江阴市新桥中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析Word下载.docx

1、 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesnt talk too mu

2、ch, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. F

3、ew students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a s

4、tudent as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯

5、和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三

6、人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he

7、is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。2（江苏中考模拟）书面表达近日，你校迎来一批来自英国的交流生，学校组织学生向他们介绍中国的传统文化。请你根据表格信息写一篇题为Chinese Tea的英语短文，向英国交流生介绍中国的茶文化。历史历史悠久，享誉世界;种类种类多样，各具特色;习俗以茶会友，馈

8、赠亲朋;功效有益健康，提神醒脑;影响（自拟两点）。注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2.词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. Therere many kinds of tea in China. Each of

9、them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking tea.People often treat friends with tea.They often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a gift.Drinking tea is good for peoples health.A cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but als

10、o builds a bridge between the East and the West.这是一篇话题作文，题目是Chinese Tea。本文人称主要是第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，表格信息提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，字数90词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：茶是中国文化的重要组成部分。它历史悠久，享誉世界。中国有很多种茶。它们中的每一个都有自己的特点。大多数中国人喜欢喝茶。人们经常用茶来招

11、待朋友。他们经常给朋友和亲戚买茶作为礼物。喝茶有益于人们的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不仅有助于外国人了解中国，而且能在东西方之间架起一座桥梁。书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六

12、步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。3（山东中考模拟） 写作假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 st

13、udents or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。2. 陈述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2条建议。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My ide

14、a is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in scho

15、ol have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friend