1、【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组,以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。2. My Days of the weekIm a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oclock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school a
2、t seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依
3、据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。3. My Favourite FoodDo you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh
4、, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.How about you? Whats your favourite food?My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。4. I can help
5、do houseworkI am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. Im helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者
6、主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样会避免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。5. In The KitchenThis is the kitchen of my family. Its big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many
7、 things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, theyre strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。小朋友们,可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。6. My VillageMy village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the villag
8、e. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。4请注意书写呀,么么哒
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