届中考英语二轮复习《第12讲书面表达专题》讲义Word文档格式.docx

1、20152014201320122011文体记叙文话题作文词数80词左右话题The biggest personal change Ive ever made I want to have _ My special _ What makes me a good friend?了解历史的方式：1、看历史剧2、读史书 Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. 书面表达写作步骤：一、审 审题材、体裁 二、理 理要点 理结构 三、定 ;定人称 定顺序 定时态 四、查 查单词拼写 查主谓一致 查固定搭配 查句型句式

2、忌：汉语式思维 关键：理结构（列提纲）首段开门见山，落笔点题中间段根据要点要求，按一定的线索逐次展开尾段回应主题，首尾呼应，画龙点睛满分作文的标准：要点全 （不能丢落要点） 要发挥 （不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译） 句式丰 （表达不能过于单一） 结构清 （表达有层次，会用关联词，注意首尾上下呼应） 书写美 （字迹工整） 无错误 （杜绝任何小错） 过渡词：1. 并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, not only. but also, neither.nor., both.and 2. 转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however, on the contrary, alt

3、hough + clause, despite / in spite of + n./doing 3. 时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, next, and then, finally, in the end, after, before, after a few days, a last 4. 空间关系的过渡词：near （to）, far （from）, in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right 5. 比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just lik

4、e, just as 6. 对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of 7. 递进关系的过渡词：also, and, then, too, in addition, whats more, whats worse, especially, besides, moreover, furthermore, not only but also, at the same time 8. 因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, so, therefore 9. 解释说明的过渡词：for exam

5、ple, in fact, in this case, for, actually. 10. 强调的过渡词：in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11. 目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose 12. 列举的过渡词：for example, such as 13. 总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally 一、书面表达四步法 请以 “My _” 为题写一篇英语短文，描述一个你熟悉的人。要求：1. 先将题目补

6、充完整；2. 从外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等方面进行描述；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；4. 不少于70词。My _半命题作文；写你熟悉的人；外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等；禁止真实校名、人名；词数要求 理_ 外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等 理_ 总 My father is strict with me in my study, but I love him. 分 （1） English teacher; tall; thin; strict; kind （2） on workdays; work; from morning to night; run; in the m

7、orning （3） on weekends; free; Saturday morning; take me out; have a walk; Saturday afternoon; help; homework; Sunday afternoon; go fishing with his friends 总 This is my father. I love him. 三、定 定_ 第三人称：my father/he 定_ 部分地方考虑时间先后顺序 定_ 一般现在时 查_ _ 例文赏析（一）My Father My father is strict with me in my study

8、, but I love him. He is an English teacher in Red Star Middle School. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He is strict but kind. On workdays, he is very busy working from morning to night. He likes getting up early and running in the morning. On weekends, he is usually free. So on Saturday mo

9、rning, hed like to take me out and have a walk. On Saturday afternoon, he often helps me with my homework. Sometimes on Sunday afternoon, he goes fishing with his good friends. This is my father. I love him. 例文赏析（二）My father is a doctor who works really hard. He has devoted himself to his career for

10、 he gets up very early and gets back home late. What he thinks about all day long is the patients and how he can release the pains of his patients. And he will do whatever he can to help his patients. In his free time, he likes reading books and often takes notes on important points. Whats more, he

11、published a book. Besides reading, he likes listening to music to get relaxed. That is my father. I love him and Im proud of him. 二、写作训练营A 你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special _”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。1. 在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如grandma, teacher或friend等；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。My special _ 一、审：审题二、理 理要点 _ 理结构 _