1、第5句 进一步详细阐述理由,拓展第6句 因此,观点成立第三段举例子第7句 第二论据,中心句第8句 举例,典型个例或排比例证第9句 例证解释阐明第四段让步第10句 讨论反方观点第11句 反方论据第12句 驳斥反方或某些批准反方第五段结论第13句 重申写作观点第14句 不能忽视反方观点第15句 思想立意提高15句逻辑框架初级版本15句雅思写作初级版第1句 Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about 引入背景第2句 However,whether is a controversial issue.交代辩论话题第3句 My v
2、iew is that 表达写作观点第4句 First,it is obvious that 第一论据,中心句第5句 (This is because) 进一步详细阐述理由,拓展第6句 So,因此,观点成立第7句 Moreover,第二论据,中心句第8句 For example,举例,典型个例或排比例证第9句 例证解释阐明第10句 That is not to say that not 讨论反方观点第11句 Of course,反方论据第12句 But 驳斥反方或某些批准反方观点第13句 In sum,重申写作观点第14句 Meanwhile,不能忽视反方观点第15句 By doing so
3、we can make sure that 思想立意提高Writing Task 2Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of whether the course is
4、 useful to an employer.What,in your opinion,should be the main function of a university?第1句:背景简介Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education.当前,越来越多人关怀大学教诲目。Explanation:Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that
5、Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that university education serves.Nowadays,more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities.Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society.如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容,就直接表达观点,两句
6、话写完首段。I agree with the view thatReasons are as follows.我赞同观点是因素如下。第2句:A. “与否应当”However,whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue.但是,大学与否应当重要提供应学生工作有关技能是一种饱受争议话题。B. “是这样还是应当那样”However,whether universities should mainly provide job-related skil
7、ls or pure knowledge to graduates has caused a heated debate.但是,大学是应当重要提供应学生工作有关技能还是纯粹知识导致了激烈争议。However,what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to graduates is a controversial issue.但是,大学应当重要提供应学生哪一种知识技能是一种饱受争议话题。C. 某些人以为;另某些人以为Some people state that;others believe thatS
8、ome people state that universities should focus on giving access to knowledge;others believe that the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates.某些人以为大学应关注提供知识;另某些人以为工作所需技能对大学毕业生更重要。第3句:交代你自己写作观点In my view,,My view is that(表语从句)I agree with the view that
9、 (同位语从句),for the following reasons.My view is that job-related knowledge and skills should be the main focus of universities.I mainly agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons.本段中心句这一段写作目是以理服人。用it is clear that这个主语从句写出你以为最重要、最明显论据。Firstly,it is obvious that for most students,the pu
10、rpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become qualified employees in the job market in the future.一方面,很显然对大某些学生来说上大学目是学习实用知识技能,这些技能能让她们在将来职场中成为合格雇员。Firstly,it is clear/obvious/true thatFirstly,there is no doubt thatOne reason for
11、 this is that 对中心句进行拓展、解释、阐明。A. This is because 这是由于(想上一句话因素)This is because most of them,after graduation,will enter the workplace,earn a living,and support their own families.这是由于大某些学生毕业之后会进入职场,挣钱谋生,建立家庭。B. This means that这意味着(想上一句话成果)This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the mo
12、st welcomed subjects which the majority of students will select.这意味着那些专注于使用知识课程会成为大多数学生选取热门专业。C. If not (反正中心句)If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills,most graduates will not be able to find satisfactory positions in the workplace,leading to a higher unemployment rate.如果大学不注重这种技能培
13、养,大某些学生将会很难再职场上找到工作,导致社会失业率增高。可用下面短语拓展解释中心句:In other words,换句话说More specifically,详细来说More precisely,精确点说第3句重申写作观点。其实是对第一段最后一句话,也就是你写作观点进行改写表达。So universities,as service providers,have to give top priority to these customers real needs.推荐一种固定句型来写本句,让写作更简化:Therefore,it is necessary/crucial/important f
14、or sb. to do sth.Therefore,it is crucial for universities to give top priority to the students real needs.第1句首句仍是该段中心句,是你绞尽脑汁想出第二个因素论据。Moreover,focusing on the job-related skills can benefit the university itself.此外,关注工作有关技能能使大学自身受益。可选用Moreover,In addition,Besides等词开始。第2句该段第2句就是举例。For example,the sci-fi blockbuster “Avatar” has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive interest in 3D technology.例如,科幻大片
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