人教新目标八年级英语上册作文思路点拨Word下载.docx

1、Weather: sunnyActivities: go boating, taste delicious foodWho: my parentsFeelings: great, excited【思路点拨】1. 与假期有关的日记要使用一般过去时态，并注意日记格式；2. 开头可以写明去哪里旅行，天气情况如何；3. 中间详细讲述旅行经历，做了哪些事，可以从时间顺序着手；4. 结尾总结自己的假期，表达自己的心情和感受。【佳句荟萃或句型框架】1. We went on vacation with.2. How beautiful it is!3. We had visited.4. First, we

2、 visited.5. I hope to go there again.6. It was sunny today.7. I went to Hangzhou for a trip by car.8. It is the capital of Zhejiang Province.9. First, we visited the West Lake.10. I learned a lot about the lake.11. The food there tasted so delicious.12. I really had a great time.13. I felt tired but

3、 happy.14. I hope to go there again.【写作演练】_（二）以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇介绍如何保持健康的英语短文。本文属于说明文，思路如下：1开头点明保持健康的重要性；2详细描述如何保持健康1. 连接词：firstly, secondly, thirdly, .2. Its important to keep healthy.Drinking milk is good for us.All in all, whats more, .3. As we all know, .4. Its very important to keep h

4、ealthy.5. Do you know how to keep healthy?6. It gives us energy for the morning.7. We should eat more fruit and vegetables.8. Drinking milk is also good for our health.9. Secondly, its necessary for us to take exercise.10. What11. All in all, .12. Nothing is difficult.13. If we put our heart in it,

5、.（三）以“Weekend or not？”为题写一篇英语短文。1. 阐明现下的学生周末状况，孩子们周末大多数都奔波于各种辅导班，没有时间做自己喜欢的事；2. 对这种现象加以分析，表达观点父母让孩子充分利用时间学习，孩子的压力很大；3. 表达希望让孩子们自由选择，享受周末。1. as a result, whats more, as much as possible, make full use of.sadj.（for sb.）to do sth.3. Nowadays, many students have to take lots of afterschool classes.4. Th

6、ey have little time for their hobbies.5. . such as basketball, swimming and so on.6. Children are under much pressure.7. as much as possible8. Its necessary for kids to spend their free time.9. As a result, .10. I do hope all the children can have the freedom to do what they like to do.11. In my opi

7、nion, .12. It makes them relaxed.（四）请以“My Life in Ten Years”为题，根据提示写一篇作文。围绕工作、工作地点、业余时光等展开。1. 这是个预测未来的话题，要对自己未来的工作、生活环境、业余活动进行大胆想象，合理对自己的梦想进行描述；2. 可以采用“先总说，再分说”的方式，对未来作详细的设想，最后再补充说明自己为了实现这一梦想采取的行动；3. 把握好时态will be, be going to 的用法。1. be different from.2. Im going to be.3. I think I will.4. If I try m

8、y best, Im sure.5. I will. because.6. My life will be different from now in ten years.7. I will be a/an . in 10 years.8. I want to build/.9. I will live in Shanghai because there will be more chances to find a good job.10. In the future, I will travel around the world.11. On weekends, I will play wi

9、th my friends.12. I think I should study hard now.13. If I try my best, Im sure my dream will come true.（五）以“Visiting the Old Peoples Home”为题，写一篇关于参加一次公益活动的经历。1. 开头总述，引出下文参加一次公益活动的经历；2. 描述活动的具体经过；3. 评价本次活动的意义。1. do some cleaning, such as, take an active part2. Helping others is helping ourselves.3. Last weekend, I visited an old peoples home with my classmates.4. We are very helpful and kind.5. Students are ready to help others.6. We did