres from the finishing line.,Read for Writing,Read the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.2.Who were the main characters?Para.2Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro.,Read for Writing,3.How did the story develop?,Para.2+3,Read the story“The

5、 Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.,2,3,puncture1,Read for WritingPut the pictures into the correct order.,3.How did the story develop?,Esteban was in third place with only 300 metres to the finishing line.,Esteban got a puncture,threw his bike over his shoulder and raced towards the finishing line

6、.,Navarro caught up with him.Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.,climax,time order,Read for Writing,4.What was the result?,Esteban won the bronze model and tried to give his medal to Navarro.But Navarro refused.,Para.3,How do you understand sportsmanship?,Read the story again.Take

7、notes in the first column.,Read the story again.Take notes in the first column.,Read the story again.Take notes in the first column.,Read the story again.Take notes in the first column.,Read the story again.Take notes in the first column.,2,Development,3Climax,4,Ending,Write an Outline,5CommentsWhat

8、 opinion?,1Setting;CharactersWhere?When?Who?,How?,What conflict?,What,result?,key words or phrases,Writing a story is like climbing a mountain!,Take notes in“My Story”column.,Focus on Structure,Development,Climax,Ending,An Example,A final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series(铁人三项)in Mexico.Brownl

9、ee brothers:Alistair and Jonny.Setting;Characters,Jonny,in lead,with his brother Alistair in the third place.,Around the corner,Alistair saw Jonny was about to fall.,Should he help his brother or win alone?Alistair pushed,Jonny,which put Jonny the second place.Comments,Focus on Language,Sentence Str

10、ucture(2)1.It was the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain.Attribute,Focus on Language,Sentence Structure(2)2.Just a few seconds later,fourth-placed Navarro caught up with him.Adverbial(time),Focus on Language,Sentence Structure(2)3.Navarro let Esteban run ahead

11、of him.VerbObjectObject Complement,Focus on Language,Sentence Structure(2)4.After the race,Navarro said,“I didnt want to win that way.”Adverbial(time)Adverbial(way),Focus on Language,AttributeAdverbial(time,place,way,reason.)Verb+Object+Object Complement,Details,Writing Help,Writing a True StorySETT

12、ING&CHARACTERSCOMMENTSORDER(time)TRUEDETAILS,SCORES,Teens Newspaper invites you to write a true story.The story would be something that either happened to you or someone who inspired you in the past.,Writing Time,It was the final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico.With just 700 metres

13、 to go,Alistair Brownlee was in third place and his younger brother,Jonny,was in the lead.,JUST A BROTHERSetting+Characters,Alistair pushed himself towards the finishing line in the burning heat,but as he came round the corner,he saw his brother about to fall onto the track.Alistair had to choose br

14、otherly love,or a chance to win the race?,JUST A BROTHERDevelopment,For Alistair,the choice was clear.His brother was in trouble.He had to help.Alistair ran towards Jonny,caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.Alistair then pushed his brother over the line.,JUST A BROTHERClimax,T

15、he move put Jonny in second place and Alistair himself in third.It was an unexpected end to the race,but Alistair did not want to discuss it with the media.He just wanted to see his younger brother,who had been rushed to the medical area.,JUST A BROTHEREnding,Watched by millions,the ending to the ra

16、ce has divided opinions:should the brothers have been disqualified or highly praised for their actions?But for Alistair,at that moment,he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medal he was just a brother.,JUST A BROTHERComment,Summary,Writing a True StoryIdeas:Brainstorm ideas;Outlining:Use Mountain Diagram;Drafting:Use your outline and SCORES;Editing:Edit your story in pairs with Peer Edition Sheet.,Finish your writing draft;Edit your story in pairs.(Peer Editing Sheet,P90.),Homework,Thank you!