1、博览群书;学习技能 (或自拟一点)生活健康饮食;坚持锻炼 (或自拟一点)其它热爱公益;亲近自然 (或自拟一点)注意:1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,First, I
2、d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the m
3、ost important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can
4、make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming
5、 holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如Id like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, Id like to choose several good
6、 books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使短文层次清晰,又丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要
7、点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽3.景点:山和古村落:4.文化:茶、黄梅戏5.建议提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera注意:1.词数80-1002.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数Dear DaveI know that you are inter
8、ested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in
9、 the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such
10、 as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, dont forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down!Welcome to Anhui! Im looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】这篇
11、作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信,邀请他来你的家乡安徽一游,题目中列出了文章的提纲,审题可知,短文应从以下几个内容叙述:首先介绍家乡的位置;然后介绍来这里最好的时候;接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化,并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容,分清主次,并注意上下文的连贯。另外,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构,易于掌握,不容易出错。但为提升文章档次,也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句,以及使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的
12、作文,短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游,并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有内容,并对细节进行补充和修饰,使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请,然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等,并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰,层次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述,注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句,还有一些好的句型,如The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down!、Im looking forward to seeing you he
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