英语雅思大作文PPT格式课件下载.ppt

1、IELTS,大作文写作手法IDA,IELTS,IELTS,目录,Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria,Task Response（i.e.how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task;#the extent to which the candidates ideas are relevant,developed and supported;#the extent to which the candidates p

2、osition is clear and effective）,Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria,Coherence连贯性 and Cohesion衔接（i.e.how well the information and ideas are organised and presented i.e.paragraphing;#how well the information is linked）,Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria,Lexic

3、al Resource词汇资源（i.e.the range of vocabulary used,how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task）,Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria,Grammatical Range and Accuracy（i.e.the range of structures used,how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for th

4、e task）,段落的组织,250字，4段至5段话，4段更容易操作第一段：#2至4句第二段：#4至6句第三段：#4至6句第四段：#2至4句Introduction:#state your viewBody:#support your view with reasons,arguments,examplesConclusion:#restate your view主体段落：#Topic sentence+supporting sentences,Argumentative devices-Ways to develop a paragraph（论证方法）,exemplification（举例说明

5、），explanation（解释说明），cause and effect（因果论证），comparison and contrast（比较与对比）concession and refutation（让步与反驳），classification（分类）,Exemplification,Example:#a specific fact,idea,person,or thing that is used to explain or support a general idea,or to show what is typical of a larger group举例相关关联词：#For exampl

6、eFor instanceTake（Consider）as an exampleA case in pointsuch asincluding,Some people think that animals should be treated as friends.Yet others only consider animals as sources of food and clothing.To what extent do you agree or disagree?#,Sample AnswerThere is a growing tendency nowadays for some pe

7、ople to treat animals as living meat and walking fur.This leads to the cruel slaughter of animals all over the world every year.Yet,in my opinion,instead of killing animals,human beings should treat them as their friends.It is an undeniable fact that animals play a vital role in maintaining the subt

8、le balance of the earths ecological system.The lack of this essential part will bring about the destruction of the whole world.Therefore,to some extent,killing animals is equal to digging our own graves.For thousands of years,many animals have given loyal service to humans.Pigeons convey messages in

9、 wartime,and dogs help to detect crime.Even pigs,which many people think are the most stupid animals,are used in the battle against drugs.There is no doubt that our lives would be far less convenient without a little help from our animal friends.Animals also help humans in a spiritual way.There is n

10、othing better than keeping a cat or a dog if you want your kids to be more independent and responsible.It is also noted that senior citizens live longer if they keep pets after their retirement.To sum up,animals are human beings friends.Those who regard animals as merely a source of food and clothin

11、g should at least bear one thing in mind:#Being kind to animals is being kind to ourselves.Therefore,for our own future benefit,please treat animals with love and care.,Topic sentence:#A growing number of environmental problems are no longer confined to a certain region or country.For example,oil sp

12、ills can pollute international waters and the loss of the ozone layer may lead to the melting of ice caps and glaciers,which in turn,may raise sea levels worldwide.,练习,Topic sentence:#The advertisements on TV,newspaper and other kinds of media may confuse consumers and make them rush to purchase pro

13、ducts which they dont really need.Take the cell phone for example.Its functions and practical use are often exaggerated in advertisements.Whats more,the advertisements even create a fashionable atmosphere for cell phones which appeals to young people to change their phones continuously while ignorin

14、g the basic service of cell phones is just to make a phone call.,Explanation,解释：#It meansThat is to sayIn other wordsTo put it another wayBy that I mean,I believe the traditional family,with both parents providing emotional support and role-models for their children,is the most satisfactory way of b

15、ringing up children.Education after birth plays a significant role in ones development.Education,which helps children develop their thinking and accumulate their knowledge,is a deciding factor of ones success.For example,a high-school level person commonly may not succeed to the extent of a person w

16、ho has received a university education.This is not only because of the greater breadth of knowledge acquired,but also due to a more critical and focused way of thinking that is imparted and refined during ones senior education.I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness.By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives（the welfare of our families,the quality of our relationships,making other people happy,etc.）and what is n