专题08 祝贺信冲刺浙江高考英语应用文写作Word文档下载推荐.docx

1、乐于助人、孝敬父母、品学兼优等）；3.表达你要向古丽学习的意愿和美好祝福。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Guli，讲解：这是一封典型的祝贺信，内容也比较完整，不需要我们进行增加。但是细节的把握关乎我们的得分高低。首先我们可以分三段进行写作：第一段，写明写信目的，表明对古丽的祝贺之情；第二段，描述先进事迹，这部分中的“乐于助人”，“孝敬父母”和“品学兼优”需要我们具体进行写明。其次再说明你要向她学习的意愿；第三段，再次表达祝贺。写作要点：开头句： I have learnt with delight that you have been chosen a

2、s “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently.I am delighted that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently.I am glad to be informed that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently.文章主体：要点一： Id like to express my sincere congratulations on your success. You

3、cant imagine how excited I was when I heard the news.要点二： You are such an extraordinary example for us. You are often seen helping those in trouble or in need. At home, you insist on helping your parents look after your disabled brother without any complaint.要点三：Meanwhile, you are always one of the

4、top students at school. As a result, it came as no surprise to me that you got this honor.结尾句：Your success has inspired me greatly and I sincerely hope you will gain further success in the future.参考范文：Dear Guli,I have learned with delight that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang”

5、recently. Id like to offer my sincere congratulations on your success! You dont know how excited I was when I heard the news.You are such an extraordinary example for us. You are often seen helping those in trouble or in need. At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled

6、 brother without any complaint. Meanwhile, you are always among the top students at school. Therefore, it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.Your success has greatly encouraged me and I hope that you will achieve further success in the future.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua写此类信件要点总结：1.仔细审题，

7、需要把题目中要点简单陈述；2.三段式书写，第二段往往是关键部分；3.句子结构不要重复，要有多样性；4.注意字数，不要过多；5.正式考试中要注意书写，建议字体清晰、间距相同；6.信件类必须有Dear*，和落款Yours，*课堂练习一（浙江新高考考前冲刺卷一）假如你是李华,你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖.请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺.1.祝贺他获奖;2.肯定他付出的努力;3.询问何时方便,在网上切磋棋艺.1.词数80左右;参考词汇:中国象棋网络挑战赛the Chinese Chess Network ChallengeDear Peter，_提示：本篇书面

8、表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖，请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺：祝贺他获奖，肯定他付出的努力，询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。人称应为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the first prize（第一名），keep on practicing（一直训练），Chinese chess contests（中国象棋比赛），the online competition（网上竞赛），play Chinese chess with you（与

9、你切磋棋艺）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。参考范文（112）：Dear Peter,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how happy I

10、am at your success.“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, youve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you su

11、cceeded in winning the online competition!So Im so delighted that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.Congratulations again!课堂练习二假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Steve被当地一所孔子学院录取，即将入学，不知道如何作学业方面的准备。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 你的建议；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔子学院the Confucius InstituteDear Steve，_