1、增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1. It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident
2、 and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, The classroom is a place for learning and that include leanin
3、g from textbooks, and mistake as well. Immediate, I raised my hand.2.When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my pa
4、rents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful l
5、ater in my life.3. During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate h
6、ouse to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.4
7、.The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip a
8、broad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.5. Organic foods are usually more expensive, makes people unwilling to sp
9、end the extra money. Besides, they do have certain advantages. To begin with, farmers doesnt use harmful chemicals on organically grown foods. As matter of fact, this is one of the reasons that organic foods are more expensive. Without such chemicals, they need more care to stay health.Organically g
10、rown foods also had more nutrition than regular ones because the soil is careful done in a higher standard. According to study, organically grown foods provide with 21.1 percent more irons and 27 percent more vitamin C than regular ones on the average.6. Yesterday I went to see a film with my best f
11、riend Kate. We set off at 1:30 in the afternoon and plan to arrive at the cinema before 2:30 so that we could watch the 3:15 show. The traffic was terrible bad. That made it even worse was that our bus broke up on the way. They stopped a taxi but rushed to the show. “Two ticket for 3:15,” Kate said,
12、 put the money on the counter. The film started at the moment we sat down in the cinema. It was an exciting film and we had great time yesterday afternoon.7.Dear John, Im so pleased to receive your email.I feel exciting to know you dream becoming a professional football player.I am looking forward t
13、o see an international football star,John.Im surely you will succeed. As for me,teaching was my dream job.The reason for this is why I would like to share my knowledges with my students and help them solve problems.Besides,staying with students helps to keep me young.To realize my dream,I have to de
14、vote me to my study and enter an normal university. What will you do for your dream and who is your most favorite football player? Yours,7. While reading the newspaper two months ago, I was learned there was an organization naming Sole4Souls. One of the aims of this organization is to collect shoe t
15、o help those in need. My interest for shoes started when I learned there were children all over the world which couldnt attend school because they didnt have shoes. I learned that the pair of shoes could actual change someones life forever. However, I began to collect shoes with some of my friends. Believe it or not, we had collected more than 500 pairs of shoes so far. Im excited to be making differe
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