1、1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。佳作欣赏Dear Freddy,Im glad to tell you that Justin Bieber,my favorite singer,will come to our city to perform next month.Im so pleased at the news that I decide to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends recently.All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much.
2、His songs make us feel the true love.We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him.But we dont know what we should do,and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans.Could you give us some advice?Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua名师点睛本文要
3、点齐全、逻辑清晰。第一段交代写作内容:Justin Bieber下个月将来演出;第二段作者提出了计划以及对Justin Bieber及其歌曲的看法并提出了要求;第三段提出期望。 行文中作者正确熟练地运用了结果状语从句(Im so pleased at the news that I decide to form a Justin Bieber fan club.)、宾语从句(we dont know what we should do.)、祈使句以及be pleased at,pick up,look forward to等一些高级词汇,增强了文章的可读性。A写作必记单词1pretend vt
4、.假装;假扮(1)He would ask who we were and pretend not to know(not,know) us.(2016浙江)(2)He pretended to have known(know) the answer to the problem already.(3)When his mother came in,he pretended to be studying(study)2attach vt.& vi.系上;缚上;附加;连接(1)attach.to认为有(重要性、意义);附上;attach importance/significance to.重视
5、;认为重要/有意义be attached to被连接到;爱慕;附属于(2)He is so attached to the network games that he often plays truant(逃课)So attached to the network games,he often plays truant.(用过去分词短语作状语改写)Attaching himself to the network games so much,he often plays truant.(用现在分词作状语改写)So attached to the network games is he that
6、he often plays truant.(用倒装句改写)3form vt.(使)组成;形成;构成(1)in the form of以形式take the form of采取的形式(2)If they often cheat in the exams,they will form a bad habit(养成坏习惯),which will have a bad effect on their life.(2015广东)4earn vt.赚;挣得;获得earn ones/a living谋生5perform vt.& vi.表演;履行;执行(1)performance n表演;演奏(2)Aft
7、er the operation was performed,the doctor had a rest.With the operation performed,the doctor had a rest.(用with复合结构改写)The operation performed,the doctor had a rest.(用独立主格结构改写)6familiar adj.熟悉的;常见的;亲近的She is familiar with at least five foreign languages,but it so happens that this language isnt famili
8、ar to her.(填介词)7sensitive adj.敏感的;易受伤害的;灵敏的(1)sensible adj.明智的;意识到的sense n感觉;v.意识;领会(2)be sensible of意识到;认识到(3)I learned that a fish is a coldblooded animal and therefore is very sensitive to(对敏感) water temperature.(20158painful adj.痛苦的;疼痛的(1)pain n& v痛苦(2)take pains to do.费心做No pain,no gain.不劳无获。用法
9、点拨(1)pain作“痛”“疼痛”解时,可数或不可数均可以,所以根据情况可用pain,a pain,pains。(2)pain作“努力”“辛苦”解时,总是用复数形式;若用作主语,谓语动词用复数。B阅读识记单词9roll vt.& vi.滚动;(使)摇摆;n.摇晃;卷;卷形物;面包圈10folk adj.民间的;n.人们folk表示“人们”时,它与people (人们),police (警察)等一样,是一个永远表示复数意义的名词,但有所不同的是,folk可后加词尾s。11musician n音乐家music n音乐musical adj.音乐的;配乐的12passerby n过路人;行人pass
10、ersby n行人(复数)13extra adj.额外的;外加的14instrument n工具;器械;乐器15studio n工作室;演播室16millionaire n百万富翁;富豪17actor n男演员;行动者actress n女演员18broadcast vi.& vt.& n广播;播放19humorous adj.幽默的;诙谐的humour n幽默20attractive adj.吸引人的;有吸引力的(1)attract v吸引;有吸引力attraction n吸引;吸引力(2)attract sb.to.把某人吸引到(to为介词)21dip vt.浸;蘸22confident a
11、dj.自信的;确信的(1)confidence n信心(2)have confidence in对有信心(3)He was confident that he would succeed.(同义句转换)He was confident of succeeding/success.23brief adj.简短的;简要的;n.摘要;大纲(1)briefly adv.简短地(2)in brief 简言之24afterwards adv.然后;后来25invitation n邀请;招待invite v邀请;inviting adj.吸引人的,诱人的1dream of梦见;梦想;设想2to be hon
12、est说实在地;实话说3in cash用现金;有现钱4play jokes on戏弄5rely on依赖;依靠You may rely on his coming on time.You may rely on him to come on time.(用不定式改写)You may rely on it that he will come on time.(用含有it作形式宾语的复合句改写)6or so大约 用法点拨此短语常常置于数词之后。7break up打碎;分裂;解体,解散;分手;拆开;结束写出下列句子中break up的汉语意思(1)Norton Sound was covered w
13、ith ice,which could sometimes break up without warning.(2016北京)打碎,破碎(2)My girlfriend has broken up with me.分手;绝交(3)Sentences can be broken up into clauses.拆开(4)They decided to break up the partnership.结束(5)Police were called in to break up the meeting.解散,驱散8in addition另外;也(1)in addition to除之外(2)In a
14、ddition,I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.此外,我可以看到各种各样的美丽的鸟。(2016四川)(3)Charlotte found herself operating on damaged limbs and setting broken bones,in addition to delivering(deliver) all the babies in the area.(2014山东)9sort out分类10above all最重要;首先after all毕竟;终究all in all整体说来;总而言之first of all第一;in all全部;总共at all(否定句)一点也不;
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