高中英语读后续写公开课课件-共18张PPTPPT文档格式.pptx

1、,【2018浙江高考真题】It was summer,and mydadwanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided totake me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of NewMexico.We reachedAlbuquerque in the late afternoon.UnclePaul,my dadsfriend,pickedus up from the airport

2、anddrove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cookedus a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dadand I spent the night in the guestroom of thefarm houselistening to the frogs and water rolling downtherivernearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have bre

3、akfast.“The daystarts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tinafeedthe chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take thesheepout tograze（吃草）.I was impressed to seemy dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They lookedreally cool.In the afternoon,I asked UnclePaul if I could

4、take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long asmy dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I puton our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont belatefor supper,”Uncle Paulcried,“and keep to thetrackso that you dontget los

5、t!”“OK!”mydadcried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out ofsight.It was so peacefulandquiet and the colors of the brownrocks,the deep green pinetrees,and the late afternoon sunmixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautifulwoven（编织的）blanket spread out uponthe ground just

6、 for us.【答题时需注意】1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._,要续写的两个段落的第一句（已给出）,Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Para

7、graph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was gettingdark,读后续写考查什么？,核心素养：语言能力：阅读和写作思维品质：想象能力和创新精神具体说来，应该是这四个方面把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力语言运用的准确性和丰富性对语篇结构的把控能力创造新思维能力,评分标准,得分要素：与所给短文及段落开头与的衔接程度内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性上下文的连贯性扣分标准：总分25分，按五个档次给分根据内容及语言初步定档词数少于130的，扣2分单词拼写及标点符号使用情况，视其对交际的影响程度酌情处理书写较差

8、以至于影响交际，可酌情降低评分档次,评分细则,与原文剧情融洽，逻辑合理,续写内容丰富有看点，用了关键词,语法结构和词汇多样准确,语句间衔接自然，结构紧凑,解题思路,Step 1 精读文章，搞清思路,It was summer,and mydadwanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided totake me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of NewMexico.We reachedA

9、lbuquerque in the late afternoon.UnclePaul,my dadsfriend,pickedus up from the airport anddrove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cookedus a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dadand I spent the night in the guestroom of thefarm houselistening to the frogs and water

10、rolling downtherivernearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The daystarts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tinafeedthe chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take thesheepout tograze（吃草）.I was impressed to seemy dad and Uncle Pa

11、ul riding horses.They lookedreally cool.In the afternoon,I asked UnclePaul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long asmy dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I puton our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountain

12、s.“Dont belatefor supper,”Uncle Paulcried,“and keep to thetrackso that you dontget lost!”mydadcried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out ofsight.It was so peacefulandquiet and the colors of the brownrocks,the deep green pinetrees,and the late afternoon sunmixed to create a magic

13、 scene.It looked like a beautifulwoven（编织的）blanket spread out uponthe ground just for us.,暑假父亲带我去西部叔叔的农场度假,我们在农场听着蛙鸣和河水声入睡,早上我帮忙喂鸡，父亲和叔叔骑马放羊,我很羡慕，于是和父亲去骑马,他们叮嘱晚餐别迟到，沿着路走能不迷路,我们骑马就走远了，风景很美,关于诚信国旗下发言稿范文三篇篇一老师们、同学们:早上好!今天,我国旗下讲话的内容是做个诚实守信的人。诚,诚实,就是忠诚正直,言行一致,表里如一。信,守信,就是遵守诺言、不虚伪欺诈。言必信,行必果、一言既出,驷马难追这些流传了

14、千百年的古话,都形象地表达了华民族诚实守信的品质。在国几千年的文明史,人们不但为诚实守信的美德大唱颂歌,而且努力地身体力行。每个同学都听过狼来了的故事。故事的那个孩子就是因为骗人,失去了别人对他的信任,结果被狼吃掉了。8岁的列宁打碎了姑妈家的花瓶,当时因为害怕没有承认错误。事后他用书信的方式向姑妈道歉,揭穿自己的谎言,赢得了姑妈的原谅和信任。也正因为他具备了这种品质而受到了人民的信任。同样是两个孩子,前者因为一时贪玩,用谎话出卖了自己,让自己成了恶狼的美餐。后者却因为自己的小过失而坐立不安,设法去弥补,最后赢得了别人的信任。同学们,你在日常学习生活真的讲诚信了吗?想一想当你在地板上捡到东西,你

15、会自觉归还失主或交给老师吗?当你从图书角里借书以后能归还原处吗?当你答应别人的事你努力做到了吗?这些看起来是一件件小事,但诚信就在这点点滴滴。其实,讲诚,feedthe chickens,River,sheep,track,UnclePaul,farm house,Dont be late for supper!,My dad,剧情需要前后照应形成闭环，否则很难用上关键词。可遵循时间顺序，地点顺序，逻辑顺序等设计剧情。不建议的剧情：追兔子迷路，进入迷宫发现宝藏（扯太远了回不来）追兔子迷路，森林里乱窜结果碰到了家或熟人或救援队，安全返回（强行结尾，无逻辑）追兔子迷路，晚上点燃火柴，烛光中看到了温

16、暖的家（悲剧结尾）,Step 2 回扣原文，设计剧情,Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._,Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._,Step 3 拟写草稿，用上关键词,怎样让记叙文生动起来呢？动作描写2-5个环境描写1-2个对话1-2个表情或心理1-2个已给提示词汇：dad，Uncle Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight话题激活词汇：情感：panic，relief，nervous，worried动作：run，cry，think to oneself环境：scenery，mountain，range，v